DISCLAIMER! NOTHING IN RELATION TO KEEPER OF THE LOST CITIES IS OF MY OWN CREATION. IT ALL BELONGS TO THE LOVELY MRS. MESSENGER.
PROLOGUE
The darkness overtook her mind instantly, penetrating every nook and every corner like a hurricane, swift, unrelenting, and deadly.
The cloud of darkness enveloped her mind, with each beat of her faltering heart the vicious storm doubled in size, mercilessly tearing apart all that lay in its wake. A cyclone of razor sharp shadows, all eagerly snatching at her memories, feeding on all that made her who she was.
As each excruciating moment passed, she felt herself slip away. Each pulse of the shadows left more of her cosciousness destroyed, replaced with a cold, sharp, pitch blackness, rubble of her former self. And pain. So much pain. Soon that was all she knew. Suffering so server and unbarable that she could do nothing but beg and sob and scream in hopes it would stop. But it was to no avail for no one could hear her cries for help.
As the cloud beat one last time in tune with her heart she thought of all she was about to lose. Of the family she left behind in the forbidden cities, who would never again know she existed. Of Grady and Endaline who's faces would never light up again with joy after losing a daughter for the second time. Of Aden and his gentle nature, his trademark "no need to worry". Of Fitz, her first friend, and his alluring teal eyes. Of Dex her best friend. Of Bianca who was practically her sister. Of Elwin and Tiergan. Everyone. All the memories of friendship and laughter and love. All gone.
She was gone.
Sophie's mind was broken.
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