ModelP:
First off I want to say thank you. One, for thanking me for following the story but really we should be thanking you for coming up with this stuff. Two. I'd like to thank you for planting what I think are the beginnings of my OTP (JohnxVriska) even though its just a side pairing. I really like how you handled Vriska's character in your story. Most people just portray her as a manipulative b*** and to be honest I thought You were doing the same. but the moment I read the scene on the staircase it really impressed me. You shattered my expectations. I also really like your writing style. Its descriptive enough to get the picture across while not being a giant wall of text that I have to strain my eyes just to separate. What I'm saying is, I eagerly await the next installment.
First off, I want to thank you for your thank you, as lame as this sounds, you guys commenting and favoriting and following my shit makes me happy. It pumps me up to write this wicked shit, (this and awesome remixes/original homestuck songs) and I'm glad that more people are corresponding to Vriska, I mean she is a bitch but she like everyone in the world had problems. And I was hoping to show people that she was deeper than evil. She was, misguided in my view; so you being impressed with me is an ego boost and an all-around awesome feeling, I just hope I continue to please you all.
Lepardlover :
So Sugoi.
Awesome chapter! All up in a little group, letting everything flow. I love it, even if there were noble ships lost in the battle of the feels... Can't wait for the next chapter! :3
Ships that were sunk can still be repaired or made new! I'm glad you're still loving it!
Hithereimgeek:3 words, ThatWas, F***, Adorable! :D excited for the next chapter! :3
Thatwas has now become a new word everyone! Make a fucking note in the dictionary, this shit must be known.
Pepsi-ColaOtaku:
AAAAAAAAAAHHHBBBAHAHAABBAAHA
That was so beautiful. Just wave after fuckin' wave of PURE FEELS! And then, if that's not enough, YOU ADDED SMUUUUUT! I just want to say...I love you.
Okay in all seriousness *clears throat and adjusts glasses* the storyline: beautiful. DirkDave: beautiful. The smut: beautiful. Overall: beautiful.
I can't wait for the next update. I'm just waiting for the wave of feels sure to come from the wedding. I'm glad I read this. Now if you'll excuse me, there's some cold pizza waiting on the stove for me. P-C Otaku owt.
I love you too dude, no worries. Side note, why's the pizza on the stove? Oven that shit!
Xanaischemical:
CRIES BECAUSE BEST FANFICTION literally I was squealing 98.688% of the time. The other 1.312% of the time I was drowned in massive feels. This was just so awesome just AHHH \(w)/
Which means this story has made you 20% more cool, 40% more sugoi, 40% more kawaii and 100% more ironic.
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I AM SOOOOO FUCKING SORRY I HAVEN'T BEEN UPDATING AS FAST, MY LAPTOP WENT AND BROKORO SO I CAN ONLY UPDATE WHEN I HAVE FREE TIME ON MY CAMPUS' COMPUTERS! I WILL TRY TO BE QUICK AND STILL UPDATE, BUT FOR NOW I'VE BEEN SLOWED DOWN… BUT
TO ALL YOU GUYS, THANKS FOR YOUR AWESOME WORDS PAST, PRESENT, AND FUTURE YOUS ARE AWESOME! NEVER BE AFRAID TO PITCH SOMETHING TO ME OR IF YOU WANT A SCENE I COULD LET STRIDE IN GIMME A PM OR SOMETHING! LET'S MAKE SHIT HAPPEN, EVEN IF I DON'T USE IT NOW I COULD LATER AND THEN YA'LL BE LIKE "OOOOOH I SAID THAT SHIT!" AND I WILL CONFIGURE THE STARS TO MY LIKENESS WITH AN ANIME SPARKLE BY MY TEETH AND A THUMBS UP SO THE HEAVENS THEMSELVES WILL SAY "YOU SUGOI MOTHERFUCKER… WELL DONE"
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Dave Sigmund Freud Strider here, amidst what I can only call a kumbayah mosh pit of people telling everyone else their feelings. I sat with Dirk leaning on me as we watched. Rose confessed full out to Kanaya that she was reckless but loved her and went to take her to her mom after Kanaya patched up my shoulder. Karkat teared up and confessed how he hated himself for what happened to everyone. Feferi admitted that with Eridan being so rude to everyone else before was why she didn't want to be more than friends right now. He nodded and said she was the only one who understood him at first with his parents expecting so much.
"I was too much rage and you were being so shellfish about everyfin!" Feferi cried
"I'm sorry guys… it's just wwith my parents bein famous aquatic showwmen I got stressed… then angry." He confessed, "So I wwon't let myself get so douche-y anymore." He smirked
"That'll be real thweet athhat." Sollux smirk and lightly punched his arm before Eridan punched him back.
"Whale… Sollux while we're doing this… I just want you to know I was reel-y in love with how in love you're with Aradia… I might have not even been in love with you… So Aradia I'm sorry I moved onto your buoy-friend last year…" She smiled sadly
"Feferi, I was jealous of how bubbly and lively you were… while I'm so dull and quiet you brought life and color… I love Sollux, and I understand if you had fallen for him as well." Aradia smiled
"AA I thtill think you overethtimate me…" Sollux lisped, "But I love you… flushed for you…"
"Red for you…" She replied smiling.
"Aradia," Equius started, "I had long entertained ideas of loving you too… but Nepeta will always be first to me… even I was not STRONG enough to help her… I couldn't have gone through what you went through Captor. You have my respect." He bowed his head low and turned to Nepeta, "And to you, Nepeta… I love you… in every way." He started to pour sweat while everyone gasped a bit.
"Equius! I love you too! Fur-ever you've been like… a pale love! But there's always been a small purr-cent that was… redder… You're my other half!" Nepeta purred
"E-excellent…" He sighed, he had held his breath he turned a deep blue for a bit… I smirked and turned to Dirk and saw him looking at me from the corner of his eyes. I kissed his cheek and nuzzled my face into his neck for a moment before I heard Tavros start to murmur.
"uh… Vriska… I liked you too… sorta I was really confused and thought maybe you hated me… but I uh can't love you… I love Gamzee and I'm not a good enough m-match for you. I was never confident to move on my own… I kept thinking if I waited… and could stand again… I would be more confident… but I never was… you need someone kind but confident… and I'm not that. I'm neither…" Tavros smiled sadly
"Tavros you're kind… stupidly so." Vriska smirked sniffing
"Tav-bro you're a kind, and caring motherfucker… be more confident." Gamzee smiled
"Yeeeeeeeeah Tavros, don't be so booooooooring." Vriska said sarcastically smiling, "Well… that's enough feels for 8 years….. I'm going home… I got a video chat date to watch Con Air." She smiled at me and stood up. "Later guys."
"Laaaaaaaame." I drawl smirking
"Says the topless blonde." She smirks back
"Jealous ho." I chuckle and wave her goodbye.
"Fef… you wwanna get goin for the aquarium still?" Eridan asked
"OH! I forgot a-boat that! I don't want the tickets to go to waste…" She stood up, "C'mon Eridan! We have a date!" She grinned and Eridan looked so happy, he even teared up a little.
"Yeah! Wwe'll see you later!" He waved and ran with Feferi out the door.
"N-Nepeta… shall we go to the fair? To see the cats and hoofed beasts?" Equius stammered
"Yup yup!" She grinned and pounced onto his back with her cat plush, "Do you wanna come purr-ay with us Aradia, Sollux?" Nepeta offered
"I think we're going to go and explore the caverns nearby…" Aradia started
"Yeah, you 2 go have a thweet firtht date." Sollux grinned before he led Aradia out holding her hand.
"Hee hee. Okay! Bye bye guys!" She grinned at us and left on Equius who only nodded and sweat.
I stood up and pulled Dirk with me, "Well I think you guys need some privacy to talk this shit out… so we're gonna go." I explain before smirking at Karkat, "Besides Karkitten, you delivered my message… I have an agenda to keep." I chuckled at his red face and flashed away with Dirk in tow.
"FUCK YOU, YOU FUCKSTICK NOOKSTAIN!" he shouted behind us. I laughed aloud and tugged Dirk with me to the stairwell so no one would see my bandages or shirtless-ness.
"Dave… why don't we do the date tomorrow… you're hurt let's just go to our place and rest." Dirk offered, I stopped and turned to him.
"You don't mind?" I asked, I was willing to man up and theme park/arcade it up, but falling asleep holding Dirk sounded great. Plus, I loved how he said "our place"
"Nah, honestly I want to… when you went after an insane clown… I was afraid you wouldn't come back…" His voice started to shake so I pulled him against me in the stairway and kissed him hard, crushing him in between the wall and I.
"You can feel me, I'm real and here... I'll always come back to you… even if I have to become some fucked up ghost thing." I smile
"Like a spirit?" He breathed out
"That's lame, like I'm some guardian angel? Pfft." I snort shrugging at the thought of me with wings.
"A sprite then?" he suggested
"A whuh?" I quirk a brow as Dirk starts to snicker
"Well, they could be called leprechauns… or an elf… but for you I'd say a nymph." He smirked
"Why's that?" I challenge
"Nymphs are known to be really sexy… and sexual." He answered before licking his lips a little. "And that kiss was sprite worthy…mmm Davesprite..." he whispered in my ear before flicking his tongue against the shell, I shivered a little and grabbed his hand.
"…Let's get home. NOW." I growl and flash down the steps with him to Rose's car, I fished the keys out and jumped in. Once buckled he held my hand while I drove and sang along with whatever came on the radio. "You have a nice voice." I smile and stroke my thumb over the back of his hand.
"Mmm… I don't sing often though." He shrugs
"When I finish writing that song for you… I'll sing it. But you have you learn it and sing it back." I tell him
"…Deal." He smiles and leans over my shoulder, "but don't hope for too much."
"There's not much more I want." I smile and hold him until the lights turned green. I speed quickly but keep us safe and finally we pull in to Rose's space. I lock the car and practically drag Dirk upstairs flash stepping the whole way. We agreed on my place since Bro's going to be gone already and bust into the living room. I push him backwards onto the couch and straddle him. "We never got to have morning fun..." I hum before kissing him harshly.
"Mmm... better make up for it now..." He groans and I smile into the kiss before forcing his mouth open. I remove his shirt and rub my hands across his chest, settling on one of his nipples while I move to suck on his neck. I bite down and his arms wrap around my neck. "Dave..." He moans I move my hips and rub against him gasping at the friction. Fuck this isn't new but he always feels amazing...
"Mmm Dirk-FUCK!" I hiss, his hand moved to my shoulder blade and I had jerked against it. Dirk sat up and looked at my bruise. He took a deep breath and kissed me softly.
"Wait here, I have something for that." He smiled softly and flashed to the bedroom. I heard him leave out the window and I sigh trying to calm little Dave, the pain made it go away some so I just took a few deep breaths and waited for him. "Lie and your back." I heard him say. I opened my eyes to see he held some heating oil or something and sighed.
"Can't it wait?"
"Nope, you're hurt." He then pushed me down lightly and turned me over. He sat on my ass lightly and I chuckled.
"You better not take advantage of me Babe." I teased, I'd be happy if he wanted to.
"Mm... no promises dude." He moaned and started to rub the cream on me. It tingled and started to warm, I moaned a little as the pained soothed and his massaging skills started to make me relax. He worked my shoulders and upper back, moving to my sides. I felt his hand caress my ribs and shoulders softly before I felt his lips at the base of my neck. I moaned as he kissed and sucked there before lightly biting me.
"Tease..." I mumble into the couch, I feel his hands rub my lower back and he lets his fingers snap my gym shorts a bit before sliding them off and rubbing my boxer-clad ass.
"Seriously... this is one plush rump Dave..." He purrs leaning over me to whisper in my ear before licking the shell. I move my arm around his shoulder and pull him down to kiss me. He licks my lip and i open, letting him dominate the kiss and suck on my tongue. I groan as his hand moves to cup my ass over my boxers before he slips under and moves one oiled finger to my entrance.
"Dirk" I groan out as he slowly pushes it in, fuck its warm...
"Relax... it's all for you right now." He sighs and goes back to kissing my neck and back while he slowly moves his finger back and forth. It feels weird but nothing el-
"Oh fuck..." I hiss when a second finger comes to join the fruity rumpus party. I feel him stop moving his fingers while his other hand comes under me and grabs my dick. He starts pumping and i moan into the couch.
"Don't do that... I wanna hear you." He murmurs against my shoulder and I groan.
"Fuuuck Dirk..." I gasp as I turn my head to kiss him. I bite his lip and he grunts, he breaks away and kisses up to my ear.
"Dave... can you get on all fours?" He pants in my ear before biting down on the dark love bite he made on my shoulder.
"Uhn... y-yeah." I grunt as his thumb brushes my slit, his fingers are scissoring slightly and he starts pumping them back in. I lean on my forearms and knees and Dirk Lowers my boxers with his teeth, pumping faster with them gone. "Dirk... Fuck babe." I moan while he pushes his fingers deeper, "FUCK!" I shout once he hits something, my arm give out but I'm still on my knees face against the couch cushions and ass in the air. He squeezes my cock harder and keeps brushing his fingers over my sweet spot, I shudder as his tongue glides over my spine before he moves to lean over me, his hard-on pressing against my ass cheek while he moans against my ear. He grinds against me while he leans over and smirks darkly.
"Dave I want you to moan my name loud when I hit your spot... I want you to moan so loud you wake the whole building... Got it?" He bites my ear as I whimper.
"Fuuuuck Dirk..." I whine, not used to being the one under.
"Dave..." He stops all his movements. "Turn around, and hold your legs up..."
"Oh god..." I groan and turn around. He lays me on my back and smirks while I grab my legs behind the knees.
"So fucking hot." He moans and puts his fingers back inside, hitting my spot straight on.
"DIRK" I groan, he just leans down and takes my member into his mouth while i writhe under him, moving down on his fingers and bucking up into his mouth. "shitshitshit... DIIIIIIRK!" I shout as I release into his mouth. He moves up and some splashes on my chest, he's panting hard and he smirks before he takes his shades off and leans down to lick my chest clean.
"Mmm... I hope you're still up for more..."
"Fuck yes..." I groan
Sweet..." He whispers against my chest before kissing my thighs. He stands off the couch and carries me to my bedroom. He sets me down and rips my boxers off my knees, stripping his own clothes off and leans over me. I feel his hard on against my shaft and that alone gets it harder. He leans so our chests touch and kisses me deep. I moan into his mouth and rub up against his member. He hisses, "Damn tease..."
"You didn't get off yet..." I moan as I keep rutting against him watching him moan.
"I said it was all about you..." He groans and I wrap my legs around him and jerk against him hard "FUCK DAVE!" he gasps
"It's about US, Dirk, now c'mon," I grunt "help me out here!" I hiss
"On it..." He hisses and spreads and lifts my legs onto his shoulders while he thrusts against my erection with his. "Oh gog yes..." He moans he starts thrusting fast against me, humping me into my mattress.
"Oh sweet Jegus fuck Dirk... yes..." I chant, I move my hand to his shaft and grab around him softly squeezing while he thrusts. Fucking my hand and humping me hard.
"Uhn... Dave..." He grunts spilling over me, I wait letting him catch his breath but before i say anything he grabs my ass and pulls himself up to his knees. "Grab the headboard." He hisses and ruts against me even harder, grinding and jerking his hips so deep into mine I can't believe we're not even fucking.
"Oh gog DIRK" I groan, he puts his hand by my mouth and I start licking and sucking it right away, coating his fingers before he rips them away and thrusts them into me, dead on my prostate. "OH FUCK YES!" I shout, I start moaning Dirk's name like a whore and thrust against his hard-on and back on his fingers getting him to brush my spot every time. I gasp as I see nothing but white and feel myself release against Dirk. I let go of the headboard and Dirk barely catches me before setting me down softly. I can feel his hard on still on my thigh. "Put it in my mouth..." I gasp still trying to get air.
"You're tired..." He smiles brushing my hair, I bite his hand to make him stop.
"And you're hard. Put it in my mouth, I wanna taste you..." I smirk as his cheeks look a little more flushed. He crawls over me and lowers himself on my face. I take him in and start to lazily lick the underside, moving to flick my tongue against his tip and sucking him hard.
"Oh fuck Dave..." He groans holding the headboard where I was just a moment ago. He starts to thrust in my mouth so I relax as best I can and feel him hit the back of my throat. I suck hard as he pulls back and taste his release as he finishes with a moan of my name. He shudders a bit and moves of me. I swallow what's in my mouth and smile at him as he lays beside me.
"I feel better now... thanks." I grab his hand and bring it to my mouth to place a kiss on top.
"Mmm just wanted to treat the knight well..." He sighs
"Mm... after a nap, I could use a sponge bath..." I joke.
"Okay." He smiles and kisses me and pulls the sheets over us. "After the nap..." He yawns and I pull him to lie against my chest, facing each other. I move forward and kiss him lazily but loving and sigh when we break away. I brush his hair out of his face and kiss his forehead.
"Goodnight... sweet Prince..." I ironically quote before I drift off to the Land of Dreams and Dirk.