hope you like it. Story gets a little more interesting I a couple chapters.
Pain. Pain in my arms; my scars I instantly thought. But I 'm dead. Do the dead feel pain? Then there was a voice calling in the distance:
"hello... are you ok ... can you hear me ?...hello" I felt a thud and the numbness disappeared; I slowly opened my eyes to see Nico's head looming over me. I quickly realized that he was kneeling over me shaking my shoulders.
"thank the gods your ok" he said slightly exasperated. I could see the concern in his burning in my arms got worse; when I looked to my side's they looked normal, my selves at least covered my scars.
"w-w-what happened?" I finally managed. A hint of confusion crossed Nico's face, "you don't remember?" He asked. "I kinda do." I said barely louder than a whisper,"it's all a blur. Diddent I do something really stupid though?". Nico cracked a small smile; "you shure did" he laughed," you tried to fight a giant by yourself." I nodded forcing a smile; "what happened to the giant? Is Reyna ok?"I asked desperately . I needed to know that Reyna was safe, that she diddent die for me.
Nico's face turned serious; I braced myself for the worst "Reyna's fine we gave her ambrosia, we gave you some too. you've been out for awhile." He said purposely not answering my first question. I let out a breath. "That's good. What about the giant" I said staring directly into his deep brown eyes. He quickly looked away; "you should get some rest." he said quietly, avoiding my question again. "Not until you tell me what happened" I said firmly even though my arm was so painful it almost made me scream and I diddent even have the energy to sit up. Nico avoided my eyes and said flatly "you killed it". Horror and confusion crossed my face; how did I? What.. What am I? It takes a demi God and a God to kill a giant.
my body started shaking as I tried to sit up only to let out a small scream when I tried to put any weight on my arms.I just fell back down. I'm so helpless. I can't even sit up, how on earth did I kill a giant? Reyna and Coach walk over hearing my scream. Reyna shows no sign of what happened last night, which is good except the distrust in their eyes has grown. I don't think she will ever fully trust me.
Nico, seeing the pain in my eyes helped me sit up. "Are you ok?" Said Reyna lightly as if she diddent really care. I tried to nod; but instead screamed again the pain in my arms had pushed me to my limit. I pulled up one of my selves to see my scars where glowing! I screamed again pulling up the other sleeve. Horror hit them all in the face. Oh no they saw! They saw! Not a living soul had seen my scars. Now they where glowing I doubled over, clutching my stomach. Tears rolled down my face.I tried getting up but only managed to my knees before vomiting up glowing golden liquid. Ambrosia I quickly thought as the pain lessened a little but then came back stronger and I started vomiting again.
minutes maybe an hour later, I stoped vomiting. I don't think there was anything left in my stomach. I leaned back and passed out into the cold arms of whoever was behind me; letting the cold dark numbness consume me.
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