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Previously on captured;
She whimpered with the loss, as I wanted to also. "I will ALWAYS be next to you," I whispered as I placed a chaste kissed to her now swollen lips. I hope everything I wanted to say in words but could not, was understood into the kiss. Her frenzied breathing started to decrease, and with that, I put her legs down and back on the ground.
As soon as her feet touched the ground, reality made an appearance, an appearance of..James.
NOW;
Edwards Point of View:
The night was getting closer, with each step we made; it seemed that our blood would freeze just a little bit more. Our minds were in their own separate world. The path we were taking ended a long time ago. Now we were tripping over rocks, sticks, and fallen tree trunks. I'm not exactly sure if where we are even going. We often hear cars slowly drive by, but neither us have stopped them, why? I am not sure.
I wish I was dreaming; it would make this experience more surreal. I wish that I could just wake up and go downstairs with my family and eat breakfast. I wish that I could have met Bella on different occurrences. Of course, I wish for a lot of things. Does it mean that they will come true? No. The wishes I asked for are more of "Wants". Though, i know that everything happens for a reason. Doesn't necessarily make it fair.
"Bella, we need to find shelter, this is ridiculous, we can't keep walking to a place that we don't even know where is at! We need to find some wood to make a fire, and then we need to relax! Please?" I asked desperately. Even though I knew it probably wouldn't work, she was pretty stubborn.
"We can't sleep out here! We'd probably be mauled by some bear! Ugh, you don't think do you?!" She growled in frustration. If I wasn't so exhausted, I'd probably think that was sexy. Oh who am I kiddin'? It still is sexy.
"We need to sleep Bella, You haven't slept in over 15 hours, nor ate. You need food and you need to sleep if you want to even think about continuing to walk. Please Bella? Please?" I begged.
We stopped walking and my feet almost died of happiness! I let out a sigh of relief. But not for long, between the mosquitoes, and her death glare I sucked in a deep fast breath preparing a long chew out the ass rant. But when she opened up her mouth, she let out a huge yawn. I couldn't, even though I seriously tried, hold back my smirk. She was just as tired.
I let out a small chuckle. But I shut up pretty fast after her next death glare, which was stronger than the last. I didn't even know that was possible.
Between the cute kitty glare and her pouty lips, I couldn't resist myself. I gently grabbed her hips and pulled her softly to me. She was about to protest before I shushed her with my lips. Her bottom lip was fuller than her top, and I couldn't help sucking and nibbling on it. I took her small sigh to continue. Her beautiful eyes fluttered shut and her chocolate brown eyes were now covered.
Our mouths moved in sync, her mouth fit perfectly against mine. And if it weren't for exhaustion taking over, and the fact that I could barely stand on my own two feet I would have continued this. BUUUTT, I didn't. I slowed our pace, bringing our kiss to an end. Her little whimper of protest made me smile and chuckle.
"Okay, stay right here, I'll go and get that fire wood and I'll start a quick fire, too keep us warm and the bugs and animals away," I mumbled as I walked away in search of firewood big enough to last until morning. Thank god for boy scouts…
As I finished grabbing some firewood, I walked back to Bella, which wasn't far. I kept her small frame in sight at all times. She had sit down on a fallen tree trunk and I took it as a sign that she was also exhausted for the days events. I walked back and settled down next to her throwing the pile of firewood in front of me. Before I had left the motel room, they had matches in their next to an ashtray by the bed. I had grabbed those, just in case if needed. Guess it came in handy.
I quickly started a fire and we both settled in closer to the fire. Watching the flames get higher and the coldness go away. The mosquitoes all dissapeared as soon as the smoke hit them, which I am internally grateful for. I stared deep into the flames, as did Bella. My mind was blank, not many thoughts stayed or came in. But the thought of myself and her being safe for now topped everything. That was all that made me happy.
Well that and I might have a girlfriend.
So, did you did ya'll like this chapter? I hope you guys did! I told you I would write better if I got more reviews :D
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