RE-bel With me

by storywriterya432

This is a divergent fanfic about a girl name Francesca Prior who is and truly is Abnegation but this is only what she thinks. Will her aptitude test tell her otherwise and if so what will she do to fit in with her true faction the faction that she later defies for what she believes in. She will meet other people along the way romances will form and systems will be broken.

2. Chapter 2

Yesterday after the aptitude test, I was shaken to the bone. The lady had told me to go straight home. I didn't know why but I did. As soon as I closed the door I heard her muttering something about 'erasing aptitude data' and I didn't know what she meant by that. I had intended to ask my mom but something had given me an instinct not to.

Today is Choosing Day. I already have my mind set and nothing is going to change my mind. When we get there we sit with our faction and I sit next to my mother. A couple of minutes later Samantha Williams, the leader of the factions, comes up and gives us the history of the reason why we all have to choose factions and how based on the aptitude test we should all know which faction we should choose. She begins calling out names. I only hear the first few until they get to Andrew.

He goes up and his choice surprises me and both my parents gasp. He chooses Candor. I don't know why but his choice doesn't surprise as much as I thought it would. He is always loud and I guess he somehow gets along with some of the Candor at school. However his choice pains me.

Is it the feeling of betrayal, hate I don't know but as I'm drowned in my own thoughts Samantha calls my name. I snap out of my day dreaming and walk up to the five bowls that are placed in front of me. I cut my hand with the knife provided and I motion my feet to the Abnegation bowl filled with grey stones.

As I'm about to choose I think back to my aptitude test, how I viciously attacked the dog before it got to my brother. I think about how I always have admired the Dauntless. I think about the freedom and then I move my hand and my blood sizzles on the coals. I look back at my parents, They're both smiling and I now know that this is the choice they wanted me to pick and I realise that they were Dauntless and now it's my turn.

I walk over to the Dauntless section and but something more likely someone stops me. Samantha Williams congratulates me but as she does I see a very cold look in her eyes.

"Prior is your name?" she asks. "That is the name of one of the most dangerous divergent in our history." I look at her strangely and she replies with "Beatrice Prior." The name hits me my ancestors name was Beatrice/Tris. My parents told me that she saved our city and that Caleb, her brother, is my great, great, great grandad. My parents know very much about her and still there is much they won't tell me. "Yes, I do know Beatrice. She is my ancestor and I know very much about her." And as soon as I reply Samantha gives me another cold look. She smiles then says "You don't know anything about who she is she was a rebel against our government. But whatever you belie is your choice" then she walks away. I continue on to my faction with her words swimming around in my mind.