Guys, i really apreciate all your flames about this horrible fanfic, you are the best!, now, continue with this, but i want do this MORE horrible, so, i would like you tell me in the comments, what you HATE in a fanfic?
And critic me, as i was a REAL writter and this is weren't a parody , like i were another diferent person
In the morning hefty and handy went both at the same time , to Kumi´s home, both glared at each other and knocked the door
handy; you are smurfing your time, hefty,she will choose me
hefty: why do you say that?
handy: cause, i am better looking, smarter and smurfier , you ...who will choose you,having somesmurf like me?
hefty: yes...i think you are right...but i love her,and i´ll fight for her
handy: will be a very short battle
they waited for Kumi , but she never went out
hefty: kumi?, are you there?
handy: we can't hear you
after thousands of hours,they decided to broke the door , and go there
hefty: KUMI!
handy: WHERE ARE YOU?
they looked for her in everyplace of her castle (cause, handy was so in love with her that she had a castle instead of the symple hut)
After didn't found her, both began to mourn
hefty: my sweet and dear little flower is disapeared
handy: she is MY little sweet flower!
hefty: MINE!
handy: SHE IS MINE!
After having a big fight, they told papa smurf about her, he made the village met in his house, smurfette couldn't be more happier
papa smurf: my little smurfs, our dear and beloved Kumi is lost
All the village,but smurfette and sassette started to scream and running out of control
"NOOO! KUMI!, NOT KUMI!, WE LOVE HER!"
papa smurf: shut up you #$&"!, we have to make a group to find her
hefty: i´ll do it , papa smurf, she is my love
handy: not if i found her first