Hey sorry of you think that the 1st chapter was not good. Its my first time hehehe hope you enjoy ch 2
CH 2 (Finding Pridelands)
3 Days have past since the death of his parents, mixd emotions took over. As He just found out that his mate jaha was pregnant with his cubs. his fight with kuza, and his brother... (Zub where are you)? His heart clench at the though of his brother. Maybe if he did not told his brother to run he might still be here and he would still be protected by the pride. He sight. He failed to protect his only brother (If only i was strong enough i could have still protected you my brother... Forgive me zub) Then he heard a soft voice. "My King are you okay"? Said a peach lioness "Im Fine" Mohatu said "King Mohatu we have found a place unclaimed" said a cream lioness. "Show me Diku and Kayla" Mohatu replied "This way your highness" diku said as she and kayla leads mohatu to the unclaimed lands that soon will become pridelands.
A young cub was running. Nothing could stop him, he kept running and running until his paws can knowmore give further service. (What am i gonna do... Im lost...) then he heard a voice from the deep forest "Come out come out where ever you are zuba, you cant hide forever fool" Pure evil was on his voice (oh know, huh a cave, this will do) Zuba spotted a cave. He enters the cave. But he was unlucky because the sooner he enters the cave the sooner kuza found him. "Well well well... Its nice of you to make this easy for me eh zuba" Kuza said ready to kill the innoccent cub. Zuba Gasped (Is this the end for me... Save me mohatu)
"Were Here your majesty" Diku said with a smile "Its... Amazing" Mohatu said shocked as they made there way through the savannah admiring the beauty of these lands. "Mohatu! mohatu!" Ah dark red lioness with red amber eyes was standing above the slope running down the slope as soon as she saw mohatu. "Jaha careful yourself you might her yourself and our cub" Mohatu said full of concern. "Im fine mohatu" jaha said rolling her eyes "Well... Its... Beautiful" Mohatu Said "well do you like it" jaha said "well yes i love it" mohatu said "Well then claim it eveyone else loves the pridelands and we could raise our cubs here it would be a dream come true" Jaha said full of happiness "pridelands"? Mohatu said confused "well do you like it"? Jaha said suprised "No i love it, its perfect ja it really is but there is just one problem..." Mohatu said as he's happiness turn into a sad one. "Well what's wrong"? "Nothing its perfect" mohatu said as he regain his happiness. "Well alright" Jaha said defeated.
Well there you have it hope you like it you can make some suggestions at ch 3 if you like dont forget to review hehehe.