Edits as of 06.04.16
Original word count: 478
Edited word count: 512
Bellatrix Lestrange's full attention was now on the little girl standing horrified in the door way.
There were tears in the young girls eyes and a look of pure terror on her face. She wanted to move more than anything, she wanted to run to her mummy and make sure she was okay then run to her daddy and get the two of them out of there. Though even though Nymphadora Tonks was only five years old she knew too well that no matter what she could not beat this lunatic that had caused her parents to be in their current state of pain and fear for their innocent daughter.
Frozen to the spot all Nymphadora could do was watch as Bellatrix slowly walked towards her, the evil and twisted smirk still plastered on her face. She stopped to stand directly in front of Nymphadora then knelt down to her level.
She spoke as if she had the world's most disgusting thing before her "Hello," a few moments silence passed then suddenly Bellatrix rose her hand and slapped Nymphadora hard across the face leaving marks where her nails had scraped away at her flesh as she withdrew her hand. Nymphadora held her cheek letting tears stream down her face.
"When someone says 'Hello' you're supposed to say Hello back you stupid brat!" Bella spat.
"Leave her alone Bellatrix!" it was Andromeda who spoke, she shouted as loud as she could but was apparently very hurt and weak after being thrown into the glass cabinet and struggling to keep consciousness.
A mad cackle escaped Bellatrix's lips as she stood up and walked over to Andromeda smirking as she watched her younger sister try to wriggle away from her, her eyes wide with fear and her face stained from her own blood that had escaped from the cut in her head.
Bellatrix knelt down in front of the woman of whom she had once been happy to call her sister. Andromeda stopped struggling to get away and for a moment the two women stared into each other's eyes
"Awww, poor Andy." Bellatrix produced sadistic giggle as she used her favourite 'baby voice' on Andromeda, stroking her hair-wet with blood- out of her face "You know . . ." She reduced her voice to a whisper and moved her lips to Andy's left ear "This is all your fault." Bellatrix smirked.
A sob ripped from Andromeda's throat as her older sister stood up again to examine her, she wanted to attack her back more than anything but didn't want to risk anything that would potentially lead to the harm of her daughter "P-Please Bella! L-leave us alone . . ."
A cruel smirk twisted across Bellatrix's face for what felt like the hundredth time that night "You know . . . I'd rather not." She suppressed another of her crazy cackles.
There would be plenty of time to laugh and smirk and have fun later . . . well, for Bellatrix at least, the others would definitely not be doing any of those things tonight.