Ok guys (And girls!), after 1 year has passed since I have posted Shine, I am 13! (YAY!) Anyways, while cleaning my room, I found my notebook page that has the Clan info, prologue, and part of Ch. 1 of Shine, and after I read it, I realized that I was a horrible writer back then. I had a bunch of mary sue characters, a stupid sounding prophecy, I didn't really have an original plot line. So I'm sorry for that guys, and to make up for it, I'm rewriting it.
It will (Hopefully) have no prophecy as of yet, no Mary sue characters, And an original plotline! It WILL not be called shine. And this is what I have so far;
A blur passed through the plains, followed by a bigger slightly clumsy blur. If time slowed down, you would see that the first blur was a thin slivery gray she-cat. The cat had a somewhat scared, but determined look on her face, and had good reason to. Behind her the bigger blur was a dog, not a regular happy-go-lucky golden retriever, oh no. Instead it looked like a mix of a Rottweiler, German Shepard, and a Bull dog. If you looked at its face, even the most bravest man would wet its pants, because it was maddened with hunger, its eyes where small pinpoints, and it had a few scratches made by the cat on it's snarling muzzle. The cat however, had nicked the cats several times and bitten it once.
The thin cat ran through the plains, determined to lose the madden dog. Suddenly she noticed a little kit batting a nut like it was an imaginary foe. Fear raced though her as she thought of what would happen if the dog got to the kit. Her mind made up, she would not let the little kit die! She skidded in front of the kit, staring determinedly at the approaching dog. Said kit jumping backward at the unexpected intrusion.
"Run," the cat said in a raspy whisper. When the kit didn't move, the cat turned, looking at the kit, who's eyes were in horror at how bloody the strange cat was.
"Run," the cat said this time pointing with her tail at the incoming blur that was coming closer and closer every second."Run, before it gets you."
The kit looked where the cat was pointing, it's eyes widening even further. It turned tail and ran.
"If I die dog" the cat said in it's strange raspy whisper. "At least I'll die with honor!" she did a tiny bow, and then ran towards the huge snarling creature.
So, that's All I have for now, so tell me if you like!