Okay, yes, I am mean. Don't worry, it only goes downhill for poor Phoenixpaw...On the brighter side. Thank you to LadyofStarclan, Mike viper, and Sunnypelt for reviewing or p.m.-ing me . Don't forget to review and p.m. me if you want. (I still feel kinda lonely on this file)
I have vague memories of what happened next. An image appeared of being taken through the forest on something soft, a back I guess, and the presence of two cold bodies being dragged across the ground nearby. Then of a worried face peering at me, saying something that I couldn't catch. Then I woke up. I was in a dark, flat, grassy clearing in the cleft of a rock. It was cold, unnaturally cold for being greenleaf. I began to panic. "Where am I? What am I doing here? Why is it so cold?"
An annoyed hiss came from outside. "Keep still Grasskit! And then maybe I'll be able to get that thorn out."
"Help!," I whimpered.
"Hold on a second," it meowed again. She walked in and saw me."Phoenixpaw, you're awake!" she purred.
"Of course, why wouldn't I be?" Now I recognized where I was. I was in the medicine den, with Spottedleaf worrying over me. I was still in Thunderclan!
She ignored my question. "I'll let Bluefur and Graystripe know. Lionheart is on patrol right now, but I'll tell him when he comes back."
Questions buzzed through my head. Bluefur? Graystripe? Lionheart? What happened? But she disappeared before I could ask another question. Moments later, Bluepaw came in. "Phoenixpaw! Your finally awake!" Bluepaw cried.
"Finally? Bluepaw, what's going on?"
"Bluefur," she corrected.
"Bluefur? Your warriors now! Am I stuck alone with Ebonypaw and Mousepaw in the apprentice's den?"
"Ebonyclaw and Mousetail."
"Am I alone? Bluefur, how long have I been out?" I was shivering in fear as a long pause followed my question.
"I'm so sorry, Phoenixpaw," she muttered, her voice as soft as kit beading.
"How long," I demanded, fearing the answer.
She let out a shuddering sigh. "Two moons."
"What?" My voice squeaked with sadness.
"It's okay," Graypaw...no, Graystripe assured me.
"Well, Palestream had a litter of kits. Oran-"
"I know, Orangestripe and Fluffstorm are dead."
She looked surprised. "How, did you see them?"
A wave of sadness hit me again as I imagined their bodies at my paws, then they changed, and it was Lickingflame and Mapleshade, now their blood mixed with mine and my paws where stained with it. I felt horror numb my limbs as I just now fully realized what I just did. I killed a Starclan warrior! What had I been thinking? I thought it was her fault that Fluffstorm and Orangestripe were dead! I reminded myself. I was blinded by anger.
"This isn't over!" I heard a hiss in my ear. "You will join me."
At that moment I realized that no matter what I did or where I went, Mapleshade would walk there until I broke and walked with her again in the Dark Forest. "Phoenixpaw!" Graystripe cried. "Bluefur catch her she's-" I fell to the ground, landing heavily on the soft grass as my mind forced it's way to unconsciousness.
Sorry if these chapters seem so short, it seems much longer on my Openofficice thingy. Uh, any Ocs please submit looking like this.
Name:
Position:(kit, apprentice, warrior, medicine cat. Deputies and leaders are taken)
Appearance:
Clan:
Extra information:
Ex.
Name: Whiskerflank
Position: Medicine cat
Appearance: Fluffy white and orange tortoiseshell with amber eyes
Clan: Riverclan
Extra information: Once trained as a warrior
I don't own Warriors but I own Phoenixpaw, most of the other characters... Remember, Oc's and reviews, and P.M.'s! Please check out my poll for this. (I need to figure put what you guys want.) If you have any ideas you want to share it will be considered! And mentioned!