REVIER'S ANSWERS TO COMMENTS

Echoflame of Fireclan: Yep Starclan's Prophecy is horrible and I defenitly hope it's better than that :). and I did add more characters. And yes, Starpaw is not the main character.

Lightningstripe: Yes it might resemble Into a Wild a bit at the start, but as It goes on it will change don't worry

OK Just to let you know I changed the Allegiance so no more crazy names and crazy stuff except Starpaw She is in there for a reason. So don't question my motives. And Thank you for submitting Occs :)

Me: Come on Starpaw, I know everybody hates you because of your name but please do it.

Starpaw:No

Me: Pleaseeeeee?

Starpaw: I said no

Me: Pleaseeeeeee?

Starpaw: I. Said. NO! Don't you get that?

Me: No, (Grins evilly) but if I was about to torture Bluepaw to death would you do it to stop it?

Starpaw: OMG. FOR THE LOVE OF STARCLAN,DON"T DO THAT!

Me: (Smirks) Why do you like him?

Starpaw:(Blushes)NO. Here's the Disclaimer:(Sighs in defeat)Shiverstorm does not own Warriors only her characters she made up. And I like Bluepaw. As a friend. Only as a friend.

Lightpaw stopped respectfully in front of the lichen that hide the hole to her leader's den.

"Um,Lighteningstar? What are we going to do today? Are we going to see the border?

Are you going to show me how to hunt? How to fight?" asked Lightpaw anshly.

"Calm down young Lightpaw," meowed Lighteningstar as she walked out of her den.

"I'll Teach you how to fight tomorrow, but today I'll show you the border and how to hunt, Ok?"

"Ok" exclaimed Lightpaw "Let's go!" and raced out of camp.

"Wait young Lightpaw, your going to c-"(BANG!) exclaimed Lighteningstar then winced "-rash into a tree."

Lightpaw pov

"Ow" I groaned 'It hurts doesn't it?' I asked myself 'Well that's what I get for running off like that with out my leader' suddenly a voice interrupted my yelling at my self.

"Lightpaw are you all right? Asked a familiar voice. It was Bluepaw

"why are here Bluepaw? Aren't you suppose to be in camp or on a patrol?"

"I was I was bringing back some fresh kill then I saw you bang into the tree, so I stopped to see if you were Ok."

"Well I feel fine'" she lied

"Well,Ok, if your sure," Bluepaw replied doubtfully

"Lightpaw are you ok? You took a pretty hard bash on your skull..." asked Lighteningstar

"FOR THE LAST TIME I'M FINE!" Lightpaw roared and Lighteningstar and Bluepaw took a stepped back at the force of her roar.

Ok,ok you didn't have to yell... muttered Bluepaw

"Fine Lightpaw But don't yell You've probably scared the prey all the way to the borders." criticized Lighteningstar

"Sorry.."meowed Lightpaw her face reddening realizing what she done

"It's ok just next time yell your tail off in a pile of moss" meowed Lighteningstar

"Yes mam" And then Lightpaw saluted with her tail (Is that even possible?)

"Well I better be going and bring these pieces of fresh-kill back to camp"

"ok Bluepaw see you later"

"Bye young Bluepaw"

"Bye"

After he left dragging lots of Fresh-kill they went off to the border of River-clan

Bluepaw's P.O.V

"Urff," muttered Bluepaw as he thought 'Starclan this is heavy' as he was dragging a 2 rabbits,and a squirrel. He had just said good-bye to Lightpaw and Lighteningstar, and he was bringing his prey back to camp. He hoped she was ok. Finally he reached camp.

"Wow, 2 rabbits !" "What a huge squirrel!" and "How in Silverpelt did you catch that?" was what he heard in camp. And he rose his head proudly at each and every comment was made. Except Blackpaw

*TiMe SkIp*

Lightpaw walked proudly into camp with Lighteningstar prey hanging from her jaws, she had caught her first piece of fresh-kill. But that's not why she was proud, it was because she caught not 2 or 3 pieces of prey but SIX pieces. Lighteningstar said she was a natural hunter, and so she was proud of it. Gasps filled the camp as they wondered if Lightpaw caught it when they saw all the prey. Lightpaw then heard Nightstorm Sneered at her saying,

"I bet she didn't catch any of it because she's so kitty-pet,"

"Yeah," snorted Blizzardpelt"Because she's so weak,"

"It's a wonder she made it to the borders and back without fainting," added Blackpaw

Lightpaw dropped the prey at the Fresh-kill pile, then looked at Lighteningstar silently asking her mentor if it was ok to do what she was about to do. Lighteningstar nodded. Lightpaw took a step forward and and breathed deeply . "Look at that she's not a cat, she's a bullfrog!" Blackpaw said condescendingly.

'

I doubt that, Blackpaw' she thought.

Then a weird voice said in her head, 'Lightpaw run forward fast and fake left but go right,then claw under neath their paws, scratch their ears then climb up a tree.' she did as the voice said, feeling she could trust the voice.

Running towards them fast, she faked left and went right instead clawing their paws under neath them and they fell screeching while she did so, and out of the corner of her eyes she saw her mentors observant eyes widen as she disappeared in the trees.

'Now,' continued the voice 'leap as light as you can on the branches if you need to, but poke your head slightly through the trees but not enough to have them see you. Then wait for them to get in a group and jump on them, while stretching your self as wide as you can, claws unsheathed.'

She did what the voice told her again, as she slightly poked her face out of the leaves watching silently, Blackpaw,Blizzardpelt, and Nightstorm where looking around for her,

"I guess we scared her off, probably cowering behind her two-legs," sneered Nightstorm to the clan, he , Blizzardpelt, and Blackpaw had grouped back together again by the Highrock.

She leaped silently on the tree branches, careful to be light. As she leaped out of the tree she yelled to the trio;

"I would never leave the clan no matter how kitty pet I am, remember that,"

They as well as the rest of the clan stared as she appeared out of tree, stretching herself wide as she could, claws unsheathed, hitting her mark and clawing them leaving Blackpaw with a v in his ear, and scratches on his back. Blizzardpelt and Nightstorm had scratches too, But Nightstorm's scratches were much deeper than the others, as he was the target of her fury. The Clan stared in awe and Silently and immediately decided that nobody was to bully her any more.

Starpaw was the first one to congratulate her on winning against the trio.

" .WICKED!" the blue-gray she cat exclaimed

then all of her friends and clan surrounded her and congratulated her.