Hello Everyone,
I am currently working on a Christmas chapter for MNBG and I wanted to ask your opinion about it. I know that Christmas has already passed but I didn't have time to write due to the holidays. Here are two little parts I came up with. Please tell me if you want me to finish or not. I also wanted to thank you for your sweet reviews on New Neighbors.
Sneak peak: The Best Christmas Gift He Could Have Ever Been Given
Eddie: Loren? Loren, where are you? – inquired Eddie while searching for Loren who seemed to have disappear. - This isn't funny, where are you?
It has now occurred to him that something was odd about the room but no matter how hard he tried he couldn't figure it out. With curiosity in his eyes, he took one last good around and a few minutes later he finally noticed the large box that has been mysteriously placed next to the Christmas tree. Making his way over it, he decided to do a little observation before opening up the two layers that were keeping him from finding out the secret of this box. Little did he know that this is going to be the best Christmas present, he could have ever been given.
Meanwhile at LAX
Now that the holidays have arrived most of the people intend to leave their everyday lives behind to go home for a few days and celebrate with their loved ones. Given the chaotic circumstances at the airport, all the hangars were full of There was a couple in particular who wanted to get home more than anyone else. They have been planning to come home because they have been away from their family for a very long time.
Woman: Thank you!
Man: I am going to go and get out suitcases while you buy us some drinks, OK? I am really thirsty.
Woman: Sure.
Man: OK, I'll be right back.
Woman: Trent!
Trent: Yes, honey?
Nora: Could you please also check whether the driver is on his way or not? I want to get home and surprise Loren as soon as possible.
Trent: Of course, sweetheart.
With that being said, both of them headed off to their separate ways, getting more and more excited by the moment.