Okay I am sorry to say but… I can't continue this story. Every time I try to rework the plot from chapter ten it ends horribly. So it's being put up for adoption. I made a horrible choice adopting this story and it's just taking up my time from school and updating other stories… I am sorry to the one I took this story from… and I am sorry about how this has ended up… I'm well a rusher and story jumper which does not mix well but it's me…
So if you want to adopt the story you have the choice of either taking the first writers chapters plus my own or just his… I am very sorry and I hope you can all forgive me… maybe someday I'll be able to write good non action stories…
Again I am sorry but this needs to be done so I can update other stories. I hope you can all forgive me.