The next day after school, the keepers visited Willa. Her mother had phoned everyone telling them that her daughter wouldn't wake up again.

Everyone stared at her sleeping body.

"Don't worry Wills," said Amanda. "We will find you tonight and wake you up."

"The Dark One will pay greatly for this," said Philby.

"You guys tend to say that a lot," said Luowski.

"Well it's a promise," said Amanda. "I am still holding back that push."

"Oh really?" said a voice. "How long do you think you can hold it back?"

Everyone turned around and saw Finn, or the Dark One, leaning against the closed door.

"You!" yelled Dillard. "Give me back Mattie!"

"And give me back Willa!" yelled Philby

Everyone ran towards Finn but he waved his hand and everyone froze in place.

"I don't have time to fight, or that much time to talk," said Finn. "I have something specially planned for Willa and Mattie."

"What?" asked Maybeck.

"I came here to let you know about my plans tonight," said Finn. "And where I am going to attack."

Everyone stared at him.

"Well first off for the places where I am going to get the relics," Finn said.

He then smirked.

"I am not telling you," he said.

"What!?" yelled Charlene.

"You guys will just have to figure it out," said Finn. "But it shouldn't be a problem. Dillard seems to get the concept. Any place that is somewhat mountainous or adventurous."

The keepers could only just stare at him because they were frozen.

"As for finding Willa and Mattie, I shall only give you clues," said Finn.

The keepers continued to stare.

"Here they are," he said. "They are both in the same attraction. It's an attraction that makes you scream. Its an attraction that Jess really hates."

Jess eyes popped open.

"The Tower of Terror!" she yelled.

Finn just smiled.

"See you tonight if you can catch me in time," he said. "Now if you excuse me, I have some fun planned for Willa and Mattie."

He disappeared into a cloud of smoke, as the keepers were unfrozen.

They stared at where Finn was standing and then back at Willa.

"Well we know where he is hiding them," said Maybeck. "But where will he strike?"

"Well from what the Dark One said," said Amanda. "Dillard pointed out places that are mountainous or adventurous."

"So that means, Indiana Jones Epic Stunt Spectacular and Fantasmic!" said Dillard.

"Excellent," said Philby.

They all walked back to Willa.

Jess put her hand on her Willa's head.

"I wonder what she is going through now?" asked Jess.

What they didn't know was that Willa and Mattie were going something extremely worse than they thought.


Willa and Mattie found themselves chained to a ceiling by their arms.

"What is going on?" Mattie.

Willa looked around and gasped. She knew that this could only mean one thing.

"I think we are about to be tortured!" she exclaimed.

"What!?" yelled Mattie. "Oh not again!"

"Oh yes again!" said the same voice they recognized every time they heard it.

The Dark One appeared in front of them. He followed by a bunch of Overtakers. He wore an apron and gloves and had a case under his arm.

"Please Finn, or Dark One," said Willa. "I have already been tortured once! Please don't make me go through it again!"

Finn smiled and placed his case on a table and opened it.

"Oh but I will make you go through it again," said Finn. "If you haven't forgotten, I am completely heartless. Your pleads will not work on me. I have no mercy for people like you."

"Please…" said Mattie.

Finn ignored her as he rummaged through his case. He then pulled out a scalpel.

The girls stared wide-eyed at it.

"Now let's see," said Finn and he walked towards Willa.

"NO!" Mattie yelled. "Do me first! Willa has already been tortured! Let me go first!"

Finn smiled.

"If you insist," he said.

He then walked up to Mattie. He made a long rip down her shirt exposing her stomach and bra.

He took the knife and then made a long cut across her stomach. She howled in pain.

"The last person I had in these chains, which was a cast member, was begging for death long before I was finished with him," said Finn. "Will you be?"

"Go…to...Hell-AHH!" yelled Mattie as Finn made another cut across her chest.

"We're already in Hell," said Finn.

He made a few more cuts on Mattie before moving onto Willa.

"I believe you remember this pain?" Finn asked as he made a cut across Willa, hearing her scream.

"You should remember too!" she yelled. "You experienced it as well!"

"No Finn experienced it," explained Finn. "I, the Dark One, am making you relive it."

He cut them up a few more times before moving onto his next torture weapon, a hammer.

He smashed the hammer on their legs, arms, and stomach. One time he smashed his hammer against Willa's stomach so hard that she threw up.

Finn stared at the poor girls and frowned. Neither of them was crying.

"Why aren't you crying!?" Finn yelled angrily.

"I already felt this pain and cried to it!" said Willa. "I will not cry again!"

"I've had worse!" yelled Mattie.

Finn glared at them, but them his frown turned into a smile.

"Then let's put some tears on those faces," he said.

He reached into his case again.

"Say hello to my little friend," he said as he pulled out a whip.

The Overtakers behind him cheered.

"Twenty lashes!" yelled Frollo.

"No fifty! Do fifty!" yelled Ursula.

"One hundred lashes!" yelled the Horned King yelled. "Each!"

Everyone cheered at that.

"You want a hundred each?" asked Finn.

The Overtakers cheered.

"I'll do one hundred!" he yelled.

He walked up to Willa and Mattie.

He then closed his eyes, and made a clone of himself.

"This way we can hear you scream at the same time!" the two Finns said.

Willa and Mattie begged for mercy, but Finn wouldn't give any. He cracked the whips against their bare backs, hearing them scream out in pain.

"This is for the leaders you locked up!" yelled the Finn whipping Willa.

"This for all the plans you fucked up!" yelled the Finn whipping Mattie.

"Together its all for getting in my way constantly!" they yelled at the same time.

Once they made one hundred lashes on both of their backs, they spun them around.

They were both crying. Tears ran down their faces. They sobbed and sniffed.

"This is the true meaning of pain and suffering," said Finn. "You should never have fucked with the Dark One."

"Impressive," said a voice.

Finn turned around and saw the Evil Queen and Tia Dalma.

"Thank you," said Finn.

"Let's go," said Tia Dalma. "We must prepare for our assault on Hollywood Studios."

"That's right!" said Finn to all the Overtakers. "Tonight we all attack together! Tonight we all go to get the relics! Tonight we collect the final pieces for out master plan!"

The Overtakers laughed menacingly. Willa and Mattie watched as they walked out.


Willa and Mattie were left hanging and sobbing.

"I thought I would never have to experience that again," said Willa.

"I hate him so much!" yelled Mattie. "The Dark One I mean."

"When I get out of here, I will make him pay," said Willa.

"You mean if we get out of here," said Mattie.

"We will," said Willa. "We just have to have hope."

Mattie managed to smile at the word hope. It was what kept the keepers alive when she and Dillard went to save them.


My god! Willa got tortured again, and Mattie got it for the first time. That bastard! Will he ever be stopped? Will the keepers manage to rescue Willa and Mattie, and stop the Dark One in time? Stay tuned to find out.

See you next update!

From your favorite Fanguy,

Jacob/Hades/Sonicphantom47