Thank you for all the lovely reviews on my first poem. I've taken on board your feedback although I haven't been able to reply. This is a bit longer than the Percy one I hope you don't mind.
Black hair, brown eyes,
You're in for a big surprise,
Tool-belt lose around his hips,
From which he produced the sledge hammer he grips,
His best friend is a dragon's head,
Although team Leo is quite far spread,
He's the counsellor of cabin nine,
His position is quite sublime,
His favourite food is Fonzies,
One of the greatest Italian delicacies,
To storm or fire the world must fall,
Why can't the world not fall at all?,
He has control over fire,
Which he uses only when the need is dire,
Scrawny and only 5'6" tall,
It's a wonder Calypso likes him at all,
With Jason and Piper in his trio,
It's no wonder people cheer for team Leo!
Lifefightor500: Thank you!
Bloodyawsome12: I'm working on it.
Angel of FRIVOLOUS CAKES818: Thanks! (-:
ATHENA2742: I've changed it now. (-;
Cinaedion: I take on your point and I did try and find something else, but apart from taking that part out completely I couldn't figure out another option.
Please R&R.