Hello guys it's been a long time. Sorry for that :) It's just that I kind of gave up on this story (not in entirely, abious) mostly because of my grammar and lack of vocabulary. But it's been some time and if you might notice I've IMPROVED. Don't you agree?
NOW, I wanted to ask you something, HOW MANY OF YOU STILL ARE HERE? I just can't give up, when I know there are still people reading this and waitin for me to update! So here is the thing,
I'm NOT GOING to CONTINUE THIS STORY, BUT I'LL BE WRITING A veryFamiliar one. If you'd like.
HERE IS A SNEAK PEEK:
I watched her, clutching that stuffed animal, taking Isabelle's extended hand with that shy, but beautiful smile, that hypnotized anyone. I could see that Isabelle was already drawn to her. How couldn't she be? After all, Eliss was what she seemed to be, a beautiful, fragile, sweet five year old. That you couldn't help but instantly feel protective of. Isabelle asked, if we would like a quick tour around. Eliss not sure what to say looked at me. It was strange to see those unfamiliar blue eyes and dark, red curls, instead of golden ones. Even her face had slight changes. Yes, she was still beautiful, but something was really off. That Warlock took something. Suddenly, I understood what. Without that golden glow he made her look more...human. I nodded.
"Sure" I said to Isabelle. I knew what she saw when she looked at me. To her I was a thirteen year old girl, whit long, wavy dark red hair and blue eyes. She thought, that me and my sister looked very alike. She thought our father was dead and mother couldn't take care of us anymore, that I and my sister were sent here to be trained by her adoptive brother. She thought she knew that my name was May and my sister's Olivia.
Except, she didn't know anything, because all of it was a lie.
SOOOO What do you think?! Please share you thoughts AND TELL ME IF YOU LIKE IT, OR NOT, WOULD READ IT OR NOT! PLEASE REVIEW! I'VE ACTALLY BEEN THINKING OF THIS BOOK A LOT AND NOT LIKE THE OTHER ONE THIS ONE HAS A LOT OF PLOT WHIT TWISTS AND TURNS
SOOO PLASE SHARE YOUR THOUGHTS! REVIEW! 'COUSE WHITHOUT YOU GUYS THER WON'T BE ANY STORY TO WRITE!
AGAIN, REVIEW!