Trying to catch 151

by ForgottenTrainer

After turning thirteen Ash gets his first Pokemon from Professor Oak, but it isn't the Pokemon you might expect and with this Pokemon sets out on a journey, watch as he try's to catch as many Pokemon as he can, learning about the world and everything in it as he does. Plot contains elements from anime and a few different mangas. Ash starts off with little knowledge but he learns.

17. Chapter 17

Sorry this isn't an update.

Recently I've noticed that there's allot of things about my story that I'm not completely happy with. The problem is that changing them would result in a noticeable change in the overall story so I'm thinking I might want to restart.

The main change will be that the story will be less episodic with more of an over arcing plot, but if I don't continue the plot will be becoming more clear anyway I'm just thinking it might seem a little late.

I can't decide though so I'm going to do a poll on whether I should, the poll will also ask if the starter should be Magikarp with dragon rage, Magikarp with dragon rage and other none cannon moves (someone complained that a Gyarados wasn't unique enough, but it won't be anything over the top really) or Feebas, or Feebas with other none canon moves (again noting over the top)

If I do restart I'll be changing things based on reviews that this story got so it should be better in that way. Thanks for reading.