Ok here is my answers to my reviews:
scipoPB- thanks for being My 1st Reviewer! And for the names part I just put down whatever sounded good to me you know?
Willowsong-for the names Prettyleaf and Sunkiss and Starpaw as I said up above to ScipoPB I put down Whatever sounded good to me (and Starclan Specifily told her mom to call her that) and with Starpaw's spotted shaped stars on her pelt don't worry about it she is going to have and Interesting Future and LightingStar's Pattern on her back,(I'm going to use some of your Critism:)) why whould a Queen/mom on the day that they are born call her son Quickkit for all she knows is that Quickkit when he grows up he could be super slow so I had to give a reason why She would be called for Midnigtkit and Blackkit I didn" Know what to say in a bundle of 3 kits. So yeah...
CHAPTER 1
*- is the twoleg words that Shine doesn't know*
A creamy yellow she-cat with emerald eyes sat in the closed window looking out of it wondering if she might be able to go out there soon. But then a voice interrupted her thoughts
"Shine,-Shine," called her twoleg from the door
"Yes?" she meowed as she walked over knowing that it didn't understand her but she didn't care.
"-Shine-"as the twoleg rambled as it pointed to the door.
As she looked over where it was pointing she saw a little door an as she walked through it and into the backyard and breathed in and it smelled wonderful and she leaped into the willow that was the middle of the garden and sat in the sun.
A FEW DAYS LATER...
Shine was catching a plump bird but when she caught it she heard some mysterious voices sounding like they where combining their voices in to one saying saying over and over :GO TO THE FOREST , Louder and louder and louder and then the bird some-how escaped. Then she woke up.
After she woke up from her restless sleep she went out the kitty door and jumped up on the tree and looked out in to the forest(woods whatever) then she saw a bird it looked exactly like the bird in her dream! She hopped off the tree and in to the forest and began stalking the bird. And was about to leap on it when a cat growled and that growl scared the bird away.
Then Shine turned around Angry. She saw a blue gray cat leap at at her but she dodged and leaped an a tree. As the Blue gray cat looked around confused she took her chance and jumped on his back and bit him and held on and as she felt him start to roll leaped off him and hoked her paw around his legs and he fell and she sat on him and restrained his paws.
"Pretty awesome for a kittypet" meowed a voice looking over her sholder she saw brown cat
"What are you going to do? Try to make me angry and attack me like this cat just did?" shine meowed sarcasticly
"Um cat sitting on me,that's my leader Lightningstar and you never say anything like that to her, and can you get off me it's kinda embarrassing." meowed the blue-Gray cat
"Well to Lightingstar I'm sorry and to you Mr. I'm so embarrassed you have to say your sorry" meowed Shine.
"sorry..." the Blue gray said
"What?" asked Shine
"Sorry"
"What?"
"Sorry"
"WHAT?"
"SORRY" finally yelled the Blue Gray as he scared off all the Prey
"much better" she said as she stood and walked off him
Lightingstar just sat there and silently chucked