Here is the pole so far recently:
Has a foal: 8
No foal: 0
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CAUTION BEFORE YOU START READING: MAY CONTAIN RATED M MATERIAL
I woke up chained to the floor surrounded by darkness. "Where am I?" I asked.
"You are somewhere where the wonderbolts will never think to find you." I heard a voice say. I turned my head trying to find the owner of the voice but I couldn't find them. "Who are you and why am I here?" I asked.
"You are here because our employer wanted to be sure you stayed out of the picture. And our names are nothing that you should know."
"What do you mean by out of the picture?" just than something appeared in front of me. It was of a conference… with the wonderbolts.
"How long has the wonderbolt Rainbow Dash been missing?"
"For… about a month." Soarin said. A… a… month…
"Are you going to continue your search?"
"We don't know. We haven't found any clue on her where abouts." Spitfire said
"so you are considering just giving up the search entirely?"
"that is a chance…" he trailed off… me being taken must of hurt him a lot.
"but we all must start thinking about the impossible... Rainbow Dash could be dead." Dead… and with that it closed.
"this is what happened a week ago. And our employer is going to continue paying us for keeping you out of the picture. But once the money stops flowing… me and my brother have to decide to either let you live, or we kill you." I then heard some small laughing.
"Why did you have to do this? I was going to live a happy life with my love and you took that away from me. I wanted. To always be by his side and all you did was take me away." I cried out. "Just please let me go." I started to sob and I heard movement come from behind me when I heard something click and then I could no longer feel myself being pulled back. When I looked behind me I noticed I was no longer chained by my neck to the ground. "I know what we did was bad… but we needed the money badly to help feed ourselves." I heard a voice say as the owner stepped into view.
"So to redeem ourselves we will help you return to the wonderbolts and we will help you uncover our employer. They are actually going to make her a wonderbolt today. All she has to do is pass the examination." So they must not have found anything to accuse her of anything. I need to get back there fast.
"But why are you doing this?" I asked as I slowly stood up.
"Because the same thing happened to us not that long ago. Except they killed our loved ones." Another voice said stepping into view.
"But where are we anyway?" I asked and they snickered a little.
"You are actually in an abandoned house near Ponyville. But we must hurry before our employer finishes her exams and becomes a wonderbolt." The one on the left said. So they opened a door and I immediately bolted out the door closely followed by the stallions and we ran straight through the town getting a bunch of surprised looks as several stallions started to run after us. I watched as I started to take flight near the edge of town and I launched off with a sonic rainboom and I watched as the stallions behind me either all got into balloons or took flight after me. So I have a mini army to watch my back so that is good if there is any resistance. As I did another sonic rainboom I was approaching the academy when I was suddenly knocked into a cloud. I'm actually still amazed that my wings had actually healed while I was gone but me getting slammed into a cloud just made me even more angry. When I popped my head out of the cloud I noticed like a mini army of Pegasus smiling at me with an evil smile. "Our boss knew hose two idiots would not be able to keep you locked away fore ever." One of them said. Just then I watched as they were all slammed into and sent flying towards the academy and they recovered after a few seconds and they put looks of anger on their faces as I watched some of the stallions that followed me hovered in front of me to protect me. "Go!" one of them said as they charged. I only just nodded as I continued to fly towards the academy and every time I ran into opposition the stallions following me would keep them away from me. As I reached the academy I could tell the recruits and other wonderbolts were wondering what was happening and were staring at me wide mouthed when they saw me do a sonic rainboom straight pass them and towards the course in the middle of the academy. I flew left, right, up, down… when I finally reached the course room and I stayed hidden at the entrance and I spotted the traitor herself almost about to finish the course. So I charged. And they were all surprised as I charged right into her face knocking her off the course. "I'm back you traitor." I said as I hovered towards her.
"Look who's finally back. Where were you anyway?" she asked trying to hide her anger.
"I don't know how about you ask your goons who took me." I said.
"I don't know what you are talking about." She said trying to plead innocent. But that's not going to bucking work with me… she hired others to take me away… took me away just so she could become a wonderbolt… to prove she's better than me in every way… but that's not going to bucking happen. So I flew straight at her and created a sonic rainboom past spitfire and the others and she just smirked and charged as well. I would say I was lying if I said I was in a fight before. To be honest I always lied about that. This is my first fight ever in my life. And my entire career depends on it. As we connected hoof to hoof in the end of our charge she quickly grabbed me and flew straight up into the air out of the arena. She than did a backflip connecting her back legs to my chin sending me flying upwards but as I recovered she came at me with multiple punches and kicks sending me farther and farther away from the academy. I had to come up with something quick… or else I was going to die here… and I would have to leave Soarin forever… no… that is not going to happen… I WOULD RATHER NOT FLY ANYMORE THAN EVER LEAVE Soarin! And with that I deflected a punch and grabbed her back left leg surprising her. "my turn." I said wiping blood off of my mouth.
Third person POV cause this scene is to badass (excuse my language) to have and understand in a single point of view
As Rainbow Dash wiped the blood from her mouth she than disappeared. "where the buck did she go?" lightning dust said as she looked everywhere. "RAINBOOM BARRAGE!" and with that there was a boom and then a massive amount of pain in her back but as she turned around she disappeared again, another boom later meant pain in her legs, boom later pain in stomach. As this continued on the stallions that were holding off the hired goons and the hired goons all stood and watched as Rainbow Dash did rainboom after rainboom and every time she did she it created a medium size sphere around her and lightning dust. Lightning dust was starting to get very tired of this but she put a smile on her face as there was another boom and as rainbow dash went flying at her she hovered out of the way only to grab rainbow dashes wing causing her to be surprised at it and she was hurled into the course. As she laid there on the ground she kept on thinking as she watched lightning dust get closer and closer. I'm sorry Soarin… I tried and I failed… I failed to let us have a happy life because I didn't force you to let me help you… but I will always be here for you… in… your heart. As lightning dust reached the top edge of the arena she went speeding towards rainbow dash with a need to kill but just before that happened and before her front right hoof connected with her face she was sent flying into and through several potted plants and tumbled on the ground. And it was none other than the 2 Pegasus that were ordered to take her away. "hello boss. Miss us?" one of them said as she got back up.
"I always knew you two would betray me but I always gave my goons a second chance. Kill her. And I might take you back." She said smirking.
"what do you mean by goons Mrs. dust?" Fleetfoot yelled.
"because you always thought of her as the best. When I am actually the best." She sneered after she said that as she started walking towards Rainbow Dash. "ever since I was first thrown out of the academy I plotted my revenge to kill and take her place in the wonderbolts. But if it didn't work I was going to refer to plan B. to kill the entire wonderbolts one, by, one."
"me and my brother both decided that we are no longer going to follow your orders dust." The stallion said as his brother got next to him to protect Rainbow Dash. But all she did was laugh.
"I have been training in case both of my plans failed. So basically I am the best fighter in Equestria! Let's see how you do against me!" and with that she charged and slammed into the younger brother sending him flying and crashing through a pillar and causing the ceiling in the area he was in to all crumble down. "STREAK! YOU'LL PAY FOR THAT!" the older brother yelled as he tried to hit lightning dust but she just moved sideways and snapped hos right wing causing him to fall onto the ground holding his wing. "I'll deal with you later traitor. The only one I want to hurt and kill at the moment is miss Rainbow Dash. We haven't even finished playing yet." And with that she started to walk towards rainbow dash but was immediately sent flying into a wall by Soarin. "YOU WILL NOT AND I REPEAT WILL NOT! HURT MY SPECIAL SOMEPONY ANYMORE!" he yelled as he charged at he and started to plow her through the wall until she was stuck in it. As he started to walk away though her eyes opened up to show that they were red and she somehow burst out of the wall and grabbed Soarin in a headlock and started to squeeze. "Soarin….. no…." rainbow dash was able to get out as she tried to get up and save her special somepony. "even though the one I want to kill the most is Rainbow Dash I now want to see her suffer as I kill the pony she is in love with." and with that she started to squeeze harder and soaring kept on trying to struggle to break free.
"you enjoy what you're seeing Rainbow Dash? Well be ready cause your next." As Fleetfoot and spitfire watched in shock at what was happening they knew that once she was done with them she would come after them next. So they did the most stupid thing ever… they charged her and saved Soarin from being knocked out as they both sent lightning dust flying back into the wall she was pounded into and sent through it and tumbled on the ground. As they helped up Soarin they kept on taking glances at the hole in the wall as Soarin got up and limped over to Rainbow Dash. "I always thought you were alive… I never stopped looking for you." Soarin choked out crying a little.
"don't go all mushy on me Soarin. I left against my own will." Rainbow Dash choked out kissing his nose causing him to blush. Just than spitfire and Fleetfoot screamed in pain and as Soarin and Rainbow Dash quickly looked over at them to find them both on either side of lightning dust clutching their stomachs and she was smiling. "I guess when you are all dead I can create a new wonderbolt team." She said as she made her way towards the love birds. "how are you even still standing?" soaring said flabbergasted.
"when I was training my body is now like an iron fortress. Impenetrable and unstoppable." She laughed as she flew straight at Soarin sending him flying onto the rubble where streak was. And that was what was needed to make rainbow crack. As she slowly stood up she quickly back flipped sending her into the air and then she flew straight into the air and started her new technique. "RAINBOW BARRAGE!"
"not this again rainbow dash."
"ILLUSION BARRAGE!"
"WHAT!" and with that with rainbows speed multiple copies of herself surrounded lightning dust as she frantically looked around trying to find the real one. As she continued to look for the real one quickly they all started to fly straight at her creating rainbooms when they launched she was hit everywhere possible before the real rainbow dash created a chain of rainbooms from straight above her and as they collided with rainbow dash pushing lightning dust into the ground there was a very loud cracking noise as rainbow dash tried to get up but fell back onto the ground passing out.
Sorry boys and girls for what I just did but I needed to finish the part about lightning dust soon cause I was going crazy. She is one of my most hated ponies and up next I want you all to figure out who it is. Also I will be finishing up the pole next week starting on Monday if the winner is she has a foal than I will need to start another pole for how many she has, and then after that genders, and then after that names. I am really hoping that you will stick with the story till the end and after this chapter there will be no bad things happening for what I hope is 10 chapters but when you see a much larger chapter than normal than it is the end to that part of the story. Again I am challenging you all to figure out who is next to and I am thinking of 4 ponies except 3 of them are a team of pony's and one of them isn't even a pony. So sorry again for what you have read in this chapter and I will try soon to make an appropriate chapter that goes around this. And also. I hate the bucking pill I have to take. It keeps on quenching the flow of ideas for this story and I bucking hate it. So I know I may have gotten all of your hopes up on a daily upload but now at least expect an upload every few days. Also I don't really need any flamers for this chapter so please don't do that and that is all I got to say. Well this is MLP Brony Fifer signing off. Chow.