So I did get to post today ! YAY lol, and sorry I'm not Veronica Roth, I'm Cam :)

When I wake up I open my eyes but shut them immediately, it's too bright, and the smell is almost like bleach, clean I guess. I feel a hand holding mine it feels warm and smooth, it makes me feel safe. I try to open my eyes again and I succeed I look around the room and spot a few familiar faces. I see Jace in the corner leaning against the wall, standing, I wonder why he isn't sitting. I continue my search throughout the room I land on daddy and mommy. Daddy is sitting in what looks like a recliner chair, to the left of me. He is the one gripping my hand, I see mommy sitting next to him, her head on his shoulder and she looks like she's sleeping. I still feel someone else's presence. I look around the room to my right and am surprised by what I see, I am met with my favorite piercing bright blue eyes I smile. I feel kind of tired again so I close my eyes, but don't fall asleep yet. I hear the door open and close.

" Hello Eaton's, and Mr. Pedrad, has she woken up yet ? "

" No, no she hasn't when is she though she's been out for three days and you said on the first day it would only be a few hours, are you sure she isn't dying? I don't want her to die! " A deep voice says it sounds angry, and also sad. It's Jace.

" I know, we predicted it would only be a few hours. Talia has been through a lot though, she got punched several times in chest, stomach, and face, she has 5 broken ribs, a pretty severe concussion, and because of getting punched repeatedly in the chest her shoulder is pretty much shattered. " The doctor says.

" We know her injuries, we just wanna know if she'll be okay, and when, she's my sister and I want to see her healthy, for god sakes her x-boyfriend did this to her " Jace says. I feel another hand grip mine on my right, it's Riley's.

I wanna open my eyes, but I can't I feel like suddenly I can't control my body.

" Yes, I know. We feel that her body is under a lot of stress right now, we obviously did emergency surgery on her shoulder, but the rest of her body is struggling to fix everything else. All of the medicine we are giving her through the IV should be giving a little extra help in the process of healing. " The doctor says. I hear him walk over closer to my bed and I feel Riley let his grip on my hand go. Then I feel movement in and on my arm, and it hurts! It must be my IV.

" Her IV is still in tact, we do still think that she should wake up soon, I know this has been very hard for all of you, you'll just have to wait a little while longer " The doctor says. I feel Riley grab my hand again and give it a reassuring squeeze.

" Four, Tris, and Jace if you wouldn't mind I'd like to see you outside please " The doctor says again. I hear some shuffling, and daddy's hand letting go of mine, the door opens and closes, leaving me and Riley alone.

" Hi Talia, I know you probably can't hear me, but... I love you, and I want you to wake up soon. I want to see my favorite eyes, and smile. I'm gonna kill Ethan for doing this to you I really am. Your dad says that he knocked him unconscious when he found you guys, but remembered you, he said that you looked pretty bad, all your bruises and stuff." He grips my hand harder " H-he said that you thought you h-had died in his arms, and then that he was so happy when he heard you call for him " Oh my god Riley ! I wanna cry and hug him and feel his lips on mine. " Once the doctor said that you were in a stable condition and that people other than family could see you, I asked if I could, your dad kind of freaked out when I told him that we were together. It's kind of hard to believe that that was three days ago, and you still haven't woken up. Your brother hasn't left this room, I think he is taking it the hardest, your mom has left the most, for training initiates, and stuff, she believes that you will make it through all of this and be okay. She stays with you all night though. Your dad also stays with you for a pretty long time, leaves for a couples times, just to get food, and stuff. I've kind of been gone too, with training, and my dad says I need sleep, but I've come here every night to say goodnight, and every morning to say good morning. Ethan has been here too, but we wouldn't let him see you, he said that he didn't know what he was thinking, and that he saw me and you kissing, and that he just got jealous and didn't mean any harm. That scumbag. " Riley gets cut off by the door opening again, mom, dad, and Jace are back.

" Hey, what'd doctor Lance say ? " Riley asks, I guess my doctor is Dr. Lance

" He said that Talia, is still stable, but when she wakes up and is able to leave, that she'll not do very well in training, with a shattered shoulder, and her ribs broken she won't be able to fight well " Daddy says

" Right now in the standings Talia is in 7th, that's not that bad, but if she doesn't wake up soon, she'll be bumped lower " Mommy says

" Say she dosen't wake up or isn't able to get up, what will her ranking be then ? " Riley says

" 10th, even though she isn't doing anything right now, there are some transfers that are doing terrible, and will fall behind her. " Mommy says again.

" This isn't fair ! This is all Ethan's fault, Talia shouldn't get punished for something that she couldn't control ! " Riley says.

" We know, we will not let her become Factionless in this stage, we won't. She should do well in the second and third stage though... If she wakes up. Her standings should go up in those two stages, we can only hope that she wakes up in time " Daddy finally says, Jace still is quiet. I can't take it anymore they need to know that I'm alive, that I'm safe, and okay. Jace needs to know his little sister it not going to die... I force my eyes to open, and they do I look at Jace, he's back in the corner again, except this time he is on the ground, he head in his hands. Mommy and daddy are back in that same position. Riley is too.

" J-jace " I try to say, but it comes out like a croak. He lifts his head a little then says

" What mom ? " He thinks mom said that, we do kinda have the same voice.

" Jace, honey that wasn't me " Mom says

" What ? " He lifts his head up and gets up, his eyes are bloodshot and puffy, he's been crying. In all of my 16 years of living I have never seen Jace, Jace Eaton, cry. I think he sees my eyes open, but I close them because I begin to get tired again, he runs over to the side that Riley is on, Riley lets my hand go and Jace takes it in his hand.

" Talia, I know I heard you! Please, come on ! I love you, I want my sister back ! " He says, he's is crying again.

" J-jace I-I'm h-here " I croak again. I open my eyes again, and am met with blue- grey ones.

" Riley go get Lance, hurry " Jace calls.

I hear Riley get up and leave out the door.

" Oh my god Talia, I've missed you so much " He says and kisses my forehead.

I turn my head on my pillow facing daddy, and smile he smiles back, and moves a stray piece of hair out of my eyes. I smile at mommy too.

" I love you " Daddy says. I nod and face Jace again. Riley comes back in with Lance.

" Why hello Talia, I'm glad to see your awake, you gave your family quite a scare " He says. I nod again. and close my eyes. I'm so tired, even though I like just woke up!

" I see your tired which is completely normal, we'll let you sleep. " I think he says more but I'm too far gone.

So I have just kind of realized that every chapter except to #1 is ended with her going to sleep lol, same with this one :) Anyways I am thinking about posting later today, so that's cool. Thanks for all your support and reviews. Oh yeah btw I'm no way shape or form a doctor, sooo this stuff probably won't be realistic. Have a great day :) ~ Cam!