A/N:Sorry if you thought this was an update.
I need reviews if I am going to make this into a legit, actual, story. Keep in mind, my concerns:
1. I havre a story like this already. It's called "Tris and Toby: The Friends That Reunited", and it's better than this story will ever be, because I went in a better direction.
2. If I do publish this into a real story, there will be a lot of comparisons that I don't want. I wrote this story about a year ago, whereas my story "Tris and Toby..." Was written a couple months ago. My writing has improved since then.
3. Finally, there are many unexplored "ifs" in the Divergent fandom I want to explore, such as
-Tobias and Tris legitimately switching AGES, not lives. (That's just too weird.)
-Evelyn (Tobias's mother, for pasycakes who don't know) actually having a kid (reason Marcus kicks her out- I know she wasn't kicked out in the actual book, take a chill pill) and Tris is put in charge of getting the two brothers to cross paths.
-Marcus's past. Why is he such an abusive asshole?
anyways, if you have any suggestions of what I should do for a story, let me know in the Reviews!
be brave!