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Justin's pov

Chapter 2: the portal for those who are wondering it will be a SpyroXCynder

I woke up in the parking lot. To make sure that was not a dream I reached up for my face. It was healed though my clothes were still torn up. "They healed me but why?"

"JUSTIN!" my pal Chris said

"Well I am in trouble."

"Justin, what the hell happened to you?"

"I have no idea I was looking for the last manikin and I was attacked by two animals I was about to beat one of them then I blacked out and woke up here."

"Well at least your safe, lets get you to your house." We left to my house it was about 45 minutes from here. Once we got there I unlocked the door and went inside. I live alone because three years ago there was a fire there was a fire that killed my entire family. I woke up, saw the fire, and jumped through my window and ran to the end of the driveway and called 911. When they got here they said no one else made it.

Cynder's POV

"Thank you Spyro for saving me back there." I said

"Don't mention it, I won't let any humans hurt you. But we have bigger problems than them the portal to Warfang is still out there. We need to close it before any human steps in it because we won't be able to get him back

"I think the portal was somewhere when we fought that kid."

"We should go look there."

Justin's pov

As I was going back to CERT, I saw something go in the forest. I looked at the hangar. "I can miss one day." I followed it until I lost him. I took a right and there was a glowing light I went towards it. "The heck?" in front of me was a spiraling hole, a portal.

"JUSTIN! LOOK OUT! I turned around, then I felt myself get lifted off the ground and was thrown into the portal. I landed on the ground and blacked out again.

Justin owned count: 2. What happened to Justin we will see in the next chapter enjoy and don't forget to read and review.