Thanks so much to Pinklight1, Willowsmoke of ShadowClan
, PikaBolt101, mistystar123, and Splashpaw for the great reviews!
Anyway, so I decided to give you guys a good cliffhanger, and forget about fanfic for a while. As in a few days. Darkflowerprincess and I have some very important tests coming up, so I will be busy. I might still be able to post, but you know. I have this story planned out, but I don't know everything I am going to do. So if you like it, review! If you don't like it review! If you hate it, review!
Brokenstar crashed into the prisoners tunnel. Whitewing watched him collapse from sheer exhaustion at Hawkfrost's paws.
"He's dying."
Whitewing turned to look ate Jayfeather. She nodded in agreement. That much was obvious. Brokenstar was starving, thirsty, and exhausted.
"That could be very bad news for us, the Dark forest cats have orders to kill us the second he dies. They are supposed to feed us to the rats."
Whitewing shuddered, remembering the terrible fate Dawnpelt had met. The idea that her beautiful daughter could meet the very same fate- no, Whitewing would never let that happen!
Brokenstar glared up at Hawkfrost. The other tom wouldn't let him rest, telling him of all the horrors that would occur is the rats got in the tunnels.
"Alright, alright! I'm going!" Brokenstar pushed himself shakily to his paws, annoyed.
Jayfeather tilted his head, eyeing Whitewing and Dovewing.
"You know, there are two cats in Starclan whose minds are the same as the Dark forest's; a blank mask."
"I wonder who they are?"
Brokenstar watched Mapleshade enter, relief burning through him. He enjoyed her presence; she was comforting. (This will never be a MaplexBroken. He is really evil, and she is just to far-gone. I just mean that, well, he enjoys her company. Okay, I just made it worse. Point being, there will never be xBroken ever! So don't worry, nothing will come out of this.)
Brokenstar had been forced to live by moves and counter moves. Tigerstar and him had always been playing a dangerous game. Mapleshade hated everyone; she didn't care who lead along as the clan died.
She glanced at him. "A she-cat wants to meet you at the cliff."
"What?"
"She brought Firestar's body."
"What?!"
"Anyways, I suggest you go."
"Oh fine. Not like anything can get worse."
"Oh and one last thing."
"What?"
"Her eyes. They were black."
Dovewing fled from the rats, following the rest of the prisoners into the tunnel.
Tigerstar stared at the she-cat in front of him. Her coal (Yeah, yeah cats don't know what coal is, whateva) black eyes bored into him.
"I'll be there."
Dovewing turned to look at the cats around her. Brokenstar was doing the same. She watched as he slowly turned.
"Dovewing, turn around slowly, and look behind you."
Dovewing did, and she saw them.
There black pelts blended in with the back round, while their white fangs stood out.
Fear clouded her senses.
Rats!