Kitsune

by Psychedelic Daydream

James was just an average boy, until he met Hunter. Suddenly he is sucked into a world he never thought could exsist, and apparently, only he can save all of them. Of course, he has to natrully save them from destruction by a giant, flame earing, ice spewing, pus ozing, immortal shadow moster. Whats a guy to do?

22. Hook, Line, and Sinker

Hey, yous guyses! What is up? I am back, baby, and completely fresh out of ideas! If you lovely people have any helpful suggestions of what you want to see happen next, please leave it in the comments below!

I have been wondering if I should switch back to Adian and Vector's POV, or if I should stay with the rest of the group. Maybe just let Sammy have a chapter for himself on his little mini-quest~

Also, if you don't want to leave a plot line, you could just leave a starting sentence, a beginning line, a hook, line, and sinker! Ok, that was stupid. Oh, well! But, really, if you just want to leave a beginner sentence, that would be extremely helpful, and I could build off of it. You would get complete credit, of course!

However, if you don't leave any of these, just constructive criticism would be really nice. I don't want only comments like, 'Wow! This story is amazing!', even though those are very uplifting and I am really glad to hear people are enjoying it. But, it really doesn't help me become a better writer, and that's my main focus here. I may only be 13, but I have big dreams for the future!

Ok, if you read all the way to the bottom, thank you! Here, have some virtual pie!

Now, go and review, review, review!