The Price of Victory

by artist369

(Dark Parallel 10th Doctor). REWRITE. When a young blond woman claims to be on a journey from parallel to parallel to stop an ominous threat, the Time Lord Victorious is determined to break squash her goals of escape, but he doesn't count on what happens next. (Canon friendly and professionally illustrated).

23. Chapter 23

This chapter is to alert everyone of the extensive changes to this story.

Thank you everyone who has read and commented. Your encouragement has led me to pursue writing beyond the scope of fanfiction. To that end, I rewrote this story with the goal of improving my craft. I learned a lot, and you'll notice the story has been streamlined, though the most important elements are still in-tact. My goal was to make Victor a more realistic character, and remove myself from the writing to allow the story and the character to shine through. I've improved leaps and bounds now that I've invested in books, lectures, and read every article I can find on writing.

The story is only 15 chapters long now. The remaining chapters are blank, but I'm leaving them up to keep the old reviews in place. Thank you so much. Please give it another read. With the added scenes, it will be well worth your time. And I hope you come to love the characters as much as I do.