Hola guys! This chapter would have been up yesterday but I was messing around and accidentally deleted the entire chapter.

Annabeth Jackson: I agree there son was so ugly and extremely cruel!

All rights go to Veronica Roth!

Tris POV

Lynn. Finally a friend to talk to! "Hey Lynn, What's up!" I shout back. She smiles and runs all the way up to me. "No school today!" She screams. I am shocked and... Excited!? "What, Why, Huh! It's like the second day of school! I scream. "Yeah I know but let me tell. You the story. So me and Shaunna had walked into school like ten minutes ago and I was trying to get her attention cause she had to pick up Hector this afternoon. Then some Candor High kid slammed the doors shut and all the lights went off. Surprisingly Shaunna pulled me close to her and made sure no one touched me, which was weird cause she is usually never talking to me. Then we heard feet shuffling and some one screamed and there was a loud thud. The lights turned back on Edward, the star hockey player that whipped Candor High, was lying on the ground with a butter knife stuck in his eye!" She speaks so quickly it's hard to understand what she is saying. Though I knew exactly what she had said. This is scary what if the kid is still here? What if Caleb is his next victim? What if Lynn is his next victim? What if I'm his next victim? I don't want to scare Lynn with my thoughts so I say something incredibly stupid, "Well are we leaving this hell hole or not." Stupid, stupid, stupid but the next thing I know Lynn is dragging me out of the school.

We we sprint back to my house and slam the door open like I am a superhero saving someone from something. Caleb and a group of startled nerds look up. Lynn sees their faces and she cracks laughing. Eventually I join her and soon the hole room is filled with sound of laughter. Soon we hear someone clear their throat. We all look up and see Natalie looking down at us like she caught us stealing cookies. She has obviously met Caleb's friends before because they greet her with hello Natalie or . "Tris who is this? She asks kindly. "Natalie this is Lynn my friend," I say hoping she will like Lynn. She smiles warmly at Lynn. "Well hello Lynn I am Natalie Tris' mum nice to meet," she pauses to shake Lynn's hand then says, "Tris you know you can call me Mum." I smile at her and nod my head. Lynn and I walk hand in hand up the stairs and Mum shouts," Tris be careful no slip ups!"

Lynn looks confused and I just shrug but I know what she means and I really don't want to tell Lynn... Yet. We reach my room and I drop my bag on the ground and flop down on the bed. Moments later I am joined by Lynn. I turn and look at her and smile she looks at me and smiles back. "So how about we do all of our Homework then go shopping?" She asks. "Cool let's get started," I say. We stand up and grab our bags, then take all of our books out and spread them across the floor. I grab my phone and plug it into a speaker I found. I crank up the song Titanium by David Guetta. Lynn and I lay on the ground and take out our Homework and get started. After two and a half hours later we are finished our homework and signed our artwork.

Just as we are finished signing our artwork Caleb peeps his head through the door. I look at him and he smiles. "Hey I am guessing you are going shopping so maybe you could pick up your desk and grab some stuff for it. Anyway here are some keys for the car we got you," he says throwing me the keys. When I see the keys I am so excited. Just before he closes the door I shout, "Thankyou Caleb!" The door shuts and I hear a muffled laugh. I look at Lynn and she points too our outfits. I understand. We can not wear this to the shops we would look like hippies.

We enter the closet and start to pick our outfits. I change into a black and white polka dot crop top with tight black skinny jeans and white platform stilettos. I change my lip balm to blood red lipstick. Lynn was wearing a baggy green shirt and loose, ripped jeans. Now she is wearing a red singlet with a black broken arrow pattern and she tucked her shirt into blue high wasted shorts. She put on a pair of red platform stilettos and the same lipstick. We each grab a bag I grab a black leather bag and put my phone and money in it. Lynn grabs a white fluffy bag and puts her money and phone in there. We nod and strut out of my room. We walk downstairs and walk past the group where they are playing an intense game of canasta.

"Hey Caleb where do I pick up the desk?" I ask. "Well next to a shoe shop called shoes galore there is a shop on the left called wood works where we bought the desk but they had to put it on hold so they could build it. Don't worry it is already paid for too," he says consent rating on canasta. "Thanks Caleb," I shout exiting the house and entering the garage. Lynn and I are astonished at all these cars I can't wait to find out which one is mine. I take out the keys and click the unlock button. The car at the very end blinks it's lights. A sleek cherry red convertible with white racing stripes on the left side of the car covering the hood and the boot and it has Tris written in swirly twirly black letters.

I instantly jump in the car and start it. A few seconds later I am joined by Lynn who pushes the roof button and the roof folds back. We both chuck our bags in the bag and cheer as I pull out of the driveway. We crank the music and sing no screech along to Break the Rules by Charli XCX. We arrive at the mall. I grab my bag from the back and press the roof button. We both hop out and I lock the car. We walk in the doors and are hit by the refreshing aircon. We smile and walk away from the doors and we collect a bunch of desiring stares.

We walk around for a bit and I buy a new dress it has long sleeves and has the entire top calve red in red lace until half way through my stomach then it becomes a silk red until about mid thigh. It is a bit short but I like it. I also get a skin coloured top and red heels to go with it. I also get red nail polish and a gold nail polish pen and a clear top coat. That is all I get in clothes wise but Lynn gets a bunch of stuff. Though she got a matching dress to mine but in black with black heels.

We just entered tech town so I could buy a laptop and some other stuff. I grabbed a high quality laptop and am now looking at some cool night vision glasses to get Caleb. When I turn around with the boxes for my stuff I crash into something hard. I fall back and land on my butt. I quickly grabbed my stuff so it didn't get stepped on. I see an out stretched hand and grab it. The person pulls me off the ground and I look up an see Four!?

Four's POV

I see Shaunna and her sister Lynn walking over to us. Lynn seems to be trying to get Shaunna's attention about their brother Hector. Suddenly the doors snap shut and a Candor High Kid, Peter to be exact, walks to the centre of the hallway and then the room goes black. I see movement next to Shaunna and can make out that she has grabbed her sister and is clutching her closely. Then I hear feet shuffling, a scream and a loud thud. The lights flashed back on and Edward had a butter knife stuck in his eye. Suddenly teachers filled the room and everyone was freaking out. Over the loud speaker I heard The principal, say that there was no school today and we were free to go until tomorrow. Everyone but Edward cheers but they fade out when the remember why.

I see Lynn run too the hall Tris was in. Probably to tell her. Soon the two girls are sprinting past us screaming their heads off. We hop in our cars and drive to the mall. Soon enough we are there. Unfortunately the girls make us watch them go shopping for dresses and judge them. Soon the girls want to got to tech town for some reason but I am actually happy with their decision because I wanted to buy some night vision glasses.

We walk there and I head straight to the glasses where I see a short sexy blonde looking at the glasses. Wow she looks so hot! I walk over there hoping to catch her name and number but just as I get there she turns around and walks into me. She drops everything she was holding and lands on her butt. She quickly gathers her stuff and I extend my hand to help her up. She takes it and I help her up. This is it the moment when she instantly falls for me cause of my good looks. She looks up and... TRIS!?

Hope you liked this chapter it took a while to remember everything I wrote before! So I am excited to have it finished!

- Katris Everprior