I think that I may have gotten more reviews on this than any other story, but I lack the inspiration to continue writing this too, unfortunately...
I may have some good news for you though, I'm beginning to draw comics on my account at deviantart, and this story is becoming one of those comics, so if you would like to see the comic instead, please let me know and I'll tell you how to get there. I promise that I am not an artist who uses Paint for their comics and I've been drawing Sonic characters for a few years, so I hope that I know what I'm doing.
I'm not saying that I'm going to completely stop writing this story, but I'm just not going to right now.
Take it easy.