Here it is, and the kits are!:

Rowankit- 5

Ashkit- 5

Spottedkit- 4

Robinkit- 4

Brookkit- 3

Berrykit- 2

Swallowkit- 2

Lionkit- 2

Squirrelkit- 2

Fernkit- 2

Silverkit- 1

Minnowkit- 1

Cloudkit- 1

Crystalkit- 1

Leafkit- 1

If you can't guess Rushstar & Treefall's kits are; Robinkit, Ashkit, Spottedkit, Rowankit.

Thanks for voting! Accepting OCs!


Talk Time! (TT):

Leafelora-

Thanks but I wanted you to see how all the clans are settled down and relaxed and then it'll just stick to Riseclan as the trouble starts brewing... Sorry if you can't understand, I just don't want to give anything away...

Trinity-

Yes, I'm sorry but I was a bit short of OCs...

xXLeafheartXx-

Thanks for all your support! hopefully this long doesn't take as long or short because it's got a cliff hanger...

Whoever Submitted Callie & Flight-

Thanks, it's ok I'll need more anyway! Thanks, I'll love to use them seeing as a couple of outside cats are going to get the spot light!


Ok, on with the story!

Jewelclan

'How will we get home now?'

Rushstar had woken up 2 days ago, and was still limping. Moonstar was close to breaking down and giving up. Flamestar was silent through it all. Clawstar tried to keep his emotions under control. Silverstar tried to keep everyone together and Snowstar just wished that this all wasn't real. That this was all a dream, she would wake up back in her mossy nest in her protective den back in Jewelclan camp…

'HELP!'

Rushstar screamed as something bit her, Flamestar yowled and ran for the nearest ledge, Silverstar lunged towards the dark hissing figure. Clawstar begged and begged at it, unable to hold in his feelings anymore. Moonstar ran over to Rushstar and tried to soothe her wounds. Snowstar stared, frozen in terror as the figure hissed and pounced onto Clawstar. Silverstar screeched as he too was taken down, Moonstar screamed as the figure lunged for her. Flamestar watched it all from above, then next was Snowstar.

She yowled as a bright light lit up the cave, the figure shrieked and retreated back into the darkness.

'Whoa, I didn't know you could do that…'

Snowstar stared up at Flamestar in amazement.

'Nor did I…'


Snowstar stared off into space it was Sharing-tongues but she was alone in her cave, she could hear her kits Whiskerfur and Whitesnow outside talking worriedly about her.

She sighed as she got up and padded through the lichen towards the two snow-white cats sitting in the camp sharing a vole.

"Mind if I join?"

The two cats looked up.

"No, not at all."

Whitesnow shuffled her paws as Whiskerfur beckoned toward Snowstar with his tail.

"We were just coming to get you."

Although the fierce clan they were, everyone had their ups and downs at some point of their lives…

"What ya'll thinkin' bout?"

The three white cats suddenly jumped at the voice of Ferretclaw and Loudmoon with Sorrelpaw. The 3 toms curtly nodded their heads at Snowstar;

"Seems as Sandy's busy wit' Hazelp an' Wisperflighta isn't feelin' too good, we decided to take Sorrelp out, dat ok wit' u?"

{N/A: I decided to give Loudmoon some slang because he's an old cat with an attitude for the new! Get what I'm saying? I meant to call the cats that… Forgive me, Cartoon Warrior!}

Snowstar smiled warmly and nodded at the 3 toms. "Yes, you may but wait a heat-beat!"

Before they took off the toms stared back at their leader in confusion and patience.

"I also know now who's been giving 'Sorrelp' some of the slang…"

Loudmoon's pelted bristled with embarrassment, Ferretclaw shook his head in disgust, and little Sorrelpaw stood there frozen with confusion.

"Oh…"

"Let's go, you two."

Ferretclaw left the camp dragging behind him two dumbfounded cats.


Sorrelpaw took a deep breath, letting the scent of the forest linger around and inside him. From a far, he could hear the birds happily going about their daily lives or singing their beautiful songs. He was on a patrol near the Duneclan border. Sorrelpaw had never experienced such peace and quiet, even when he was a kit! Then something hit his senses, something that terrified him. As if his spooked self had set off an alarm around him, the birds suddenly stopped and the streams suddenly froze, the clouds held their breath as they watched what would happen next…

TBC


(TBC)-

To Be Continued...

There you are, I hope you liked it! And if you want to submit OCs I got a few future or in-progress stories that need your help so just PM me if you want to do that!

Anyway, like I said, this will be a cliff-hanger and it'll skip right over back to see Shadowpaw. So if you're confused PM me (spoilers!) or just wait and see! It should be happening soon...

So, review, read, tell me what you think and I should have the next one up!

Bye!