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I must say that I have never seen Soarin so infuriated before. It actually has me afraid of him a little bit. Watching him try and hold in all of his anger. Just then spitfire walked in along with Fleetfoot and they saw him and they both got worried looks on their faces. "What did you do!" spitfire yelled running over to try and calm down Soarin.
"I told him what happened last night!" I said.
"And what did happen last night?" Fleetfoot asked.
"Somepony came into my room and try to kill me." With that they both gasped and they looked at Soarin with understanding looks. It took them a while but when we finally calmed him down he had fallen asleep with his head snoring away on my bed. "so who attacked you last night?" spitfire asked.
"I don't know. But they were dressed up like a doctor. He was about to kill me when a strange hooded pony came in and bucked him literately across the room and my attacker knocked himself out in a wall." I said rubbing Soarin's head.
"Well then I'm grateful he showed up when he did or else Soarin would quit the wonderbolts to find out who killed you. And I am not losing the best male wonderbolt flyer." Spitfire said causing us to sneer a little.
"Must… protect… love…" Soarin moaned in his sleep.
"Looks like he really loves you a lot Rainbow Dash." Fleetfoot said causing me to blush and giggle a little.
"And I can see you love him as well dash." Spitfire said causing me to blush even more.
"Quit it. You're going to make me redder then big macs coat." I said.
"Who's big mac?" Fleetfoot asked.
"A stallion that works at sweet apple acres with his little sisters Applejack and Applebloom." I said as they understood what I meant.
"So are you two official or what?" Fleetfoot asked.
"I don't really know. Maybe. I had my first kiss today with him and it was delightful. Celestia I'm turning into an actual mare." I said causing them to laugh and me pout at them. As they stopped laughing Soarin was starting to wake up and I watched as his eyes fluttered open and he got up to stretch. "Come on guys I was sleeping here." He said causing us all to laugh once again.
"You calm now Soarin?" spitfire asked.
"I think I am. All I remember is rainbow dash telling me she was attacked last night and then I lost it." He said rubbing his head trying to remember what he did while he went crazy.
"we'll all that matters now is that my special somepony is alright." I said and we hugged for a few minutes before letting go.
"are you still sure that it was lightning dust rainbow?" Fleetfoot asked.
"of course I am." And then she reached into a saddlebag on her back and pulled out photos. And I took them I saw them all were pictures of a hooded pony. "who took the pictures?" I asked.
"this was taken by a pony reporter in the area. But they took this one earlier today talking to a doctor giving the doctor a bag full of bits." she said handing me the picture. It was of the same doctor that had attacked me last night. And that was when I saw the hooded pony's face but it was blurred but I could still see who it was… it was none other than lightning dust. "I told you guys it was true." I said putting down the pictures.
"we didn't believe you until a Pegasus came and brought us these pictures." Spitfire said.
"we are sorry for not believing you at first rainbow." Fleetfoot said.
"it's okay. I'm not sure if I would have believed me anyway. So when are we going to tell the royal guards?" I asked.
"not until we got some actual evidence. We need evidence if we are going to get her." Fleetfoot said.
"when I leave the hospital I could help."
"no way dashie. You are staying here until you can leave in about a week." Soarin said.
"Soarin I am not a little filly anymore… I can take care of myself." I said. but I already knew he wouldn't let me help still because he likes me like he likes pie… but way more.
"I said no rainbow. I can't stand to see you hurt again. it would rip me apart if I saw you hurt again." he said trying to hold back some tears.
"fine, fine, fine. I won't help. Just be back here with me when you guys are done alright." I said.
"okay rainbow. We need you to get your rest. We will try and get what we can. Night." Spitfire said as they all walked out and closed the door. So they finally believe me… that's good. At least now I might be safe after they finally take lightning dust away. So I closed my eyes and I fell asleep.
"hurry up and knock her out."
"I'm trying. Okay here's the serum."
"you should have had it ready when we got here you idiot."
"sorry dude. You know I don't prepare for stuff before we get to our target."
"just don't do it again. our boss wants us to bring her to her alive for something."
"I hope we get to have some fun with her beforehand."
"that's what I'm hoping for too brother. Okay serums injected. Let's get her out of here."
Sorry I didn't get this up sooner guys. Lost power at my house for an entire day and I also lost everything that I had typed up for this. Note to self-save every few minutes. Again sorry guys and I am trying to put up a chapter daily but thanks to a stupid pill I have to take for my ADHD it ruins my minds imagination a little bit. When I stop taking it I feel overflowed with ideas but when I do take it there is only a trickle. I still need some help in processing every chapter I work on to make them longer and more descriptive so letting you all know that. Well that's all I got to say for now so this is MLP Brony Fifer signing off. Chow.
