so how was my first chapter if you guys have a idea write for me. i am thinking that when i finish this i will write a sequel i don't know Bree story or her personality but if you read her book write to me as it is if you want to want to make an Edward type a gentleman and protector but more direct than he is.


When i met Ashley it was obvious that she was more weak than normal humans but now after seeing her vomit black blood all over the floor.

Her blood smelled wrong like that do not belong to this world after she saw everybody looking at her she ran away.

The rest of classes were normal but the episode of the lunchroom were all over the school at the end of the day when everybody was home Edward said.

"Black blood its not normal even the smell was different"

"with that amount of blood she is in risk of life" Jasper said suddenly to us while he entered the room.

"can we do nothing for her what do we know about her sickness?" Bella who always is at Edward side said

"no she said to me that the doctors don't know what she have" I said to then to think that such a wonderful person can't live right.

I stayed in bed after I got home still remembering what happened thanks to my sickness. I don't know when but I sleep when I woke up before school, with time by my side I prepared a breakfast for me and my father who was quiet what means that he know what happened.

In school everybody was looking at me of course this is the cons of a small town everybody knows everything.

It was everything like yesterday only that everybody was ore careful around me like I was made of glass in one of the classes one of the Cullens like I learned was there the bronze haired guy who sometimes looked at me.

Today was P.E the teacher told me to stay out not that I have nothing anything against it in this class there was two Cullens one pixie like and a dark haired one who too looked at me like the other guy what was wrong with the Cullens.

Finally the lunch came and I sat with the Cullens.

"Bree I told a lie to you yesterday the doctors know the reason."

"and what is?" she said curious and the others too by look on their faces

"My body rejects my blood and because of that I will die in one year kind of"

"and you just accept it?!"

"yes I can't do nothing my body rejects himself because of that in all aspects I am more fragile than a baby."

A long silence appear between all in the table every time I tell somebody this they get quiet I caught a bit of paper, which is with me and finally cough with blood as quest with all the Cullen's looking at me.

"when I was little somebody told I have demon blood and that I am cursed"

"no you are not cursed you are a wonderful person and you will go out with me and Alice shopping."

"but its dangerous for me something could happen"

"yes but like you said you will die so I will let you live first, Saturday I'll pick you up at your house"

"why do you speak like you already know where I live?" I said I am stating to like Bree ore and more no one till now invited me to go shopping.

"i know where your house is because I was worried about that so I searched and discovered where your houses is."

And with that and a super happy Alice we talked a bit the Cullen's were all wonderful persons and I notice that I started to like Bree and I wanted to stay by her side. In some point I heard Edward say to Bella.

"the look on Ashley face its the same as yours"

"so you think the to of them... like each other?"

"yes Bree is the one of the few people she know that invited her for something."

The week passed slowly but finally Saturday came and I was going to catch Ashley when Edward said behind me.

"why I think you followed her instead of having searched?"

"yes I followed her she is so fragile so I need to be around her happy now"

"yes much you know I done the same thing with Bella when she was human she was a magnet for problem still is but she is more resistant"

"I know that I tried to kill her once remember"

"if you like her and be honest she will like you more" he said leaving the room.

After catching Ash in the three went to Seattle Alice knew every shop related to clothes Ash was enjoying the shopping that even Alice turning her your dressing doll not hindered her happiness.

"you are the first person to resist fro being Alice doll In fact in all of then you were more beautiful"

"more?" she said blushing

"yes more, lets go after Alice otherwise she will be found in the other side of the country"

While searching for Alice I though in something that I need to ask to her.

"so after the shopping would you like to come at my home?"

"i can?" she as asked with disbelief in her face.

"of course so its okay for you?"

"yes my dad wants me living a normal life so it's okay I just need to call him"

"so call him I will wait"

As she was in her phone I saw Alice coming in my way. If Alice knew where e and Ash were so she was expecting e to invite her great first Edward now Alice looks like they want me to be with Ashley or in the case of Alice she knows

"okay he accepted so now that Alice is here what we do now?"

"now we go home you will be my model" Alice said "so shall we go?"