Hey whats up it me BloodReape... wait no, that name died and was reborn as the newer and better One-Winged Angel of Death. I'm still the same person and have the same style but now I am focusing far more on the story and plot rather than lemons. My stories will still have lemons but less.
So let's get to questions from last chapter
Q1-why did Naruto not go all out against Orochimaru
A- The fact that he is the Juubi is a secret and he didn't want other to know at the moment. Plus he overestimated himself and underestimated Orochimaru
Q2-Why didn't Naruto sent a shadow clone with Sayuri and Narumi
A- he's an idiot
Q3-Why did Orochimaru believe he needed to bring a Blood clone to distract Naruto
A-Orochimaru has spies everywhere. It has been seen over and over that he has people everywhere like Kabuto and Mizuki in the main series who are in the leaf village ninja program itself. It isn't hard to believe that he had a spy in Gato's organization or in the leaf who was watching the fight between Naruto and Hidan who is a S-Rank shinobi.
Q4- How did Naruto's arm get cut off when he is the Juubi and Obito could wave off Ultimate attacks like they were nothing
A-Simply put, Naruto didn't unleash his full power so he wasn't as all-powerful as Obito in that form. If you watch the Anime, the Hachibi had his horn cut of by the Raikage so it is possible that Orochimaru's Kusanagi which is also a legendary sword in both the show and real life and is said to be able to cut anything could cut of Naruto's arm.
Q5- The sword that the clone Orchimaru left behind
A-It was a copy of the original. Orchimaru has been seen in the anime summoning several Kusanagi's from the mouths of his snakes
Q6-Will Naruto get his arm back
A-Read and find out yourself. No spoilers
Now if there are no questions then on to the story.
1)Fem Sasuke (Sayuri)
2)Fem Gaara(Gaia)
3)Narumi
4)Fem Kiba(Inuko)
5)Mei
6)Samui
7)Ino
8)Temari
9)Yugito
10)Yugao
11)Shizuka
12)Anko
13)Tsunade
14)Kushina
15)Fu
16)Shizune
17)Fem Kakashi(Kazumi)
18)Mikoto
19)Fem Itachi (Izumi)
20)Tayuya
21)Karin
22)Kin
23)Hana
24)Kurenai
25)Tsume
26)Fem-Haku
Also a fellow writer whose name shall not be given on his request advised me to try using all Japanese names for jutsu then the english translation at the end. Tell me if its better or if I should change it to a differnt style or maybe go back to its original way.
Oh I also lower Gaia's bust from F to D cup. I blame it on High school of the dead and Sekirei that I gave her that size originaly.
Last time
Narumi looked up at Naruto. "You ok Naru-chan?" Naruto asked her.
Narumi stared at him wide-eyed, she was lightly trembling now. "N-N-Na-Naru-k-kun?" she stuttered.
"Yeah?" Naruto asked.
"YOU ARM!" She shouted out as she saw that her lover only had one arm now.
Now
Naruto look at where his arm once was before he looked back at Narumi and smiled, "It's just a scratch, no need to worry Naru-chan." Naruto said completely calm.
"Just a scratch? IT'S MISSING!" She yelled at her male counter part who was still smiling back at her without faltering in the slightest.
"It'll be fine Naru-chan." The blond demon said to his lover as placed her down against the side of the tree they were on. Naruto's smiled slowly faded as he turned to Orochimaru, "Naru-chan. I need you to close your eyes for me. I am about to take a form which I do not wish for you to see." Naruto said with completely seriousness.
"But..." Narumi tried to say something but was cut of by Naruto's growing presence. She could feel an ungodly amount of power starting to leak out.
"Naru-chan. I beg you to please close your eyes and keep them close for a complete ten seconds. Do not open them until that time is up." Naruto said as steam started to rise up from his body. Narumi could see the complete seriousness of the situation and closed her eyes. See that his lover's eyes were closed now Naruto let his power loose.
"One"
Out of Naruto's tail bone, even more tails sprouted out giving him a grand total of eight tails. His skin rapidly started to pale into a pure white while his hair darkened from the roots out and turned pitch black in this Orochimaru couldn't help but take a step back but was frozen in place by the sheer amount of power being leaked from the demon.
The sky changed from a light blue to a bloody red and the sun black as night. All across the elemental nations, every living being both animal and human. civilian and ninja, and everything from genin to Kage felt as if an angry god had just awoken from it's slumber and was passing his judgement on some poor fool who had angered it.
"Two"
Naruto's transformation progressed even further as a pulse of power shredded his shirt and coat leaving his upper body exposed. From the top of his head, two white horns started to grow outward from the spiky black hair. One his back ten spike grew out, five on the top and five on the bottom with the image of the Rinnegan over nine tomoe arranged in three rows of three.
"Three"
Naruto watched as Orochimaru started to back away from his demonic before vanishing and reappearing in front of Orochimaru in a split second and slapped him through several trees.
"Four"
Naruto appeared in front of the downed Orochimaru and proceeded to pick him up by the head and threw him against a large rock. However before the Snake Sannin could collide with the rock, he spat out a fully healed body.
"Five"
Orochimaru started to sink into the ground but Naruto was able to follow the traitor's movement with his doujutsu. The demon pointed a single finger at where the Snake was hiding and formed a small black sphere out of pure chakra.
"Six"
Naruto flicked his hand back and fired at attack at outrageous speeds towards the sannin who tried to get out of the attack's range but the small ball followed his movements until it slammed into the ground above him.
"Seven"
Orochimaru shot out of the ground before the attack detonated on him and went for the trees. Naruto vanished from sight and appeared a mere meter in front of the snake summoner with his arm extended so the palm of his right hand was mere inches from the snake's face.
"Eight"
Positive and Negative energy rapidly fused to form a spiraling murky dark purple orb. Orochimari only had time to widen his eyes before the ball flew across the small gap between his face and the palm.
"Nine"
Orochimaru went flying back as the orb forced him through everything in his path until he was about a hundred meters from where he originally was.
"Ten"
The purple sphere finally exploded destroying Orochimaru's entire body and anything within about thirty meters, leaving a massive crater in the middle.
Narumi opened her eyes after the count of ten. She had felt so much in those ten seconds that she had her eyes closed. She had felt the wave of power that had spread across the elemental nations and was shaken by it. It felt like pure and absolute power was passing through her entire body. The power itself like one giant paradox. It was both wild but it was also focused, it was dark and malicious but at the same time it felt like a warm embrace from a loved one.
She looked up to see her lover standing in front of her. Naruto was once again in his normal form but was still missing his arm. "I'm sorry it took so long Naru-chan but I managed to finish off the annoying snake." the now blond again demon said with a cheerful smile.
"S-so he's d-dead?" The blond girl asked the Juubi who frowned at the question.
"Yes, he's dead but I don't know how long that will last. I have a feeling that I have only staled him and he'll be back" Naruto said to his girlfriend. While he had said that it was only a feeling, Naruto knew that the Snake Sannin would be back by the Chunnin exam finals just like he had been revived by Kabuto during the war using Anko's curse mark. As long as someone held Orochimaru's curse mark, there was always the chance that the snake would come back.
Narumi's eyes widened, "Sayuri-chan! We have to help her!" the blonde yelled as she rushed to her best friend's location. Naruto sighed and absorbed his arm before he followed after her until they found themselves at the same clearing where he along with Sasuke and Sakura had been ambushed by the sound team back in his world.
The two arrived just in time to see Sayuri break Zaku's arms. Naruto's eyes widened when he saw the black flame like markings on Sayuri's skin. 'Impossible! How did the curse mark activate when I sealed it away with one of my seals?' Naruto thought in a panic until it dawned on him. He had been too late and the corrupted chakra had already entered Sayuri's own system and had been able to use the Uchiha's own chakra to erode the seal away. 'Damn it! I swear that if I ever see that snake again, I'll take his soul and deliver it directly to the Shinigami.' Naruto thought in rage as he grabbed Sayuri from behind. "Stop Sa-chan, it's over" Naruto said as he pushed his chakra into Sayuri's system to wash away the dark chakra from the seal. The black-haired kunoichi relaxed into his arm and fell unconscious.
Naruto handed Sayuri to Narumi who brought her back under a tree. "What happened to my clone?" Narutp asked as he looked around to the injured team 10 and team 9.
"Our idiot of a teammate thought you were trying to kidnap her and attacked." Tenten said with a sigh. Why did she have to be stuck with the most energetic genin in the village. "He tried to fight your clone and got the shit beaten out of him but he managed to land a blow before fainting and popped it.
Naruto sighed and rubbed the bridge of his nose. "This is such a pain in the ass." Naruto said to himself but everyone was able to hear it. 'How the hell did all of this go so wrong. I already knew what would happen but Sayuri still got the curse mark and I lost my arm. I could grow it back now but it would only lead to more questions from Narumi. I guess I'll have to leave it as it is for now and regrow it when Narumi leaves with Jiraiya to train.' Naruto thought before he turned to the sound team.
"Look now, we will be leaving now." Dosu as he placed the scroll on the ground but Naruto wouldn't have it. The blond charged in and pierced the sound shinobi through the chest with his single arm. Looking at Zaku Naruto lit the other shinobi on fire with his doujutsu.
The last of the sound team looked on in horror as she watched her teammates die right in front of her. Naruto turned to her, "And then there was one." Naruto said in a low but dangerous tone as he slowly walked over to the kunoichi.
Kin fell to her knees and started to cry, "Please don't kill me" She begged the blond demon who was now standing right in front of her. "I never wanted to be part of that Snake bastard's plan in the first place. He killed my family and everyone in my village before he took me to his hideouts to add me to his forces." She gaveled to the blond who looked at her with a calculation expression.
Naruto could see the truth in her words and made his choice, "Very well you shall be allowed to come with us under the condition that you let yourself be questioned and tell us everything you know about the snake." Naruto said coldly as he talked about the traitorous snake,
"Yes! I'll tell you everything I know just get me away from that village" Kin cried to Naruto who smiled lightly and picked her up bridal style and carried her next to Sayuri. "Rest for now" Naruto said as he went to cheek on team 10 and Rock Lee.
"Is she alright?" Naruto asked as he arrived by Ino's side. She was unconscious and looked very tired, probably from using her family's jutsu so much.
"Yeah, she was controlling the body of that Sound kunoichi when her teammates tried to kill her even if she was killing their own teammate. Disgusting" Shikamaru said with hatred in his voice as he looked over at what remained of the sound team not counting Kin.
"Here this will help her." Naruto said as he took out a herb from one of his pockets. "This herb speeds up cell reproduction and helps fix any and all internal injuries." Naruto said as he took a knee next to his blond girlfriend. "You'll be alright Ino-chan" Naruto said as he placed a glowing green hand on he forehead to heal her tired mind. Removing his hand, the blond leaned down and kissed her fore head. "Come on, I'll take all of you to the tower." Naruto said as he gathered all his allies around him. Narumi carried Sayuri while Shikamaru carried Ino. The only ones who didn't join in were Team 9.
"We still don't have our scroll." Neji said as he and Tenten left with Rock Lee.
Naruto sighed at Neji's attitude but focused on getting his team and team 10 to the tower. He had manged to get a Hiraishin Kunai there thanks to one of his clones who had arrived there a bit before. "Hiraishin." Naruto muttered and in an instant group of seven were at the tower.
Both teams opened their scrolls and tossed them forward so that they crossed each other. In two plumes of smoke, the sensei's of both teams appeared before them. "Kazumi-neechan, what are you doing here?" Narumi asked her sensei who looked at her and then at Sayuri.
The silver-haired woman's eyes narrowed, "What happened?" She asked.
"We were attacked by orochimaru in the forest. I managed to fight him away but he left his curse seal on Sa-chan and was able to cut of my arm." Naruto said as he wiggled his stub.
Kazumi's eyes widened at this, "Are the two of you alright?" She asked the blond who smiled back at her. The older Kunoichi looked perplexed as she looked at Naruto's smile. She couldn't help but blush at the look on his face, she would be lying if she said that she hadn't developed feelings for the blond but after all she had experienced she couldn't let herself be distracted by a crush.
"It's just a scratch," Naruto said calmly as he took Sayuri from Narumi's arms and walked away. Looking back at his lover, "Go get something to eat and some sleep. I'll go seal away this damn curse mark again." Naruto said as he took the Uchiha with him into a private room he had asked the Hokage for.
The blond placed Sayuir on the kind sized bed and prepared several handsigns, "Kishin Fujin" Naruto said as he placed his own version of the Shiki Fujin except that this one didn't require a sacrificed but was considerably weaker. The area around the curse seal glowed a dark red which replaced the three tomoe on her neck with a image of his Shiki Fuin but a ten pointed star in place of the swirl.
"That should completely suppress it this time. It is my most powerful fuinjutsu right now" Naruto said to himself as he slumped into a nearby chair. Going eight tails then using the Kishin Fujin had taken quite the toll on his body. Naruto relaxed his body before he fell asleep.
Day of the preliminaries
A lot had happened since Naruto and his team had arrived at the tower in the middle of the forest of death. Naruto had a meeting with Hiruzen and Danzo to discuss the events of the forest. The two were less then pleased that the Snake had manged to get his mark on Sayuri and releasing it would release a living copy of Orochimaru. The last thing they needed was to insane pedophiles that hated them running around.
They also didn't like that Naruto had lost an arm but accepted that he sacrificed it to save Narumi. Naruto had lied to them and told them that he would be able to regrow it in a few months. He could have done it there but he didn't need to be asked any more questions. Narumi was already grilling him about the tails and power spiky
Naruto told them how he would ask the Shinigami to see if there was a way of removing the soul out of the seal so that he could extract the soul and then destroy the seal. He would have tried absorbing the seal but the possibility of having the Snake sanin in his mind tring to take control of him like Kurama had done all those years ago wasn't number one of things to have.
The three 'leaders' of Konoha had also discussed what they were going to do about Kin and Karin. In the end they had decided that Karin would be given asylum in the Namikaze clan compound while Kin would be questioned but not harmed physicaly for any and all information she had on Orochimaru.
unfortunately since she was a genin so she didn't have much. Now here they were in the main room of the tower where all the battles would take place. More people had passed this time then in his world. This time Kabuto's team hadn't made it in time and were kicked from the exam. The teams that had passed were Teams 7,8,9,and 10 from Konoha, Gaia's team, and two teams from the cloud which surprisingly enough was Killer Bee's genin team of Samui, Karui, and Omoi. The next was the team of who he recognized as C an expert medic from Kumo, Yugito the Nibi jinchuriki, and another unimportant genin who Naruto hadn't met before.
What had suprised Naruto was not only that Yugito was accually younger in this world while everyone else was normally older than in his world but that she was still a genin and looked about twenty.
All the teams lined u next to each other as they looked up at the gather crowd of all the Jonin sensei and a few others standing next to the Hokage who was smoking his pipe. "Congratulations all of you, you have all earned the right to stand here today by proving that you could best Konoha's own forest of ever do any of you know why we have the chunnin exams in different villages then your home one?" The old man asked.
"To test our strength against the shinobi and kunoichi of other villages so that we can attract more attention to our home so that we gain more power and jobs." the third member of Yugito's team
Hiruzen nodded, "While that is a very important factor in the chunnin exam, that is not the main reason for them. The real reason is to help keep up peace within the villages by showing trust by sending over their shinobi to take part in them" The old man said as he closed his wrinkled eyes. "However..." He started again as he opened his eyes "...because of the large amount of genin who passed we will have a have a preliminary round."
Ok there it was. The end of the forest of death. And now for the poll. I will terminate it the day after the next chapter comes out for this story. The current results is NO winning by about 9% which is about 30 votes including not account holder votes on the reviews. So this is the second to last call to vote.
Translations
Kishin Fujin- Demon God Consuming Seal