Disclaimer: One Piece not mine, though if id did i will put more female member in his crew and give luffy harem, unfortunately it's really not mine.
LUFFY HAREM: The King Who Rule The Ocean
Chapter 2: In the past
Now luffy awaken in his 4 year old body. 'never think i will go back to this place again'. he remember this the time when Garp leave him alone in jungle for the first time. he think. "oh no, seems like i need to train my body from the begining again" he say to himself after releazing he is in a body of 4 year kid. luffy start to get out from a small cave, and walking out. But after a few step he fell. all of his body fill like burn, his bones feels like brokens. "aarrggk.., AAAHHH!". too much pain so he scream very loudly.
thats going for 15 minutes, all the experience he had in his previous life following him to the past. every minutes represent every year that he has passed in the future, even his scars now comeback to him.
"Thats freaking hurt!" he yelled at no one. after that then misteriously he found a letter beside himself. then he read it
'to luffy,
i'm sorry for not updating your story about 3 month or more, i have my own reason. and i'm sure the readers don't want to hear my reason. thats why i decide to give your phisical power back as my apologize. use your power wisely luffy.
from your god, utbu'
"hmm well, since my power back too. i think i will start train my devil fruit power first" like a crazy man luffy talking to himself.
after 3 month passed, Garp came to pick up luffy from the forest. he is surprised when he saw luffy. luffy look buffed, luffy shirtless body showing the muscles he have. then Garp is stupid enough to think that his training regime is success.
6 year latter, a boy with straw hat stared at the sea for along time. he look at his straw hat, 'shanks, why he is so different? how can kind people like his crew betray him in the future` that's what in luffy mind since 3 year ago,
Flashback
luffy is with red hair pirate, they decide to leave foosha vilage "hey luffy, you sure you don't want join us?" that shanks who said. after he saw luffy took down higuma a mountain bandit with bounty. he saw luffy had great tallent. "nope" thats luffy answer, he already decide he will have his own crew like previous time.
"how can i become pirate king if i work under you, i will never join you. i will make my own crew" luffy said that. the word of `pirate king` remind shanks of his old captain roger. "pirate king huh" shanks than put his hat to luffy "than i will trust you with this hat, give me back that after you are strong enough to be pirat king. good by luffy" with that shanks leave.
End Flashback
'i need to findout that, the reason why shanks betray me in the future' luffy think, then luffy pack his own bag. he plan to leave the island sooner, he need another training place, the place where there no connection with his gramps.
when he walk to his boat, he saw ace waiting for him "so luffy, you sure want leave to day?" ace speaking. he will feel lonely without luffy. "yeah, i need to train in place where gramps know not". while preparing the boat he said to ace "after all, i'm not the one who promise that will leave after 17" he grinned.
ace start regreting his promise to sabo "why would i promise to do that, i wish sabo was here so i can revoke that promise. it's unfair that you refuse to promise back than" ash said only making luffy laugh. yeah it's already a year after sabo's supposedly dead.
"you don't have to worry ace, i dont plan to go straight through grandline now, i just leave so i can train to be much more strong. and i can't do that here since no one can teach me. i indeed respect sabo so i will go straight to grandline when i'm 17" luffy said.
"so i'm still the first one who going to grand line. its good to hear" ace said. "yup, see you latter ace" luffy start the boat. "good bye luffy" that's what ace said.
what will luffy do after leaving? where is he going? will it be need 3 month again for the next chapter to update? will the readers forgive this bastard author (me) who release the very short second chapter after 3 month? so readers, please give some review. flames will be ignored, if theres to much flames i will not even bothered to read reviews anymore and try to keep continue this fic by my own.
that's how the second chapter end. thanks for reading this chapter.
you dont need to read this note (not important one)
believe it or not, your reviews is deciding how this story work, i find my mistake when i got review that said something 'this fic destroy sacred bond bettween shanks and luffy`. after read that, i think many thing, about how will i keep this story following canon if i destroy that so called sacred bond?, i'm not talented writer who can make original idea from the begining. that's why i keep luffy's hate to shanks vague. and because of that i'm deleting my future chapters that i plan to update, and create new second chapter.