Yeah… I was too harsh again… Here's some Haikus to help you out!
Pelt once pure now torn
Lying barely breathing.
Saviour of my kin.
oOo
Killed by brutal claws
Life cut short before my time.
Had to leave my kits.
oOo
Not a cat that killed me.
But the claws were long and sharp.
Blue eyes closing slowly.
I hope that this helped! Good luck again!