(This is going to be short. I'm sorry. But the next one won't be. I only intended to have three but sadly I put a fourth one or at least mentioned one in my next chapter coming up for Power Of Family. I didn't insert the punishment for a reason… I didn't want to.)

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Attempt #4

I had tried to kill Celeste again. I had failed. I was now standing in the corner at A PARTY I had set up. I guess I was lucky because Elijah didn't ask for my trousers to be down. I had my nose in the corner and could hear people talking, laughing; even Rebekah was talking to a witch. Why would she be friends with a witch when she knows how I feel about them?

I sat there and the next five minutes passed uneventfully. "Niklaus, you may come out and mingle with the crowd." Elijah said. I went to go see Rebekah. The witch she was talking to looked at me, as if she was bouncing about seeing me up front and personal. Poor girl. Maybe at some point I'll pay attention to you.

"Rebekah. Where is Marcel?"

"He is…"

"Over there sir." The witch pointed at Marcel, talking with Kol. I smiled and thanked the witch. I went to mingle with the people at the party. Feeling as if someone were watching me.

SUCCESS!

I had finally killed Celeste. I felt happy. Now Elijah could devote his time to me again. I walked over to him. He was standing over her dead body. I wrapped my arm around his shoulder. "What say you and I go out and get a coffee or something?"

"Niklaus I do not want to see you. GET OUT!" I felt my heart break. I thought he would be happy if I killed her. I cleared my throat.

"Excuse me Elijah. I don't think I heard you properly." I said, honestly. He shoved me away.

"I SAID GET OUT OF HERE NIKLAUS!" I stumbled as he shoved me. He fell to his knees and began to cry. I tried to touch him, to comfort him. He smacked my hand away. I felt my heart break even more. I hadn't made him happy… I'd broken him. "I don't want you Niklaus."

"Fine. I don't need you anyway!" I growled and he snarled at me. I ran from the house and fell down. He hated me. If I could… I don't know. I began to sob out my pain… in secret. I got a beer and went down to the bayou to cry out my pain and maybe forget this whole thing happened with my brother. He probably would never again love me. I wish I could apologize. But what happened cannot be undone. If I could, I would have compelled someone else to kill Celeste, instead of me doing it. Instead of me breaking off my relationship with my brother off. Instead of fixing our relationship… I broke it. That I could not deny. Not with the way Elijah spoke… yelled at me.

I dropped my empty bottle down and began to sob my heartache out.

(I am going to put up another chapter of his youth. Then I'll see what else I can do with it. R&R thanks!)