Notes
I started this on March 2nd so I will have put at least 2 days worth of writing into this or at least a day and if the quality of the writing is still the same then I feel as though I might take a leave and try just writing short stories for a week and see how that goes. I'm not going to abandon this fanfiction just because I can't write a decent story, I might take what I have saved on google docs, update it and re-release that as a similar story up to this as well if need be but that will be determined by this chapter. Also I should have said this a while but my brain is kinda fried by the end of the day, learning Java and then talking about Psychology really takes a lot out of me so its kinda hard to get good ideas for this. This is ontop of me trying to lose weight so I have very little energy in a day that is why my writing is not that great.
As for this chapter I is still going to looking at was is happening in Planeptune
Maikels dialogue will be bolded (Blanc/white heart for this chapter)
Nepgear/Purple Sister will be underlied
Neptune/Purple Heart will be italics
Uni/Black Sister will be bold and italicized
Noire/Black Heartwill have plain text for dialogue (Histoire is taking this back)(Maybe)
Plutie/Irish heart with be underlined and italicized
places/locations will be bolded and italicized
Outside Planeptune's hospital
(Uni's perspective)
At this point everyone had gone inside to get Nepgear into a room,I decided to stay out back of what happened at the Lastation General Hospital, Blanc stayed out with me to hear what I had to say about what was going on with me. Also by this pointed we had reverted back to human form.
"Well you better start talking"
"Or things might get ugly"
"Blanc threatening me isn't gonna do anything but piss me off"
"This is gonna get ugly even if you don't do anything"
"While I don't know about Nepgear"
" No one has told me what happened between her and Neptune"
"But as for me this all started about two weeks ago with Noire"
"What happened"
"I have no idea what had happened to her"
"But she came home pretty beat up"
"It couldn't have been that bad"
"Well if you stop interrupting me I could explain"
"I waited by the balcony, she took longer than normal to get home"
"I was getting worried, I started thinking that maybe I should go out looking for Noire myself"
"When I was about to walk out I saw her approaching so I run out only to see Noire drop from the sky like a dead bird"
"I transformed and raced down to catch her so that Noire didn't slam into the ground like Neptune does all the time"
"Just slow down for a second"
"What do you mean by it took her longer than normal"
"And why were you waiting by the balcony"
*annoyed look* "What I mean by it took Noire longer than usual, is that whenever she goes out as Black Heart she does 4 four hours of either one S rank question or a bunch of A-E rank quests"
"How could one goddess alone do an S rank quest"
"How am I supposed to know it not like me and Noire talk to each other outside of doing work"
"You live with each other how do you not talk to her"
"You seem to forget that she's a workaholic and personal any personal time Noire has she locks herself in her bedroom"
"Fair enough"
"But you are one to talk seeing how all you do is yell at Rom and Ram"
"Not to mention only read/write books in your spare time"
*red eye appears on face* "Hey bitch this ain't about me right now"
"Just calm down Blanc, I'm getting back on track here"
"Now where was I'"
*Red eye gone but still rather irritated* "You were talking about how you caught Noire before smacking into the ground"
"Oh yeah, Well after I had caught Noire I got a really good look at her wounds"
"She had a sizeable hole in her right arm from what looked to be a large caliber rifle"
"A rather deep laceration on the right side of her face that had burn marks around the outside"
"There was bone sticking and muscle sticking out the backside of her right arm"
"The whole of her right side had been covered with a splatter of blood"
Blanc was looking rather shocked at this point I would guess it was either at the fact that Noire had been so severely injured, or it was how I described it. I couldn't tell.
"The first thing that came to my mind was to race her to the hospital in the city"
"When she was finally admitted the doctors raced Noire to the OR"
"She hadn't woken up for two days"
"She was out for that long"
"Yeah it was that long"
"The doctor that I dealt with after her operation said there was a great chance the Noire might not pull through even if she is a goddess"
"I stayed in Noire's room for two whole days just wait and wathcing her to see if anything had happened"
"The first six hours were the worst part cause Noire's heart nearly stopped twice and she stopped breathing once"
"All three things were caused by Noire having lost over 2 liters of blood"
"How the hell did she pull through that"
"Noire should have died in the operating room"
"That was the total amount Noire lost after the surgery was done"
"Getting back to the main point"
"She finally woke up in the afternoon of the third day at the hospital"
"The first thing that I did was run over to her but the doctor moved my out of the way to put some sedative into her"
"I asked for the doctor to do that"
"Why would you re knock her out if the end goal is for Noire to wake up"
"Noire's pulse was barely there when she first woke up"
"so It seemed like she might die right then and there"
"And that decision was for the better/worse"
"How was It for the worse"
"I'll get to that part later"
By this point the only reason I have been able to keep my cool and not just burst into a waterfall of tears was the burning hate I felt for Noire. Those things she said were true, for that reason any love I felt for her either died or turned into hatred.
"It was later that evening, by that time Noire's pulse came back to a relatively safe level"
"She had once again woken up but this time I wasn't right there when she open her eyes"
"I was getting back from eating dinner in the hospital's cafeteria"
"I asked the doctor how Noire was doing all he did was point"
"She was just sitting there looking at me with a blank expression or one of what is going on"
"I raced over to the bedside right after shouting her name"
"Quickly followed by me starting to cry over her waking up this"
"I tried to explain to her what had happened"
"Before I could finish I had turned into a river of tears"
I felt tears starting to well up behind my eyes again when I started talking about this point, I guess Blanc was have seen this because I felt a set of hands wipe away the moisture from around my eyes.
"I think I get it so far, that doesn't really explain what you did there, or why you're here"
"I'm going to get to that point"
"Anyway I was crying like a baby so Noire told me to come sit on left side of the bed"
"By that point the doctor had left so instead of just sitting I laid down next to Noire in the bed"
"I could tell that she was in a major amount of pain still but couldn't feel because of the the IV was some sort of painkiller"
"Noire reassured me that nothing else was going to happen and everything was going to be fine"
"Then to prove it to me gave me a small hug with her left arm"
"Grabbed on to her like my life depended on it"
"I made Noire promise me not to do anything stupid like that again, which she agreed to"
"We stayed in that embrace until morning"
It was at this point I started shaking at the next thoughts of what I was about to say, Blanc quickly picked up on this, Blanc then slide over on the bench we have been sitting on this entire time. I felt her arms go around me as to comfort me.
"If this part is too hard then just skip it"
"It's not that I'm still a wreck from this I have just been able to keep my cool that is all"
"I see"
"It was that morning the 'shit hit the fan'"
"I woke up to a team of four 'doctors' asking me to leave the room because they needed to do some 'testing'"
"Noire told them I was going anywhere and It was after that comment that those men showed their real intention"
"They all pulled out a gun"
"Three of the Men pointed them at me while the other one that was left went to the bedside"
"The guy that went over to the bedside picked Noire up and threw her to the ground on her right arm"
I was clenching my fists at this point and I could feel the anger start to go from Noire back to where it all originally came from.
"Are you really sure that you can go on"
"Yeah it's gonna be hard so if I start getting violent use this"
I had taken the syringe from my fake just incase something happened, this was so I could knock myself out so I didn't hurt anyone else. So i gave it to Blanc
"What is it"
"The same stuff currently in Nepgear"
"Just promise me that you will use no matter what happens to me"
Blanc nodded her head in agreement.
"I don't wanna hurt anyone like I did in Lastation again"
"Well back to what I was saying"
"So the guy that threw Noire to the ground started kicking her"
"After a good thirty seconds of that guy just wailing on Noire's stomach with his foot"
"he looked and me, right then a smile started to form on the man's face"
"He… he… *sniffle* racked the… *hic* slide… he… *hic* was… going… to… *sniffle* shoot Noire… *hic*"
"I… I… *hic* screamed no… but he still… *hic* pulled… *hic* *sniffle*... the… *hic* *hic*
trigger…"
At this point I was once again a waterfall of tears and that only made things worse of me because I could feel the anger once again coming only fueling the emotional fire.
"I'm… *hic* so… *hic*... scared… *sob* right now… "
I felt another hand come around me, I pulled my head up slowly to see a blue and brown blue through the tears in my eyes right now, it was IF.
"*hic* How… l-l-long… h-h-have… *sniffle* y-y-you b-b-been there"
IF: "long enough to hear the important part"
IF: "By the way Histoire and Compa heard that too"
"*sniffle* I… *sniffle* … I can continue"
IF: "Don't push yourself"
IF: "Haven't you been through enough"
"I guess but what about Nepgear hasn't she gone through a lot"
"If she hasn't gotten to get a break then why shoud have one"
"It's not like I deserve one anyway"
IF: "Uni, what the hell do you mean by that"
"You haven't heard"
IF: "Heard what"
"About what happened in Lastation just over 18 hours ago"
IF: "I have been out working for the guild for goddess knows how long straight because Nep can't just act like a CPU"
IF: "when she does do work it either end with her find a problem with Gamindustri or getting sent to another dimension"
IF: "So yeah I haven't heard any news about the other nations except for when I pass by people in Planeptune"
"So I should take it as not many people here in Planeptune have heard what I did in Lastation"
"Well I might aswell start to explain my story again then because that is part of it"
"So getting back to my explanation after what just happened I jumped in the path of the bullet to save Noire"
"I felt the bullet enter my neck"
"Before I hit the ground I was KOed from the pain"
"It was a whole week before I woke up again the doctors were never able to figure out why it took me a week to get up either"
"That bullet almost killed me according to the surgeon that pulled out its fragments"
"I was told the fragments had stopped a quarter inch away from my carotid artery"
"It still has fully healed the only reason the stitches have ripped open is due to the fact my body had a straight week to heal"
"That was also when I found out what Noire had done"
Everyone:"What did Noire do"
*Slightly annoyed by being interrupted again*
"While I was lying there bleeding out of the hole in my neck she apparently lose it and killed all four of those guys"
"Once the doctors arrived to Noire's room they found Noire was standing in the hall just hacking up the dead bodies with me just lying there behind her"
"I got hauled off to a surgery and well i already told that part"
"As for Noire the doctor tried to get near to her but got a blood soaked sword pointed at his face"
"It took a security guard and a taser to stop Noire"
"Right after she collapsed the doctor had taken out some sensitive so they could transported her to the Psych ward at the Lastation General Hospital"
"That is what I was told at least'
I took a second to look at everyone, Blanc had a mix of emotions on her face, the most notable on being confusion. IF looks more irritated than anything, Histoire was in shock, as for Compa… It looked like she was about to run an hide from me, either that or she was trying not cry over hearing this seeing how we all help Nepgear during the ASIC crisis and defeating the deity of sin. So we all became pretty close because of that.
I wished that things could turn back to normal, I wish none of this had ever happened, this all started when Noire came back home… IF snapped at, this brought me out of my thoughts and back to reality.
IF: "Well then how does this all relate to what happened"
"This is all the build up to that so it is all important"
"once again going back to the story"
"It was on the day that I woke up that my hatred had started for Noire"
I felt my fists curling up again, those words ringing my head. I was now gritting my teeth as well just trying to control the emotion shit storm in my head.
"I discharged from the hospital under one condition that I would come back every few days for a checkup to see how everything was holding up"
"So I thought to myself should go see how Noire is doing"
"I asked the doctor the doctor that had been treating me and her where to find her"
"Instead of just telling me he led me down to the Psych ward"
"The doctor had pointed to Noire's cell door"
"I had noticed that all the cell doors had mirrors above the So I could see her but Noire couldn't see me"
"It was the next words that I heard It what caused me to go ballistic myself"
Noire: ""I treat you like garbage Uni and yet I return I get love and don't show anything to you in return *sniffle*, yet here I am just being big sister Noire. The one you can rely on, but here I am in a cell with a fucking straitjacket on and tied down to a bed for trying to do something good for you once or once in my life, and that almost got you killed, Uni… *sob* aren't I just the fucking perfect role mole of a sister."
"You don't *sniffle* deserve this Uni, you don't deserve the treatment I was giving you. You would be better off having a sister like Neptune, Vert, or of all people Blanc, just so you could have a big sister that *hic* actually seems to give a fuck about you, and not have to be around a worthless piece of shit like myself. Seeing how at the best of times I only seem to care about doing work, when i do pay attention to you is when I tell you where you screwed up on the paperwork for that day."
IF: "Noire said that"
IF: "And why is it that is what set you off"
"It is all true what she said"
"You are lucky to not have to go through that"
"Every time I think about those words It feels like a knife is being rammed through my chest, followed by an overwhelming sense of anger"
"So with that I had ran into the streets"
"I just ran for god know how long"
"Before I knew it I found myself in a back alley crying and screaming"
"That's when I met Plutia and a boy named Maikel"
"(So that is where those to ran off to)"
"Umm... would you know their current locations by any chance"
"No the last place I saw them was in the hotel Maikel was staying in while he was there"
"Whether or not he is still there I don't know because I stormed out of the room once again crying in pain because of Noire"
"So in another fit of rage I transformed to raced into the hospital"
"It was there that the thought of 'dealing' with Noire could fix this"
IF: "What do you mean by 'dealing with Noire'"
"By that I meant kill her"
Everyone: "YOU WERE GOING TO KILL YOUR SISTER"
"That was a heat of the moment thought okay, also this is where I get to what I did to Lastation"
"I found the window to the Psych ward and blew the wall part only to find that Noire had either just been released or had escaped"
"The cops had been there to see what had come crashing down into the parking lot I was still pissed and wanted to vent… "
"So I… l…"
I could feel the wall of tears behind my eyes growing again, the guilt was coming back even worse than before, I hated this feeling, I wanted It to end all of it, my suffering, Noire's, Nepgear's, hell even Neptune, even for what Neptune had put Nepgear through was unforgivable in my book at least.
"I… killed them"
"All of them are now dead the entire depart is now gone and it was all my fault"
"WAAAAAAH"
I broken crying… no I started screaming like a banshee, i went to get up off the bench that myself and Blanc have been on the entire time. I stood up but before I could take a step IF latched onto me, this only made things worse, the in my system wanted to get out he guilt was overwhelming me, my first reaction was to reach of the knife that Histoire had given back to me on the way here.
Blanc who had been watching my action the entire time did exactly what i asked in cause I started to get violent again, I felt the needle on the syringe enter my on the right side of my neck. Everything started to get heavy and dark, so this is what Nepgear felt.
"Thank you… Blanc"
(Blanc perspective)
After Uni had finished explaining herself in detail what has been happening to her, She broken on the spot. Uni tried to run away again but IF stopped her, this was great timing for this because I was about to use the syringe on her, before I could put into her neck Uni had started to reach for a knife that is strapped to her left leg.
Right as she pulled it out I had put the needle part of the syringe into Uni's neck and pushed down on the plunger.
"Blanc what in the hell do you think you are doing"
"What Uni asked me to do"
"Where did you even get that from"
"Uni"
"She took it from the fake you guys have been talking about"
"So not only now is Nepgear In a life or death battle now uni is two"
"What do you mean by life or death battle"
"Compa please explain"
Compa: "I have only ever seen this once as only being a nurse"
Compa: "From what I can tell it might be a combination that could make a lethal injection"
Compa: "I can't be sure about that until Ge-Ge's test results come back from the lab which might be another hour or so"
Compa: "Also now we need to get Miss Uni to where we are keeping Ge-Ge pronto"
"That is rather short for a hospital test"
IF: "Well Planeptune has the most advanced technology in all of Gamindustri"
"Point noted but not given a damn about"
"Seeing how I was the one yo cause this I will take Uni up there myself"
"Compa just show me where to go"
Compa: "Right follow me if you will then"
"Alright I'm ready let's go"
It was only about five minutes after that I had gotten Uni to the same Room as Nepgear. Nepgear looked horrible. her clothing had been taken off, the staff had put it into a bag for marked 'biohazardous' it had been tagged to be disposed in a furnace. Nepgear was lying there with a rather painful look on her face, her eyelids were twitching, there was moaning sounds coming from Nepgear, not to mention she was sweating bullets. T
here was a number of different medical staff currently surrounding Nepgear, the was two IV's in her, I no doctor so I couldn't even begin to tell what was going on with her but whatever it was I had started that process for Uni and there was no going back from it, I felt a little bad for but I did as she asked so I was only partly my fault for going through with it.
I was pulled out of thought by the sirens that started to go off on Nepgear's side of the room, I jerked my whole body around to see what was happening… what I saw not only shocked me but I dropped Uni because of the sight…
"What have I done to you"
Notes
So that is this chapter done i feel that is much better than the previous two not only for grammar but the storyline is interesting. I feel like I should just good through this stuff and rewrite the chapters so this way I can fix the issues with this story one of which being the over use of 'and' also the other being I feel like my drama is forced and unnatural, it doesn't flow properly so if anyone agrees with this please leave me a review of the story tell where the massive fuck up are this way I can not have my fanfiction turn into something like 'My Immortal' (Google it) where it is turned into a joke. even though that one was never serious in the first place (also that one was brought to me by the youtuber SomeOrdinaryGamers) (not being paid to advertise nor am I saying to go check that out I was just saying where I heard that dreadful pile of shit from)
I am gonna try to get the next chapter out by at least sunday or later depending on how this one does or might just redo the whole damn story.
Other than that MissNepgear OUT!
