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Broken Chapter 7-Broken Mansions

Fang's POV


I stared at the mansion. WHAT THE HELL!

"Holy. Crap." Juliet said, breathlessly. I looked at her, scowling. But, I realized where she learned the language. Anne. That bitch.

"Come on you guys." Max said, getting out of the car. She walked toward the giant house. The house was like any other mansion. The outside of the house painted white with care, sparkled in the sunlight. In front of the house, flowers laid taking in the sunlight.

We walked into the sparkling house. The inside of the house surprised me. Light blue paint splattered the walls. Walking straight into the doorway, I saw the huge kitchen. Brown cabinets hugged the walls and dark granite counters were placed around the circular room. Inside the kitchen, a woman stood, preparing something. I knew it was not her mother: her mother had died as I remembered.

"Oh, hello dear!" The woman said cheerfully. Her sleek, black hair seemed to be graying, though she didn't seem any other than thirty-seven. She obviously was Hispanic and was not very tall, no taller than 5'7.

"Hello, Valencia." Max greeted her. The woman, "Valencia" looked at Juliet and me. "This is my friend, F-Nick, and his sister, Juliet." I nodded toward her, while Juliet walked straight up to her.

"Hi lady! You seem nice. This sure is a nice house. It's much nicer than our house, isn't it Nick?" Juliet looked at me for support. I merely nodded my head. "He doesn't talk much. But what were you making? Whatever it is, it sure looks good! Are you Max's mother?" Max looked amused throughout Juliet rambling, (she always rambles when she is excited), until Juliet mentioned Max's mother. Her head dropped and I could tell this was an awkward position for her.

"I was making my famous lasagna. And no, I'm not Max's mother, I'm her chef." I looked at Max, who recovered from her awkward position. She stared back at me, as if saying she didn't want to hear it.

"Nick needs some help with Geometry, so I said that I would tutor him." Max explained to Valencia; she nodded in understanding. "Nudge, why don't you show Juliet the backyard." Nudge smiled and she left with Juliet's hand in her's as she went of about the backyard. "Um, Valencia," Max began, "where is Jeb?" Max's voice was hushed for some reason.

"Didn't you hear, dear? Jeb has been called back into work. On Tuesdays and Thursdays he has to go to the lab." Max gave a relieved look.

"Come on, Nick, let's start." Max announced. Max turned on her heels and walked straight down past the kitchen into a hallway. I followed her silently. The hallway was covered in brown paint and white doors. Pictures were spread against the walls. Mostly of Max with a middle-age man, when she was no older than 13. There were also some pictures of Nudge with the same middle-aged man. I assume he is their father.

Max walked past all of the pictures, hating the past. She walked to the end of the hallway where there was another on of the white doors. She opened the doors and the sight of the room bursted through the house. I walked into the enormous room. The walls were caked in light blue paint, with white checkered squares covering two of the walls. The dark hardwood floors gleamed and the small carpet lay underneath the bed. The carpet was black with splashes of blue. On the right of the door, the bed sat, perfectly made and ready. Large blue, purple, and black plaid was on the covers and the pillows. Right next to her bed sat a dark brown desk. On top of the desk was the normal essentials, but above the desk, a 30 inch flat screen television was placed. On the opposite site of the bed, a black guitar, piano, and drum-set sat. A small drawer and dresser was next to the drum-set. Then there was another door, which I figured was to the bathroom. But straight ahead, a glass door covered the wall. Outside, there was a large balcony.

"Okay," Max said,"let's get started." She sat on her bed waiting for me to follow. I sat at in the desk chair. She rolled her eyes at me, no having to get up. I got out my Geometry book and a blank sheet of paper.

"ABC is a right triangle. AM is perpendicular to BC. The size of angle ABC is equal to 55 degrees. Find the size of angle MAC." Max said. I just looked confused, not able to figure out a word she just said. "Oh God, this is going to be harder than I thought." Max mutter. I smirked at her.


"So the answer would be?" Max asked hopefully.

"The size of angle MAC would be, 55 degrees?" I asked. Max looked tired, but she looked up at me.

"You got the answer correct." Max said quietly, as if she didn't believe it. "You got the answer right!" She ran up to me and gave me a hug, but soon release. "Sorry," She said, embarrassed. I rolled my eyes. She simply pushed me down onto the bed. But before I fell I grabbed her arm while I was falling and she fell down with me. Right on top of me.

She pushed herself off of me, and all of the sudden, she was standing across the room. "Dick." She muttered.

"What, you're the one who pushed me down."

"You're the one who grabbed me with you. And for some reason, I can't help but think you've been in that position before." She snarled.

"Whatever you say Miss Know-it-All." I muttered.

She turned around at the words I uttered. A glare showed on her face. I was tackled on the ground before I could move out of the way. "Any last words before you die a very painful death?" She growled.

I smirked, "And you said that you thought I'd be the one in this position."

I really shouldn't have said that...

The pain was indescribable. My entire upper body ached. I groaned loudly. She just had to knee me in the crotch. "I'm gonna get you, Ride!" I grunted.

"That is, if you can catch me." She got up and began to run. After about five seconds, I got up and chased her. I chased her all around the house. Through the hallways, and the large living room, with great whites underneath the floor. Through the backyard and the kitchen. Through the guest rooms and even Nudge's room.

Max turned back for a second to see if I was still chasing her. A smile spread across her face. Then, all of the sudden she stopped, and the man standing in front of her gave a horrible glare.

"Hello Max."

"Jeb..."


I am a horrible person for ending it right there. I worked a lot on my description skills in this chapter. I hope you guys liked it and I've seen people do this and it works so: I have the next chapter DONE! It was going to be a part of this chapter, but this was just an amazing place to end it. So I want to have 83 reviews before I post again.

Questions:

1) Does Slender scare you? (It doesn't scare me anymore)

2) Do you believe the zombie apcolapse? (It's coming I tell you! IT'S COMING!)

Song of the Chapter:

Help, I have done it again
I have been here many times before
Hurt myself again today
And the worst part is there's no one else to blame

Be my friend
Hold me, wrap me up
Unfold me
I am small and needy
Warm me up
And breathe me

See Ya, Rebels!

~Maximum Reading