Pitch Black: I think I'm in love

What the hell is down there!

Raven's POV

As we walked back to the ship I was walking on the spine of one of the bones things and Riddick was walking under me. We were quite for some time.

Till he jumped up and walked right beside me, He was the one that broke the silent.

"So how did you come to be in this life style?"

I was quite for a little bet

"I killed my dad and been on my own ever censes."

"How old were you when it happened?"

"8."

"When made you kill him at 8 years old."

"Are you asking my story Mr. Riddick?" I asked him in a joking voice.

He smiled at me and gave a nod.

"I'll tell you later it's not the happiest story ok, anyway where here."

"Raven I will found out you know that."

"Yeah I know but I'm not ready now ok so drop it."

And he did we were quite all the way to the ship and I watched as the man that was sitting on top of the ship 'or what was left of it' I kicked the ship and watch as he jumped in his set. I smirk and did it again and this time he jumped right out of his set and went below.

Riddick looked at me like I lost my mind but I just smiled at him and walked up to the top where the man was sitting before Riddick sat in the chair and I sat right next to him.

We was looking at the other survives that was in the back and saw a man walking up to the door and as the others stopped just before they hit him he was shot by Zeke that was taking the dead and putting them in a hole.

I snickered at the people and Riddick was looking at me like I lost my mind. I just smiled at him and looked back at the people blow.

"I don't think they will last much longer if this is how they are."

"That is what makes this so fun."

I rolled my eyes at him and saw Zeke load the dead man on the plank and started dragging him to the pit.

I got up and fallowed him and I could feel Riddick behind me as I followed him. I got very close to Zeke when he pulled back the tarp and there were no bodies in there.

The man jumped in the pit and I moved closer to the pit when something grabbed him I jumped in the pit and grabbed Zeke but he was pulled from me I was just about to help him when Riddick grabbed me around my waist. I looked at him with a cold glare.

"You can't help him now he's already dead."

I knew he was right but that did not stop me wanting to kill the thing that was killed Zeke.

My animal side was screaming at me to kill the threat to myself.

We started running after we heard people coming are way but as we were just cleared the pit site Riddick was hit out of no were by Johns. I looked at him and the look he gave me told me to run so I did.

I was just about to clear the spick when I saw Clark with a gun pointing at me. So I made a B-line for the ship I ran through the spicks I just came in site of the ship when I felt a pain in the back of my neck I grabbed at it and found a dart. I got dizzy and just before I fell I saw Riddick looking at me then everything went black.

Riddick's POV

I was being dragged to the ship when I heard a gunshot and I felt my heart fall, I started looking around trying to find Raven and I did she had something in her hand and I saw that it was a dart.

Then she looked at me and then she passed out. It was then that the other merc came up to her and looked smug I let a growl out when I saw he was going to touch her.

But the holy man and the woman that had kicked me was picking her up and fallowing me in to the ship where they changed up again. After that they left and I looked at Raven and was looking her over to make sure she was ok I don't know why I felt like this but I do and I didn't want to fight it. This girl was something different.

I was brought out of my though when she started to fight to wake up.

Raven's POV

I could feel my body up and wanting to move but my eyes was not opening and felt like they weighted 100 ponds. But I heard movement to my right and I found it a little easier to open my eyes to open.

I looked around to find that I was in the ship and something moved to my right again and I looked to see Riddick he was looking at me.

"Well hello sunshine."

"I'm gonna kick your ass Riddick."

"Why would you do that?"

"I told you if we got caught or I got shot I was gonna kick your ass so beware."

He just chuckled at me.

We were looking around when Clark, Johns, Fry, and Jack came into the ship. I loved the look on Clarks face and I made sure I smiled at him when he came closer.

"How the hell are you awake that dart had enough trank., To keep you asleep for 2 days?"

"well I guess you're losing your touch Clarky."

He turned red that Fry, Jack, and I laughed hard and long. But then when it died down there was a heavy silence that was broken by Fry.

"So where's the body?"

No response from Riddick.

"Well you want to tell me about the sounds, Riddick. You told Johns that you heard something right before…" Fry said.

Again no response from Riddick.

"How about you Shadow, you want to tell me what the hell happened?" Fry asked.

She got no response from me.

She looked between Riddick and me before she said something that pissed me off.

"You don't what to talk to me that's fine… but just so you know there's a debate right now to see if we should just leave you here… both of you."

Just as she started to walk away Riddick spoke but he was looking at me the whole time.

"You mean the whispers?"

And with that we had her.

"What whispers?" Fry Asked

I caught on fast and answered her.

"The one that's telling me to go for the sweet spot just to the left of the spine fourth lumbar down, the abdominal aorta." I said

Riddick picked up where I left off.

"It's a metallic taste human blood copperish, if you cut it with pepper snaps that goes away…" Fry cut him off.

"You want to shock me with the truth now." Fry said

It was quite for a little while Riddick was now looking at Fry and she was looking right back at him. I was just looking back and forth between the two of them.

Riddick was the one to break the silence this time.

"All you people are so scared of Raven and I. Most day's I would take that as a complement buts it's not us you got to worry about now." He said.

Fry looked thoughtful for a moment then she spoke.

"Show me your eyes Riddick."

"You'd have to come a lot closer then that" Riddick said.

I don't know why but I didn't like that Fry was getting closer to him I felt like that was my and only my right and from the look Riddick passed me he knew I felt that way.

As fry got closer I felt a growl come up my throat.

"Closer." Riddick said.

And Fry moved to close for my likings.

Then Riddick jumped at her and Fry jumped like a foot in the air while moving back. But you could see his eyes and I was in awe, they were beautiful.

They were like a blue-silver and glowed.

We heard Jack move closer 'damn I forgot the others were still here.'

"Where the hell can I get eyes like that?" Jack asked Riddick that was now sitting back beside me and I don't know but I looked away from him when he looked at me and look at Jack.

I still felt him looking at me as he answered the kid's question.

"You got to kill a few people." Riddick said

"I can do that." Jack told him.

"Then you got to get sent to a slam where they tell you you'll never see daylight again." Riddick continued.

"You dig up a doctor…you pay him twenty menthol kools to do a surgical shine job on your eyes…" Jack finished for Riddick.

"So you can see who sneakin' up on you in the dark." Jack smiled.

"Exactly!" Riddick smiled at the kid.

"Leave." Fry told Jack and the kid smile went down.

I was about to snap at Fry when I felt Riddick's hand squeezes mine I knew he was telling me to stay put. I took it as he was trying to protecting her and I don't know why but that made me even madder. I took my hand from his.

"Leave." Fry said again.

"Cute kid." Riddick said after Jack was gone.

"Did I kill a few people? …sure, did I kill Zeke? ...no. You got the wrong killer." He told them.

Johns was tired with Riddick's games and took Fry's spot in front of Riddick.

"He's not in the hole we looked." Johns said.

I spoke this time.

"Look deeper." I told them.

Johns came up to me with a smirk as he grabbed my cuffs.

"Fine but you're the one going down there." He told me.

"The fuck I am." I yelled at him.

I heard Riddick growl and tried to move in front of me but Johns was already pulling me with them.

I could have sworn I heard Riddick tell me to 'be safe'.

They dragged me to the pit and all the saviors was there.

As Johns put me in front of the hole where he took off my hands cuffs.

Shazza looked at me before she told me.

"Please try to find Zeke when your down there."

I turned to her.

"I'll try and sorry I tried to help I did but they had a strong hold on him." I told her.

She hugged me and wished me luck.

I turned back to the hole and when to it just before I when in I took off my necklace.

"Jake can you hole this for my please I won't need it." I asked.

"Yeah sure no prob."

I smiled at her and I could feel the change coming so I went to the hole and started to crawl down it.

I felt the change over take my ears moved to the top of my head and my hearing became sharper and they had fur on them, my smelling was stronger and shaper, my eyes stayed the same but her vision was sharper and brighter, my human nails grew into deadly claws, my canines grew into fangs, my speed, my strength, and my mind was faster and stronger.

I got to the end of the hole and landed in a tunnel that went everywhere I could see things in the shadows. I could see them very well and I they were predators but they must have found me a bigger one because they did nothing but watch me. So I left them alone and moved on to find Zeke. I put my noise up and started to smell around when I came to a place a little away for the hole I went through and I found what was ever left of Zeke.

I felt sad for Shazza.

I turned to go back when I saw some new things have gotten there and they were blocking my way. I knew these were going to fight me and I felt joy 'It's been a good while sense I had a good fight.' I thought as one of them came at me I smiled as I swiped him with my claws and he fall dead the others seem to have second thoughts about attacking me. But they got over it and attacked me all at once and I took all of them down but they got some good hits in on my and that seemed to give the others some balls because they started surrounding me.

But I got out of there and started crawling up a random hole trying to get away from them but they grabbed the rope that was tied to me.

"Help me…I'm in here I'm in side." I screamed as loud as I could.

I looked down and saw like 50 trying to pull me down to them.

"Help please Jack, Fry, Shazza, Imam someone please help me!" I screamed again.

Not even two seconds a rock climbing pick broke into the spick and a hand came in my view and I grabbed it without a seconded thought.

As they was pulling my through everyone was talking at once jack was saying that he heard he first imam and fry was asking if I was ok.

Johns held me to his chest as he and Imam dragged me out of the hole. Once I was out Imam let go but Johns did not and I was a little uneasy but as soon as the things below grabbed on to the rope again and pulled I was glad that he did not let go as I went back to the hole I clung to Johns.

"Get it off me. Get it off my please!" I yelled as the things pulled harder.

Johns pulled out his knife and cut if off me and we fell to the ground with me still being held be Johns.

As I started to get up he let me go and it was only then I saw everyone looking at me in shocked, it was then I remembered that I was in my true form.

"I'll tell everyone about this later ok please I need to get my wounds looked at."

They all gave a yes and we walked back to the ship. As we walked back Shazza walked with me.

"I know it's no point to ask but…did you find Zeke down there?" she asked me I looked at her and stopped walking, I looked her right in the eyes.

"Yeah I did but Shazza the only thing that was left was his foot I'm so sorry." I told her and looked down.

Shazza did something that someone has not done to me in a very long time, Shazza came to me and gave me a hug as she cried and I gave it back to here. I did not know that everyone stopped and was now looking at us till I heard Clark clear his throat. We broke a port and looked at everyone some had socked looks other smiled.

"I think you're going soft Shadows, where's the killer I know you are deep down." Clark sneered at me.

"I only kill when I have a reason to Clark. I have never killed someone without them doing something to me to have me kill them."

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