thank you to everyone who left a review or Private messaged me with advice
well, i made the chapters short to make reading it easier,and the updates faster, but if you want i can make it longer(though it would take more time)
and, well i'm not going to drop this in a few days(i'm taking a short break from the other stories i'm doing and working on this one for a change)
i'll re-write the chapters and update it
thanks for the advice guys!