Thanks for all your amazing reviews, ND Still can't believe that I got like 5,000 views, that shows support, and I what I can't believe is that I'm getting a failing grade in English yet still can write chapters like this P.S This chapter is created from one of the guest review which I would love to use. So Idk who this idea is from but I'm going to use it, please write your name or country you are from when you are reviewing ,guests.

Maddy

Its Monday once again, and I am about to return back to school. The weekend right after I returned and after Rhydian's birhtday was good well for me, Rhydian, and Shannon but for Tom and Jasmine, lets just say this. Tom fancies Jasmine ( you could totally tell) and after Friday, Jasmine was thinking whether to go out with Tom. She said no and this made Tom sad, she explains that," He's normal, she's not, we are almost different , but I don't think it would work out Tom." She suggested being best friends with him, and he accepts, but still can't get over her. On Saturday night, it was a full moon and I got to enjoy with Rhydian and me new friend Jasmine, we played fight and once we were all done and Jasmine won, we feel asleep. Sunday, Rhydian tells me how he knows Jasmine, which was sweet how he was her only friend and for him, she is, and how he saved her from that fire as a little cub. After hearing the story about his childhood's friend, Rhydian asked me to stay with him in Stoneybridge FOREVER! I love him so I told him that I should tell me parents which I did and afterall I get to stay! We decided that afterschool on Monday that we should FINALLY GO on that date from 2 months and a week ago. Rhydian offered to let me stay at his place, but I said sorry but I want to catch up with me best friend SHANNON. Shannon was thrilled that I was going to stay at her place, we finally could gossip and all that.

Well, back to whats happening right now, I wake up at the guest room at Shan's house and as I get ready for school, Shannon and Tom got all me family's clothes so no one would steal them so I luckily put on me clothes and go into Shannon's room. I sneak into Shannon's room, and I see her already up and putting on her uniform. Me: Hey Shan, good morning. Shan: Good morning Mads, what do you think we should this Friday? Me: I think we should do a movie night, its been so long! I need to get back with this technology. Shannon: Movie night it is, I want to know more about what happened in wild? Me: Shan, I'll love tell ya... another day, but first lets go eat. Shannon rolled her eyes as I pushed her to move down stairs so we can eat. I sat down and bacon was served to us, I thanked Mrs. Kelly. As we ate breakfast, Shannon got a text, " Hey Mads, your boyfriend Rhydian wants to meet yeah at the woods?" Me: Rhydians not my boyfriend..., well not yet anyways, truth is we aren't officially dating but lets see. I asked Shannon," I'll meet yeah at school , ok?" Shannon: OKay, meet ya at school

I gave Shannon a hug before I ran off into the woods. I looked around as I saw Rhydian come by. Me: Hey Rhydian: Hey Mads. He came up and interlock my fingers with his. We started walking to school taking the LONG way. Me: So, what should we do tonight? Rhydian: I was think that we should have a causal date then make all fancy what you think. Me: Normal is casual more better than extra fanciness. Rhydian: Good, then we buy something at Bernies then go to my surprise place. Me: I would love that, Mr. Morris. Rhydian: Bernies then my surprise, Mrs. Smith. He got my waist and spun me around. Once he put me down, he leaned to give me a kiss. Until we were interrupted by Jasmine, Jasmine ran up out of nowhere and said," Good morning you too" We quickly pulled a part as we greeted her. Jasmine raised one of her eye brows and said," Did I interrupt anything?" " Noooo" Rhydian and I said in unison. " Okay then, shouldn't we get to school, I'll race ya.," Jasmine said.

I looked at Rhydian and he looked back at me and we nodded. Soon the three of us raced each other to school. We got there, and Jasmine was the winner. Rhydian: You girls, always trying to beat my status as male alpha?" Jasmine and me: We already beat it a long time ago. I gave Jasmine a high five as Rhydian rolled his eyes. We spotted Shannon and Tom, Tom and Jasmine were now completely quiet, which was strange. Me: Oui, you too still sad about your relationship status." Tom: No Mads, its just that theres nothing new to talk about. Jasmine: Yeah. Me: Okay then lets go.

The bell rang and I was last to enter. Rhydian sat at his seat and Jasmine sat next to him in my seat, Shannon and Tom still sitting in their seats. I stood in front of the class, Mr. Jeffries walked in and said," Hello Maddy, its a pleasure to have you back, go on and sit yourself down." The 3 ks looked up and said," Oh look she's jealous." Kara: hey Jasmine you're siting in " Maddy's seat" you know? Jasmine looked up and said," Oh sorry Maddy, I didn't know that you sat here, I could move if you like?" Before I responded I heard boys shout out, " Oh Jasmine be my partner" " No mine" " No Jasmine, sit here and let Maddy sit next to Rhydian. Hearing this made Tom annoyed and made the ks jealous. I then said," No, its ok I'll just here.", I walked up to a seat next to Becky, and near by Rhydian. Jasmine got up and said," No Maddy it was your seat first, go sit with Rhydian", She got up and sat at the seat behind Rhydian and I. I sat down and mouthed the words " thank you" and she mouthed out" No problem" , she then gave me a hands up and winked. OH wow, she probably knows about me and Rhydian too. Another friend to go sing songs about me and Rhydian.

Rhydian: Hey there Beautiful, how does 6 o clock work for you?

Me: Sounds good.

Rhydian: Yeah, so you can dress up into cute clothes like usually and put on makeup and do your hair.

Me: Oh and you would do your hair, dress up in clothes like everyday and put on some clone( Idk how to spell it)

Rhydian; Yeah thats what I did for that dance the last time on no moon day, I went all out and so did you.

I punched Rhydian's shoulder as we started laughing.

Time passed. I went to the dark room with Rhydian, Shannon and Tom. We hanged out there like old times and said, what we are going to do on Friday?

Tom: Movie night sounds great whos place?

" How about my place?" said Jasmine from in front of the dark room. Jasmine walked in and sat next to me and Shannon.

Jasmine: So...

Everyone: Sure, what time then?

Rhydian: I'll pick up Maddy that night, but right now we should get going. He tilt his head toward the door. Me: Yeah, talk to you guys later alright.

Tom: Okay bye you too. Shannon: You still coming later to my house. Me: No i'm going to sleep over Rhydian's okay, see ya tomorrow.

Shannon: Okay... Jasmine waved bye. As me and Rhydian started to run out of school. Rhydian: So lets go to my house, I have your sleeping bag there and me foster parents left to a week long meeting somewhere for work. Me: Ok, then lets go.

We got to Rhydian's house started to dress in regular but still stylish clothes. I was dressed in a red long sleeved shirt with my black jeans and dark brown boots. Rhydian dressed in collared long sleeved light blue shirt and jeans with black shoes and a jacket. We headed out to Bernies where Rhydian planned to buy something for our actual surprise location. He opened the door," Ladies first." " Oh thank you Mr. Morris, so what shall we buy?" " I 'll show ya, Mrs. Smith."

Rhydian: Hey Bernie!

Bernie: Yes, what are you going to buy?

Rhydian: Two pairs of ice skates, a picnic basket and a bottle of champagne( apple cider)

Bernie: OK, that would be $40.43

Rhydian gave Bernie the money and put everything from this bag he had into the picnic basket and put the ice skate inside his bag. He grabbed my hand as we walked outside." So where are we going now?" I turned to face him and he said," Its a surp...Jasmine, WHAT HAPPEN TO YOU! I turned around and saw Jasmine walking up with a twisted leg, blood coming out of her head, and scars and cuts all over her body. Her clothes were stained with blood as she leaped with all her force to us. " Maddy, Rhydian, he's..." Jasmine fell and blacked out. Rhydian: WHERE ARE WE GOING TO TAKE HER, WE CAN'T TAKE HER TO HOSPITAL CAN WE? Me: I don't know, but its worth saving her life. Rhydian picked her up as I got my phone which I just charged and marked down the hospital's number. the person on other end said that they'll be here in 5 minutes. I told Rhydian. He started crying, I asked " Jasmine is going to be fine.: He points at her head and I could see it, that someone cracked her skull. You could see blood coming out. I sat down next to Rhydian as he was still holding Jasmine and hold his hands. The ambulance got here and we got on to it with Jasmine. We reached the hospital and...

I wanted to add a crisis so lets what happens next? I wanted to put that Jasmine got hurt and I'm not going to change it, but no one is going to die in this story or will someone die? No, thats like sad! But anyways Review (^o^)/

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