Nothing Ever Ends - An Eleanor and Park Story

by lilmisslovely24

She needs him like a flower needs the sun. He needs her like he needs air to breathe. But with the a long distance relationship and a stepdad who will kill Eleanor on sight, how are they ever going to make it work? (This is my continuation of Rainbow Rowell's novel Eleanor and Park)

4. AN ON CHAP 3

AN: Hi everyone, so, I'm actually a little disappointed in myself, I definitely should not have posted it like that, I feel like people just aren't liking it, and I'm possibly going to take it down to fix it up then repost it later!

I'm really not sure what to do here, either leave it the way it is, or redo it, if someone could give me some opinions that would be awesome, so please, HELP ME OUT! I'm really doubting myself on it.

Chapter 4 is almost finished, but I'm too focused on how 3 seems to me, so the sooner I figure things out the sooner I can post chapter 4.

I'm not looking for reviews on the story about this, please understand I realize it can come off that way, PM me if it will make you feel better, just gimme a lil help here.

Thanks!

Lilmisslovely24