Now that Farla has seen this, I am here to expose the biggest case of plagiarism I've seen by the liar and plagiarizer, Ejennings167. This loser has denied plagiarizing two of the most famous advanceshipping stories on fanfic. net, which are May's Crush and The Return of the Forgotten. I've argued with this fool so many times and he claims that I'm just jealous of his "skills". While I admit I am a terrible writer, why would I want to be jealous of copy pasting someone else's work and just changing the character names. While most of you hate me, I am here to defend the first two stories i have ever read on fanfic. net. So please, take the time to read and see how "original" Ejennings167 can really be. I've labelled them for convenience.
1) From May's Crush:
Kiss scene
The plagiarized version.
He felt Serena's soft, tender lips against his own, and felt himself being overcome with love for this girl. He closed his eyes, letting the feeling envelop him even in the turbulent weather. He felt his mouth slowly open as Serena's did, but their tongues remained still. Serena felt as though the intrusion made by Calem had been healed and the anxiety turned to pleasure. Her heart began to beat heavily as she wrapped her arms around her beloved. The world seemed to fade away as well as its problems. The storm, the tournament, the betrayal, Drew, May, Calem, the friends not yet forgiven, what their friends would think of what the outcome, none of it mattered any more. All they felt was pure joy and closure.
The actual version.
He felt May's soft, tender lips against his own, and felt himself being overcome with love for this girl. He closed his eyes, letting the feeling envelop him even in the turbulent weather. He felt his mouth slowly open as May's did, but their tongues remained still. They held their open mouths together, sharing each other's breath. May tasted Ash's sweet breath in her mouth, and felt as though the intrusion made by Drew had been healed. Her heart began to beat heavily as she wrapped her arms around her beloved. She held him there, not wanting to break the kiss. Ash didn't seem to mind, as he held the girl close as well, his hands against her bare back. The rest of the world and it's problems; the storm, the battle with Misty, Ash's Battle Frontier Challenge, what May's parents would think of her falling in love with her mentor. It all seemed to disappear for that moment, in which they were just a man and woman in love with each other, and wanted nothing to come between them.
Almost being raped scene
Plagiarized version.
Calem had slid his hands under her shirt and moved one hand to her right breast groping it roughly while the other began to unclasp her bra. Tears began to flow from Serena's eyes. She felt her bra become weightless as Calem pulled it off of her and in one swift move yanked her shirt off.
'No this isn't happening!' She thought to herself.
'Told you he was a pig' said the first voice.
Calem wrapped one arm around her neck and moved the other to her skirt. He slid one hand around her backside and squeezed her rear. Serena bit Calems tongue in a desperate attempt to free her from the boys grasp.
"Youch!" Calem yelled pulling away from Serena. "What was that for?" He asked angrily.
Actual version.
"But-" she started before Drew cut her off with a kiss on her lips. May felt her heart start to beat out of her chest. Drew opened his mouth and slid his tongue into May's. May opened her mouth to allow Drew the full range of motion. Drew moved his hands around her body. One of them began to rest on her end, while the other slid up her blouse and began to unclasp her bra from the back.
May tried to break it off, but the hand Drew held her rear with held her close to him. She tried to force him out of her mouth, so she could ask what he was doing, but he gave her no chance. Drew squeezed May's rear, and tears began to fall from her eyes. She bit Drew's tongue in a desperate bid to escape.
"Yeaowch!" Drew shouted, backing away form May. "What was that for?"
2) From The Return of the Forgotten:
Plagiarized version.
"ASH KETCHUM! THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT!"
The group outside the door laughed at the honey haired girls outburst.
"Arceus, I'm glad I'm not in there" Gary said as they heard Serena continue to scream and he could only imagine the pain that Ash must be enduring.
"Well, we don't have to worry about that now do we?" Misty teased. In her arms she held their three month old baby boy, Blue. Sadly, Blue never recovered from his injuries form Gensis and passed away days after Ash had woken up.
"Yeah, but we have to worry" Dawn chimed in as she held hands with her boyfriend, Paul.
"I still can't believe you Seven months pregnant..." Paul groaned.
"You aren't going to want to be in his shoes" Brock said. "I feel bad for Ash, think he is ok?"
"I think he will be fine" smiled a 15 year old Kaylin.
"ASH I DON'T WANT TO HEAR IT!" The group chuckled as they heard Serena scream again.
"You're doing great Mrs. Ketchum! Just a little more!" said the nurse.
"Yes Serena" Ash groaned in pain "Just a little more and it will all be over!"
"I DON'T WANT TO HEAR ANOTHER MORE WORD FROM YOU!" Serena screamed at Ash in pain. "IT'S ALL YOUR FAULT! IF YOU JUST WERE ABLE TO KEEP YOUR HANDS FOR YOURSELF THIS WOULD NEVER HAD HAPPENED!"
"You don't mean that Serena." Ash smiled at his wife...even if it was a forced smile.
"I MEAN EVERY WORD! WHY DON'T YOU GO AROUND WITH A BABY IN NINE MONTHS AND THEN TRY TO GIVE BIRTH TO IT!" Serena shouted at him once again. "IT'S ALL YOUR FAULT! YOU DIDN'T HAVE MORNING SICKNESS, YOU DIDN'T HAVE TO WATCH WHAT YOU ATE, YOU DIDNT HAVE TO DEAL WITH TWO LITTLE BRATS KICKING YOU ALL THE TIME!"
"I know...!" Ash groaned as he used his free hand to hold his head. He ignored the pain when he heard the doctor yell "It's coming now!"
Serena once more as she crushed Ash's hand, making him to grit his teeth in pain.
After a minute, that seemed like an hour for Ash, the one baby had come out, moments later came another. Ash let go of his wife's hand and walked up to the smiling doctor. He looked at the little boy in his arms, exactly like Ash, except that he had a little visible brown hair instead of black. He looked towards the other baby, a little girl with a small patch of brown hair.
Ash chuckled as he wiped the tear from his eye and went to the love of his life, he carried the two newborns over to Serena, who was laying on the bed, panting from tiredness and exhaustion.
"It's over Serena, you did great" Ash told her with a smile full of love as he handed their two new bundles of joy to her.
Serena dried her tears also as she took the little bundle to her chest. "She kissed each one of her children on the head and whispered "Red...May...welcome to you new homes"
Original version
"ASH KETCHUM! THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT!"
The group outside the door laughed at the brunette's outburst at the same time as they pitied the raven haired boy.
"You think that he'll be alright?" Lucy asked the group worried.
Brock looked at his wife with a smile. "Don't worry Lucy, Ash has been through a lot tougher situations than this one!"
"I still don't want to be in the same room as Ash right now!" The 16 year old Sarah giggled. "How long has they been in there?"
"I count it to 15 hours!" Gary smirked.
"Poor guy..." Tracey said with his head lowered.
"When are May's parent's going to be here?" Dawn asked the others in the group.
They had taken Ash's words to their hearts and talked with their parents, it weren't easy in the beginning but Ash kept telling them to talk with them. Two years after the tournament they were finally able to have a talk with them and hear their apologize, all except Ash.
"They're going to be here tomorrow, it takes two days to travel from Hoenn to Kanto and..."
Misty's words were interrupted by another scream, they looked around and wondered why they didn't have soundproof walls at the hospital...
"You're doing great Mrs. Ketchum! Just a little more!" The nurse told the brunette.
"Yes May!" Ash assured her. "Just a little more and it will all be over!"
"I DON'T WANT TO HEAR ANOTHER MORE WORD FROM YOU!" May screamed at Ash in pain. "IT'S ALL YOUR FAULT! IF YOU JUST WERE ABLE TO KEEP YOUR HANDS FOR YOURSELF THIS WOULD NEVER HAD HAPPENED!"
"You don't mean that May." Ash smiled at the brunette, even if it was a forced smile, as she kept crushing his right hand.
"I MEAN EVERY WORD! WHY DON'T YOU GO AROUND WITH A BABY IN NINE MONTHS AND THEN TRY TO GIVE BIRTH TO IT!" May shouted at him once again. "IT'S ALL YOUR FAULT!"
"I know...!" Ash groaned as he used his free hand to hold his head.
Ash looked at the scared rodent in the corner of the room.
"How did you manage this Pi?" Ash asked with another groan.
"Pika, pikachu pika!" Pikachu comforted.
"Of course I'm glad that May isn't able to use Ice Beam!" Ash sneered at the rodent's lame attempt to cheer him up.
"It's coming now!" The doctor told everybody in the room.
May screamed once more as she crushed Ash's hand, making him to grit his teeth in pain.
After a minute, that seemed like an hour for Ash, the baby had come out. Ash let go of his wife's hand and walked up to the smiling doctor. He looked at the little boy in his arms, exactly like Ash, except that he had a little visible brown hair instead of black. Ash held the baby and knelt in front of Pikachu so he could get a good look at him. The rodent walked up to the little kid and sniffed at him.
"Will he do Pi?" Ash asked with a smile.
"Pika!" Pikachu gave him a thumbs-up.
Ash chuckled as he wiped the tear from his eye and went to the love of his life. May was laying on the bed, panting from tiredness and exhaustion.
"You were great May!" Ash told her with a smile full of love as he handed the little kid to her. "It's a boy!"
May dried her tears also as she took the little bundle to her chest.
"Red..." She smiled at the boy.
There you have it! Ejennings167, I said I would expose you for the fraud you are. You dont deserve the credit you're getting, Gerbilftw and PikamasterADV do and even if they are no longer active online, I will remain loyal to those two and expose your lies and stealing. You are just a no good thief!
