Ooohhhh, I'm just shaking in my boots...
You're the one who can't do shit! Ejennings167, your story plainly has "HEY I PLAGIARIZED PARTS OF TWO FAMOUS STORIES" written all over it. While the almost rape scene can be arguable, the kiss scene and the epilogue has nearly the exact same words, no coincidence in a million years can have that result. You plagiarized, admit it.