Well, I am so embarrassed about that mess up! I'm sorry you guys had to suffer... and what do you guys think? Anything to watch out for? Any good ideas? Please R&R and flames will go into the fire pit! :D please voice your opinions, it could be negative, as long as they aren't insults. Ex: Critique: "your story has a lot of errors" insults: "your story is so poorly written that it looks a 7 year old wrote it" I take any critiques, as long as they're not the latter (insults) :3