So, this story and the writing are pretty awful.
Considering that I was 12 (and English is not my first language) when I wrote this, I'm going to re-write it. I know its been years and there is a very big possibility that no one will read this, or if they do, they will not care at all. However, since I know I can do better, I will be re-writing it and continuing. It will probably be an entirely different story, because the current one is terrible, but the premise will still be the same.
I will start re- posting and publishing new chapters once I get at least 5 or 6 chapters in and find a beta, because even with my English being much better than it was in 2009, I'm still human and no one is perfect.