Okay, so this is Max's POV. Timing might feel a little weird at first, but... Hey, just read it :)

Shout out to Slimshady2015 for favoriting! You're support really helps!

After she had woken me up, I had sort of fallen asleep again. That was until she screamed.

"What? Maria, where are you!" I screamed.

I ran down the stairs and looked out the window, only to see Erasers and Maria outside. Mar never saw Erasers before. She's only three, after all.

Really, I panicked. I thought all the Erasers were "retired." This meant they were all dead. But they were standing in front of my house. This probably meant they were not all dead. How unlucky of me.

Angel staggered down the stairs. She was still in her pajamas. "Erasers are here. Maria is outside!" Angel said urgently. "Fang's in trouble, too!"

"Help!" Maria wailed. My pulse quickened.

We ran outside, only to see the Erasers fly away with my little girl, with Fang battling an Eraser himself and staring hopelessly after her. They're too high, Angel told me. She can't breathe.

Shock ran through my whole body. I jumped up and tried to fly up to get her, Fang finally struggling free from his Eraser, but Angel was right. "No!" I screamed.

Great. Now I had to watch my little Mar get carried away, just like they had taken Angel so many years ago. "Can't we do something?" I asked. "Like, follow them lower or something?"

Just then Gazzy and Iggy came out. They looked confused.

"What's with all the commotion?" Gazzy asked.

"I heard screaming," Iggy said. "Who was screaming?"

Fang shook his head. "Erasers have Maria."

Gazzy looked incredulous. "Aren't we going to do something about this?"

"Where are they taking her?" Iggy asked. Still, the look on his face told us he already knew the answer.

"Ig, they're taking her to the School," I grimly replied.

Fang looked really angry. "Angel, go wake Nudge. I can't believe she slept through this nonsense. If it takes going to the School to save Maria, then so be it."

"Fang," Gazzy asked. "Are we really going to the School?"

"Yes."

Just a quick check, is the story working correctly? Did I miss anything?