Just a little Author's note not an actual update.
I have been bouncing ideas off a few of my friends. The more I think about it the more I'm not okay with how things are going with my story. Darien left without explanation. Then shortly after Rei leaves because of her feelings for Serena, Well honestly for me. She's had two years to grow some balls and tell Serena that she loves her because Darien isn't in the picture anymore but she doesn't then randomly just decides that it's too much and leaves…. Yeah… so I've been playing around with an idea…. There's another reason why she left…. It's a bit dark but well it should be interesting… if I decide to go with it I'll probably end up doing a rewrite of the previous chapters to tweak them a little because some of the things that are said wouldn't fit and how Rei acts would be a little off…. But I don't want to give too much away. As for Darien there will be an explanation… I thought about the whole dream thing… but really it's overdone… So if I go with in the direction I want to it should add a few more chapters to the story.
I am in college and final exams are just a few weeks away and I have a few papers and projects that are do so I haven't really had the time to write as much as I'd like. But I have been working on different ways the conversations between Serena and Darien and Serena and Rei are going to go… It has to be right. I want to involve Mina in it more too since she is the only one who has been in contact with Rei since she left. Working on that as well…
The way it's looking is Chapter four is going to be a short one with chapter five being completely a flash black explaining why Rei left and tying in why her grandpa isn't running the shrine anymore. Since I kind of just left that out altogether.
So just sit tight hopefully over the weekend I can get chapter four up.
Thanks for the reviews!