Thank you for the reviews. And sorry if I spoiled some people, I should've added a spoiler warning didn't I?
Thanks for the reviews and yeah, I'm not chinese , I'm a filpino. That answers The anonymous review. Keep on reading cuz im not half way done with this fic.
Anyways, 2nd chapter
Dead on Arrival. Rin couldn't believeit, her mother, gone. HEr father was weeping endlessly, Crying with pain and agony, for they have lost they're love one.
"Rin why did this happen!?" Her father yelled at the hospital. Rin couldn't answer. "Rin.. I'm sorry, I don't have money eft for a burial. We can't give your mother a proper burial, Rin, can handle it?" Her father ask, seemingly accepting the fact that her wife is dead. "I could try." rin left.
Rin rode through the night, going back to Nico's house.
"What do you want?" Nico said. "Is the bagua there?" Rin asked, Nico nodded no. "What do you know of it? It is not here." A blonde woman walked up to the two.
"It's in my house." Rin said, the blonde was shocked to hear this from Rin. "Nico ready the car, we are going to this girl's home." Nico didn't utter a word and obeyed what she was told.
The cold night air didn't affect Rin as she led the two older women to her house.
"Here" Rin pointed at the doorway, with the eerie antique hanging above the entrance. the blonde got out of the car in amazement, she couldn't say anything."Stay here, don't follow me nor look at the bagua" the blonde began chanting ancient chinese words that Rin couldn't understand. She inched closer and closer to the locked door of the house.
Moments later, When the blonde was 3 step form the door, it flew open, much to rin's surprise. In the open door, two white figurs of old women appeared, staring at the blonde.
The blonde began chanting faster and moving in the house quickly as well. Once the blonde has stepped in the house, the door slammed close, followed by a dozen of spirits appearing in the windows of the house, staring at Rin and Nico. "what's is this? Who are they?!" Rin asked Nico. Nico just signalled Rin to shut up. As Rin observed her spirit filled home, she saw her mother along with those ghosts. "Mom?" Rin walked slowly, she was in disbelief. "Rin! Don't follow!" Nico tried to stop Rin. She flailed around trying to get away from nico's grip, while flailing, she had even saw the spirit of slums' boss, Erena's ghost was there too. "Mom!" getting back on track, She got out of Nico's grip. But a scream from the inside stopped Rin from getting near the door. "ELI!" Nico rushed inside Rin's house. She pulled out Eli's weak and unmoving body. "ELI! I'LL GET YOU TO A HOSPITAL!" Nico yelled trying to wake up the gil in her hands. "Let me help" Rin offered. "NO! STAY AWAY FROM US! STOP BOTHERING US FROM NOW ON!" Nico hurriedly put eli in the car as she went for the driver seat. "Hey!" Rin yelled. "YOU ARE CURSED STAY AWAY FROM US!" Nico started the car and drove away.
Raging anger was inside Rin, for the cause of her mother's death was an antique, an old curse. Rin angrily stomped off going inside the house. "COME OUT! I'M NOT AFRAID OF YOU!"
Rin angrily yelled at the empty house. "COME O-" When she turned back, a white figure cut her speech, she was so shocked she fell on the floor. The on figure became two and disappeared. Before Rin could stand up, a foce pulled her by the collar, she was being dragged on the floor. She bumped into various furniture in her house but the force pulling her stopped and she fell unconcious at her living room.
Rin woke up in the hospital, her father a mess, her mother a corpse. She looked through the window while the paramedics talk to her father. Rin then noticed a figure at the end of the hall. A white figure was now inches from Rin. After that she felt she was being strangled. Everything went Black.
"Miss, hey miss wake up" A delivery boy lightly slapped Rin's cheek. "Huh?!" Rin woke up. "Uhm, miss, is mr. Hoshizora here?" The boy asked. "Uhm, no, I'll recieve it."
Rin signed the papers for the delivery. "Uhm, What time is it?" Rin asked again. Loking at his watch the boy said "9 am Miss." Rin thanked him. After the delivery truck left,Rin went outside, the bagua still there. Rin's anger shot up. SHe walked inside her house and grabbed a hammer and a chair. She went back outside and removed the antique from the door. She ayed the bagua on the floor, not noticing a van arriving, She hammered the antique to pieces. The woman behind her was shocked. "ahh!" the woman said. "Hey ! no Miss, Don't be afraid, I live here now." Rin said trying to calm down the frieghtened woman. "It's not that." The woman said in fear. "H-here re the documents for the house. Please let mr. Hoshizora sign it." Like it was on cue, Rin's father arrived on a taxi. "Kotori-san! you're here" Kotori directed her attention to rin's father who was trying to look happy wiping the sadness on his face. KOtori then gave the papers to him and got back in the van immediately shutting the door. At one second Kotori thought, She opened the door again and said, "Deny the good fortune while you can" She then left on the van confusing Rin and her father. Rin's father tried no to seem pained about the loss of his wife so he smiled at Rin when he looked up the doorway, It was there, The antique ws hanged there on the doorway "Rin you brought tht antique with us and hanged it here? it looks nice." Rin's heart sunk. What did her father meant? Antique back in the doorway?...
Rin slowly turned back only to see the bagua back in one piece.
Kotori rushed toward the temple of Taoism after she saw the cursed frantically looked for the master of the temple. After a while, she saw master, along with a red haired individual. "Kotori are you here for the bagua as well?" A purple haired girl asked."So she has my lucky charm?" The red head spoke. "Come let us talk about this in my quarters." The purple haired woman lead them through the many statues of chinese gods and hanged lucky charms. "Let us see, You two have owned the bagua yes?" The woman asked. "Master Nozomi please skip to the end, I'm quite busy with my hospital buisness." The red head spoke. "ok, You two, The ancient curse of the bagua , came from it's masters spirit, Lotus feet. They're master was kind, and gentle woman, but still, she had cast a curse against those she had helped, for those she had helped,
had banded together to betray her, Since that very night she was killed, The bagua she held on her death served as a prison for her soul, and trapped the spirits that she cursed inside, but since there are more spirit, to find victims, they give them luck for a price, Any person close to the owner shall be the payment." Nozomi paused as the two women infront of her were shocked. "You mean? That thing took away my family?!" Kotori was in tears. "I don't care about this story, I need my luck back."
The redhead said. "Hold on Maki, Hold on , Let me continue, but since more souls are inside the bagua, they will give the owner more luck, but What I feared has already come, More luck-" Before nozomi can finish, Kotori spoke up."More victims." Kotori paled while maki didn't ven care. "You see I've had enough of this, I want that antique back, Where is it?" KOtori was shaken by maki's fierce voice. " For now I shall research the person who took the bagua Away from this temple. You two go back toyour jobs"
Maki and kotori they left, Maki gave kotri a glare.
Kotori went up to meet her girlfriend, the head of security, Sonoda Umi "Umi-chan, You know you don't need to do this for me." Kotori said. "It's for your security, And besides, I wouldn't want my girlfriend to be assaulted at her own home"
Umi said with a smile. "Plus, It would reallly relieve me if you kept a gun in your house." Umi striked Kotori's face as she trembled. "You know how I feel about guns. I don't like them ever since my uncle was shot to death." This was very well true, for Kotori was traumatized from her relative's death by a firearm.
"Fine, But I'll have these security light installed tonight." Umi sighed then continued on her date with Kotori.
Days past, Rin continued on with sorrow as she never left her mother's side. Until that is, Her mother was burried. After her mom was buried, Her father hitched up with some of his friends to drink while Rin went out to return where she and her mother lived. "Rin, This is bad! You shouldn't have come back here. ANju is really mad about Erena's death and now is blaming you! Rin leave before you get caught up in this." Rin hurriedly left, Before she could leave, she bumped into Honoka and Tsubasa.
"Rin! Get out of here ! You might get killed! Anju is threatening to you you know!" Honoka said. "Fine, Fine I'm going, But Here,This is a phone I got when some girl left it behind. It's all yours." Rin gave the phone to the two and left. Honoka and tsubasa were dumbfounded. A text message suddenly flashed on the phone.
Give me back my phone. I woul pay anything! Please! Give it back,I'll give you 20000 yen for it.
Tsubasa and Honoka thought that the big money would help them and thus decided to return the phone. They texted back,
We're giving it back. Where will we meet?
Under a few seconds, a reply came in,
Near the public .
Honoka and Tsubasa willingly set out to th market.
After Hours of waiting, Night began to fall. It was by then they met up with the phone's owner accompanied by a blonde girl and three more men.
"You have my phone?" A slightly red haired girl said. "H-here" Honoka stuttered. "Good." the girl smiled and retireved her phone. "Yukiho are we done here?" the blonde asked "Yeah we're done Arisa." "Hey! How about our ransom?" Tsubasa was angered."Ransom? You stole my phone and stupidly came here? hmph. Let's go Arisa. And you three, take care of them." Yukiho snapepd her fingers. "What now?" Honoka said "We run." Tsubasa and Honoka parted ways starting a chase with the threemen.
Tsubasa hurriedly ran down the empty stalls of the market. She made it all the way down the area where they sell meat. As best as tsubasa could do to escape, She can't out run two people at once. With allher attempts, She ultimately gets her neck tied in the ropes that held the cover for the stalls, All the two men did was pulled each others end and Tsubasa breathed no more.
Honoka had a much harder time scurrying throught the tight spaces of the storage area in the market. Though her luck quickly ran out as she took a metal chair in the face.
She felt the pain. SHe couldn't get up. She then was beaten to death by the man chasing her.
Whew. 2nd. You do realize that I cut some scenes and changed some also? Nah, it's not like all of youknow the movie.
Kotori won't be having a last name or I'll add in her last name later, for she was already married here and had 2 kids but the kids died alng with her husband.
So R&R I look forward to your reviews :)
