That so many liked my story as it is and was sad to hear about me pulling it warms a cold Norwegian heart (it's cold because summer is holding back).
Someone gave me several tips, a girl who started to read my story today, I think, and I've decided to just let it be for now. You can all read it over and over again if you wish to.
Instead of pulling it, I'm going to sit down with pen and paper, the story in front of me and rewrite from around chapter four. I will give Bella a spine and Edward a heart, and let Rose and Alice stay where they are: abroad. I will not mix them further into the story like I've already have.
If you all are patient with me, I hope to have the rewritten story ready in short time (short time being a month perhaps).
Be well!
DevilsWriter