Hey what's up? First thing is please stop asking for Hinata, she is not getting into the harem deal with it. I know a lot of you wanted her but she lost the poll and that was it. I have given you Hinata lovers two chances and both had ended with her losing so please stop with the Hinata reviews.

harem

1)Fem Sasuke (Sayuri)

2)Fem Gaara(Gaia)

3)Narumi

4)Fem Kiba(Inuko)

5)Mei

6)Samui

7)Ino

8)Temari

9)Yugito

10)Yugao

11)Shizuka

12)Anko

13)Tsunade

14)Kushina

15)Fu

16)Shizune

17)Fem Kakashi(Kazumi)

18)Mikoto

19)Fem Itachi (Izumi)

20)Tayuya

21)Karin

22)Kin

23)Hana

24)Kurenai

25)Tsume

26)Fem-Haku

Lets get rolling people!


"The Next match will be..." the proctor said as he looked up at the board . "Ino Yamanaka vs Karui of Kumo" Hayate said before he stared to cough once again. Naruto really felt bad for him but he wasn't a medical professional and didn't have enough control over his power to be sure that his energy wouldn't hurt or kill him. He never did learn how he died.

The two kunoichi walked down the steps and met at on the ground. Karui gripped the handle of her sword as she got read to fight the other genin. Both kunoichi stared at each other as if studying everything they could from the other. Hayate looked at the two before raising his hands. "Fight!" He yelled as he jumped back as to not get caught in the middle.

Karui made the first move and charged at Ino with her sword now completely drawn. Back in the academy, Ino would have been screwed right now because she had never trained and just focused on her looks, but Naruto had told her that he would only go out with her if she actually trained and became a real Kunoichi. From that day on she had been training with Naruto every other weekend and with her team the during the week.

Ino ducked under the slash and preformed a quick genjustu making her invisible to anyone without a dojutsu. Karui looked all around for Ino but was completely unable to find her. However her trained kunocihi instincts told her to jump out of the way. Lucky for Karui she was right as Ino appeared over the spot she was just in and smashed her fist into the ground leaving a decent sized crater for a genin.

Sarutobi couldn't help but look at Naruto who was smirking at Ino's display of strength. 'So you taught her Tsunade-chan's strength enhancing technique hmm...' Sarutobi thought to himself as he looked down at fight which was getting intense now.

Karui kept up her assault on Ino who used her natural flexibility to dodge every single attack that Karui was launching no matter how good Karui was with the sword. "Stand still!" Karui said through gritted teeth. The blond just wouldn't stand still long enough for he rto hit her.

"Why would I do that? I have a love life unlike you flat-chest and I'm sure mu boyfriend wouldn't like it if I was all scared up." Ino said with large smirk as she saw Karui get angrier with each failed swing and the flat-chest comment and bringing up the fact that she was single only helped to make her even more enraged.

"Shut up!" the feisty red head yelled as she charged lightning chakra through her sword.

Ino smirked at how angry Karui had gotten from her teasing. "Sorry flat-chest, but I think it's about time to end this." Ino said as she jumped back and preformed the hand signs for her families trade mark technique. " Shintenshin no Jutsu" She said as he body fell limp on the ground.

Karui froze in place as she felt Ino's mind taking over her very body. She tried with all her might to fight back Ino's consciousnesses as shown by her gritting teeth but in the end she lost control to Ino. "Proctor..." 'Karui' said as she turned to Hayate while holding a kunai to her throat. "...I Karui give up"the red head said.

"Winner, Ino Yamanaka." Hayate said out to the crowd who clapped at the performance. Ino released the justu and went back into her own body. Karui's eyes widened as she looked around, seeing Ino on the ground she thought this was her chance but was stopped by Bee before she could do anything.

"Karui-chan stop your assault, its pointless since you already lost." Bee said in rap to his genin.

"What? How?" Karui asked frantically. Killer Bee then had to go on and explained the end of the battle to her as they walked back to where the other Kumo ninja stood while Ino walked back to her team. "Damn it!" she said as tears streaked down her cheeks. She had come so far in these damn exams only to forfeit against her will.

"You know you shouldn't cry over spilled milk right?" Naruto said as he walked over to the group. Unknown to the genin other then Naruto Killer bee tensed when the blond had walked over to his group once again. Any being who could make the Hachibi feel uneasy also make him uneasy. The only ones who had done that before were the third Raikage who he respected, his brother A when he had cut of one of his horns, The Kyuubi no Kitsune, Hashirama Senju, and now this boy.

Karui glared at him, "What are you here to brag about how one of your village's ninja defeated another one of our's!" She yelled at the blond demon who raised his hands up in defense.

Naruto shook his head, "No no, I just came here to tell you that you did good out there." Naruto said honestly to her. Seeing that he wasn't going to make fun of her she lessened her glare but still had a lesser one on. "I must say that you must be quite skilled in Raiton manipulation to be able to use it in conjunction with a blade. But I have to ask, what effect were you going for because from what I saw you were using it in a way which would paralyze your opponent but I believe you were looking more for a effect which would boost your piercing power and speed right?" Naruto continued.

Karui raised an eyebrow, "Yeah I was going for extra speed. How did you know?" Karui asked the blond who smiled kindly back at the dark skinned girl which blushed a bit.

"I trained a bit with Raiton a bit and from a few experiments I figured out that the way you conduct the electricity through your sword affects the result you get. For example, if you let your electricity run wild within the blade off your sword you'll get a electrocution effect while if you keep it controlled and spread evenly throughout the entire sword you'll get more of paralyze effect which is what you were getting. Furthermore if you concentrate your lightning going up your blade and towards the tip will increase your piercing effect and lastly if you concentrate the lightning on the sharpened edge of the blade it will increase the speed which the sword can cut through air and will give it a better ability too cut through armor and flesh." Naruto explained to the group of genin the theory behind using lightning chakra in their swords. The jaws of the three dropped when they heard everything Naruto had to say. Even Killer Bee was a little surprised with all that the blond knew.

"The next match will be between Shino Aburame and Shikamaru Naru." The proctor said.

"I give up. There is no point in me fighting since I am unable to put all of Shino's bugs under my Kagemane no Jutsu and even if I got Shino under my control his bugs would still be active and would swarm me the second I catch Shino." Shikamaru said with his eyes closed as he leaned back against the wall of the building.

Hayate nodded at the reasoning, "Winner Shino Aburame. Next match will be between Sayuri Uchiha and Kankuro of Suna" The proctor called out. Sayuri jumped over the rails while Kankuro did the same from where he was standing. "Fight!" Hayate yelled as to begin the battle between the Konoha and Suna ninja.

Sayuri started the battle by preforming a series of hand signs before, "Katon- Grand Fire Ball Jutsu!" She yelled as she exhaled a large fire ball from her mouth which went searing towards the Suna Shinobi who jumped out of the way. Sayuri didn't give Kankuro a chance to counter against her. She pulled out six kunai and threw them at the puppet user.

Kankuro seeing the weapons coming at him pulled out his own kunai and used it to block the six projectiles before he threw it at at Sayuri. The female Uchiha back flipped backwards as to avoid the kunai. "Katon- Phoenix Flower Jutsu!" She said before she exhaled a barrage of small fireballs at Kankuro.

The Suna genin saw this coming and substituted himself with a log which came out of no wear. Sayuri ducked as several senbon flew over her head. From the purple drops coming of the needles after they hit the wall she assumed that they were poisoned. See that Kankuro was behind her she turned and charged at him. Once she was close enough she landed a powerful punch to Kankuro's stomach only for two sets of arms wrapping her. Before Kankuri could do anything she substituted herself with a log before several blades coming out of Kankuro's chest ripped right through the log.

'So Kankuro used the old puppet trick huh? Good thing Sa-chan manged to escape in time.' Naruto thought to himself as he watched the battle. He was really impressed with how Sayuri was handling the battle so far but that was without Kankuro using his puppets. 'Lets see how handle him now that he has his puppets out.' Sayuri was already stronger than Sasuke was back when he was in Konoha.

The bundle on the back of the puppets unraveled to to reveal Kankuro. "Well I thought that that last trick I set up was going to beat you but since you were able to escape it, I guess I'll have to do it." Kanukuro said as he smirked as he held Crow in front of him with his chakra strings.

"Lets see you try." Sayuri said as she activated her sharingan before she charged in at Kankuro who sent Crow at her. Crow's hands turned into four large knife which Kankuro used to try and impale the Uchiha who jumped to the side and and lashed out with a kick to the side of Crow's head.

Crow went flying but Kankuro stabilized it in mid-air and brought it towards himself just in time to block another physical attack from Sayuri. Before the black haired girl was able to pull away Crow managed to hit her with about a dozen poisoned senbon. Sayuri fell to a knee as she felt the poison starting to circulate throughout her body.

"Give up now and I'll give you the antidote." Kankuro said with a wide smirk as he saw her struggling to breath with the poison spreading throughout her body.

"I-I will n-not g-give up. I h-have to become s-strong s-so I can b-beat him." Sayuri panted out as she stood back up and glared at the Sand shinobi. She could feel the dark power of the curse mark trying to enter her chakra stream but the seal that Naruto had put on her was blocking it.

"Come on! Just use my power!" A dark voice yelled in her head shouted at her. The voice sounded almsot exactly like her's only it had a vengeful and dark undertone. "You know you want my power. It's the only way you can win." The voice continued to push her to use the power of the Curse Mark and break the seal that Naruto had put on her.

'No! Naru-kun said to never use the power of the curse mark.' Sayuri yelled back at the evil voice within her head who laughed back at her like she had just said the funniest thing ever.

"Ha! That hypocrite told you not to use my power? Please his chakra almost identical to my own only far more potent, he isn't even human from what I can tell from his chakra. On top of that his chakra is far more malicious then anything I could ever create. He is just scared of what you could become. He fears you because he knows you can become someone who can kill him." Dark Sayuri said to her host.

Sayuri felt herself fade from the real world and appeared on a plane with black grass and a blood red sky with a red moon overhead. "Where am I?" Sayuri asked as she looked around the plain. There was absolutely nothing but black grass and the red sky.

"This is your mind Sayuri-chan" Dark Sayuri said as she phased into existence in front of Sayuri. She looked exactly like herself only that she had paler skin then she did and had yellow snake like eyes. She wore a black robe that wrapped around her figure. Around her neck was a choker with the Kishin Fujin on it. "Come on. Take this collar off of me and I'll give you the power you need to beat Itachi." Dark Sayuri said to the Uchiha who looked at the seal with interest.

'Is it worth it? Is power worth betraying Naru-kun's trust?' She thought to herself as she took a step towards Dark Sayuri

"He's holding you back Sayuri-chan. He's trying to weaken you so that you never betray the village. He wants you to be weak. Release this seal and I'll give you everything you've ever wanted. I'll give you the power you need to avenge your clan and bring it into a new age of power." She continued to tempt as Sayuri slowly walked toward her before she gripped the collar. Sayuri's eyes had a thick haze to show how influenced she was. "Do it!" Dark Sayuri said with a wide grin as she felt Sayuri tugging on the collar.

However before Sayuri could completely rip the seal off a massive claw smacked Dark Sayuri away. Sayuri's eyes snapped wide open as the haze that had over taken her. Sayuri looked up to see a massive monster with ten gigantic tails. The monster was almost completely black with the only exception being the one massive eye and it's long tongue. It had a human like torso covered in black scales. It had several spikes coming out of it's back and head.

"What the hell are you!?" Sayuri shouted as she took a few steps back, away from the massive monster.

Dark Sayuri's laugh echoed from where she was sent flying towards. The dark version of Sayuri appeared in front of Sayuri. "Oh you don't know? That's your dear lover Naruto's true form." Sayuri's eyes widened when she heard this as she looked up at the monster.

'No way... there is no way that Naruto could be that thing.' She thought to herself in fear. Was Naruto really lying to them all and was a monster in form of a human. "N-Naru-kun?" Sayuri said with a stutter.

The massive beast turned to her with a depressed expression. "Sa-chan, I'm sorry that I hid this from you and Naru-chan I didn't know how the two of you would react." The massive monster said in a booming voice that made the entire world rumble. Sayuri could hear the sincerity in the monster's voice and knew that the monster was actually Naruto like her clone had said.

"S-so that's really you Naru-kun?" Sayuri asked as the massive beast lowered it's head so that it was face to face with Sayuri who was looking into his massive single eye who was filled with sadness and anguish.

"Yes, a long time ago I had to seal away the beast called the Juubi within myself but doing this turned me into this. I am Naruto Uzumaki Namikaze, Nidaime Juubi no Kishin." The Juubified Naruto said to Sayuri who was deep in thought. "I'll explain more to both you and Naru-chan back after the preliminaries." Naruto said before he turned to Dark Sayuri who was smirking at her victory in proving that Naruto was a monster.

"What are you looking at monster?" She said with a bit of humor filling her voice.

Naruto narrowed his eye, "My seal may not have completely sealed you away because of how tired I was but that doesn't mean I can't suppress you even further now that inside Sayuri's mind." Dark Sayuri's eyes widened as Naruto picked her up with one of his massive clawed hands. "Suffer in the Tsukiyomi." Naruto said as the nine tomoe in his eyes spun wildly around the three inner circles.

Dark Sayuri faded as she was sent deeper into Sayuri's subconscious where she would be stuck in the Tsukiyomi until it wore off and since Naruto was at full power inside of Sayuri's mind it would be a long time before she would awaken from the nightmare Naruto was going to put her through.

Looking back at Sayuri, Naruto frowned, "I've suppressed her completely now. She will no longer try and influence you anymore for a few months at most. Please don't hate me for what I am." Naruto said before his eye started to spin once again as he sent Sayuri and himself out of the mind-scape.

Real world

Sayuri took in a deep breath as her consciousness re-entered the real world. She hesitated for a second giving Kankuro to send his puppet at her. Sayuri jumped out of the way. Her body was still burning from the poison flowing through her blood streaam. Looking up at Naruto from the corner of her eye, 'I don't hate you Naru-kun.' She thought before she decided to finish the battle.

Using a shunshin which surprised many jonin she appeared in front of Kankuro and landed a strong kick sending the sand shinobi up into the air. Jumping over Kankuro, Sayuri landed a massive kick sending the Shinobi smashing down into the ground.

See that Kankuro wasn't going to get back up the proctor called the match making Sayuri the winner before Sayuri fell back because of the poison in her blood stream. Four medics came in and took the two to the hospital in the tower. Naruto secretly made a shadow clone and sent it after Sayuro under the form of a small mouse.


And I'm done.

Review please, it makes me want to write more when you guys do since I feel like at least people like what i'm doing. Also I really want to reach 700 reviews and I'm sure that if everyone helps out I can make it and pass it. So tell your thoughts people they help me built the story. I actually use a few plot ideas from the reviews I get and I read all of them so everything you guys say I hear. So tell me your ideas as well but please make them real ideas not random bull shit and no I will not add Hinata. (Just saying it again since you guys still post Hinata comments even after I announced no.)

Also I was thinking about starting a new story and I wanted to know what you guys thought. Leave any suggestions for a new story. I must have a plot and I really don't want to do a cross over since I barely remember anything from other animes other than Naruto after I have finished them. The only one I really remember well enough is Soul eater and I already have a crossover for it.

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