Edits as of 06.04.16:
Original word count: 383
Edited word count: 444
Nymphadora Tonks' hair slowly turned red in anger and annoyance. Why her mother had just slammed the door in her face was a complete mystery to her and in the childs opinion it was downright rude!
Now she didn't care what her mother or father said, she was going to go out into that hall way and listen in to what they were saying. She had it all planned, she'd go up to her mother and give her a big hug and then refuse to let go, giving her usual puppy dog eyes and cute little baby voice. That always worked. She grinned at the idea of it.
She put her hand on the door handle and pushed the door open. She looked around but to her surprise there was no-one in the hall anymore. Nymphadora walked into the kitchen. There, leant against the kitchen side was her father, looking very troubled whilst waiting for the kettle to boil.
He looked down at her and smiled slightly, a strained aspect to his gesture "Come here sweet heart." He held out his hand and Nymphadora took it. He then picked her up, pulled her into a hug and kissed her head, "Nymphadora, you're a very special little girl and don't let anyone tell you otherwise."
Nymphadora looked at her father and smiled "Okay daddy." She said in her usual sweet and innocent voice, she then kissed him on his cheek and giggled slightly. Ted then put her down and turned around to make two cups of tea.
"Daddy?" Said Nymphadora.
"Yeah Hun?" Replied Ted whilst pouring the hot water into the mugs and then walking over to the fridge to get the milk out.
"Who is that woman?" She asked, now chewing the long sleeve to her pink dress.
Ted stopped and turned around to look at Nymphadora "Never you mind, just go to your room and don't go in the living room . . . and stop chewing on your dress." And with that he pulled his wand out of his pocket, flicked his wand and the two mugs followed him back into the living room. He then slammed the door shut behind him.
She glared at the door, continuing to chew on her sleeve. Nymphadora Tonks wasn't stupid, she may have only been five years old but she knew when her parents were hiding something from her. Unforetunaely for Mr and Mrs Tonks when they tried to hide things from little Nymphadora it only made her ten times more determined to find out what on earth they were hiding. It was just a game to the little girl, a mystery to be solved.
Okay this is where my 13 year old self stopped writing this story so 15 year old me shall have to carry it on. :D Hopefully this means it should get better. XD
I really didn't know what to call this chapter so I just put innocence because to be honest, the reason Dora is so confused is because she's so ickle and innocent. hehe. Thanks to my friend Stacie for helping me find that. :D
Anywho, thanks to all you people who reviewed, put this story in your alert list and even favorited it! Big hugs for all of you! But please more reviews and stuff or I may curl up and die.
HOPEFULLY, if I don't get blocks or distracted I may put up the next chapter today, if not it should be up within a week. I'm going to try my hardest not to take AGES loading each chapter up like I have with my other fanfictions. By the way if you're reading my other fanfiction "A mission gone wrong." sorry I've taken so long to update but the next chapter is ALMOST finnished and should be up soon. If you're not reading it please, go check it out it's my favorite story I've done . . . close with my other fanfiction "Sisterhood." . . . (Go check that out too! XD) Anyway I'll stop writing here now. lol Bye!
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